I'm in a High Martial World, So Why Is This Redemption Story So Off-Track?

It's a very good book. It's quite beautiful. Most of the author's thoughts are very positive. But it's a pity that I came here for Gao Wu, but the author moved the warrior line back again and again. There are always crises in Yuanhai in the news, each time causing huge casualties and losses, but the protagonist still withdraws the warrior option even after experiencing a crisis personally. The choice of the protagonist is essentially the author's tendency, just like a ladybug crawling on paper. People will not directly direct it to go, but the city wall formed by the pen tip falling on the paper guides it to the only way. At present, it seems that Gaowu is just the background, and the crisis is just the driving force. The essence is still a development novel, and it is an industrial development novel under the background of Gaowu, but the focus is not on industrial development but on the process of the protagonist using expanded resources to invest. No Gaowu

It can be seen from the first few chapters that the author has a strong narrative and has a good grasp of the rhythm. It will not make people feel inexplicably fast, nor will it make people feel like it is dragging like a turtle. And the design of the protagonist's golden finger is also very novel (I won't spoil what the golden finger is). It does not make the protagonist stronger, but changes the things around him to make the protagonist stronger step by step (this is currently the case, chapter 71, you can also directly change yourself) Readers can also learn about what is happening in the world through the news in the article, and will not be blinded by the sudden changes in the world. Summary: I can't open my eyes to the bright future of this Gao Wu Wen. If someone asks me to recommend a Gao Wu Wen, I will definitely recommend this one. It's been a long time since I've seen a protagonist with such a charismatic personality. He clearly knows that he only changes the people and things around him for his own sake, but his help truly takes other people's thoughts into consideration. It's not the help without a bottom line like the Virgin, nor the hypocritical charity like a hypocrite, but allows them to truly transform their own thoughts and struggle to regain their lives in the quagmire of endless pain in their souls.

Excellent writing, correct perspective, and interesting plot. I seriously suspect that the author is the reincarnation of a certain boss. If someone reveals the author's nickname, please kick me, please [blowing kiss]

This book is definitely good to read so far, and the various descriptions are very detailed. The plot should be the beginning: a precocious child from a poor working class family at the bottom of a small town. Ending: The majestic and sacred · The only immortal · Brilliant epic · The boundlessness of the eternal legendary kingdom · The vastness · The supreme · The creator of all things and all ways or I am all living beings · Subtraction becomes empty

Putting aside everything else, the author's Chinese language must be very good. From poverty to poverty, and then to poverty, the change of one word brings the golden finger into full play. It's hard to say what kind of book this is, but the plot is quite slow-burning, of a complimentary kind. Personally, I was a little reluctant to see the label of multiple female protagonists, but I still followed it after reading the introduction. A very good-looking industrial novel that develops from scratch? If I'm being picky, this book is relatively slow to gain popularity + 4,000 updates per day, which is one of the few shortcomings. Seeing as the author is about to update 3 times a day, that's okay. By the way, I personally feel that this book is suitable to be placed on the next door platform. I feel that it can get a high-quality brand (3000 per order)

It's great. At first I thought it was just Gao Wuwen who just fell in love, but after watching it, I realized that the protagonist is practicing his own emotional story. It doesn't seem to have so many disgusting and embarrassing plots. After reading the protagonist's attitude towards life, I also benefited a lot. The first part of the novel is relatively dull, but it makes people enjoy reading it. It is not that boring. Then it starts to become exciting. Entering a small climax of the novel, the protagonist's life begins to get better, and the people around him also have their own ideas. It is not so dull. It made me happy. I read it in one night. I still recommend the author of this novel to update it soon [angry]

To be honest, it is difficult to see this kind of novel about the transformation of individual to collective destiny on a popular platform like Tomato. The author's writing is smooth, the plot is well connected, the character's personality changes are not blunt, and he is a protagonist like the sun. I like it very much. The light of communism always shines in all directions.

Good story The modification of one word can make a huge difference. The author's control of "words" is not only reflected in the use of golden fingers, but also integrated into the story. One "word" is a step. Even if the protagonist is still "developing", every modification makes people feel that things are developing for the better, even if there may be oppressive events. It feels like a small seedling in a shanty town that is gradually growing up. It is a work that gives me a sense of satisfaction when I read it. Finally, please update the author quickly! ! !

Very good subject matter, excellent writing style, cultivation style, unlimited potential, the future is full of countless fantasy contents, a healthy and correct protagonist with three views, it can be called tomato white moonlight, people are immersed in it The biggest disadvantage is that there is no sense of security! ! ! This world is too dangerous. You should develop a training system for me. The pace is slow. Although the writing is pretty good, it always feels like a bubble. I think you should make a proper transformation and start to develop your strength and expand with plug-ins. The entries will be expanded from family to family.

*^O^* Here comes Shennong [laugh] [OK] First of all, the author's narrative is very good [like] There are not too many female protagonists in the article (I like to read more female protagonists, but too many female protagonists, but too many are not three-dimensional). The rhythm is also good. The problem is that the description of this ability sometimes includes a lot of settings and sometimes skips. The rhythm of Goldfinger science popularization is too messy [face covering] Another very important point is that there are too many bad jokes. It is okay to insert jokes appropriately, but here is one when comforting others. Oh, I will go. This wave is mine. Is it too dramatic? [What] And if the author intends to slow down the pace, each update must have something novel. He can learn from the authors on the list, otherwise it will be difficult for people to follow the update. Without traffic, I believe the author will definitely not be able to write [eating melon], so the daily routine should be omitted appropriately. No one will read it. The slow pace also needs an outline (you can also arrange an adventure to speed up the speed reasonably). The author will have to stop updating at this speed sooner or later, otherwise it will take a long time to finish [Grief] If there is a heroine, this aspect must be well thought out. It can't be a vase and it can't be too high. It's difficult at the moment. Anyway, good work, author [laugh] [OK] [Summary]: The slow pace is a good article. The disadvantage is that the pace is too slow. Personally, I feel that it is either a break or a two-year start. [Eat melon] There are too many bad stories. The author needs to revise. It is recommended to add a bookshelf to keep on the sidelines [laughing]