I'm a Man! How Am I a Succubus?

The first book I read is Douluo. It is very good. The protagonist is very strong. I hope it will continue to be strong in the future. Hehe (it is not a tomboyish tone). The key point is that there are not too many exaggerated character descriptions! Won't look greasy! This is super good! ! The update hasn't been completed yet, so go ahead and update! !

Baozi, don't be too tired or idle. Write more and it's not enough. The flow of the plot is also great and the characterization is also very good.

A very fragrant article. The stars cannot express my love. The author writes it very well! !

The plot is quite exciting, and the emotional line is also good. However, the writing is a bit immature, and many places are not very reasonable. You need to refer to the background area of ​​the novel to carefully consider, such as some details of the Star Luo Empire, and the shaping of the characters are a bit thin, but overall it is still very good-looking.

The book is very good. It is one of the few books that is very suitable to my taste. It's not that I don't give five stars, it's just to suppress the rating.

It's really good to read. If you hate official cps, I don't recommend reading it. The author's writing style is also very good and the content is quite interesting. I highly recommend it [shy][shy][shy]

Haha, your words are really funny and elegant, which makes people feel happy. Since Your Excellency is so sincere, I will give you a few responses. The little girl is just an ordinary person, there is no way she comes from a wealthy family. However, it is a pleasure to drink a pot of turbid wine with you under the moonlight. As for writing poems, although the little girl is not talented, she is still willing to endure the hardship and chant the wind and moon with you. As for the saying that the golden wind and jade dew win over countless people as soon as they meet, it is really too flattering to the little woman. I am just a child of the world, there is no such thing as a hero or a beauty. However, it is a blessing to meet you. Since the moonlight is so beautiful tonight, how about we just have a drink and enjoy the beautiful scenery together?

[Shy] I finally found a Douluo fan that suits my taste! Follow till death! The writing is a little dull, but it has interesting plot points. There are some minor flaws in the plot, but they are innocuous. Overall, I like it very much. ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑Let's have a look again

It looks good, and it scores high points, but there are a few shortcomings. I think Aze can be a bit more exposed to rain and dew. When he is in the Shura field, he is completely facing Tang San, which is a bit unsuitable for the characteristics of Neptune.

What does this article say? The only characters in it are the protagonist and the people the protagonist needs, and everyone else revolves around the protagonist. The characters are relatively flat. And it doesn't feel like All. It's approaching with a purpose to deceive others' sincerity. If you don't point it out, it's okay, but if you point it out, it will give people a feeling, a bit like the stallion in the male video novel. And wasn't he a straight man in the beginning? It's okay to use that emotional value to write in a way that the straight man's attack is not serious. After all, I saw that there was shock in the front and these can be added. But he gives people the impression that after getting the system, he will collect beautiful women all the way. [Thinking] It's a bit of a sexual transformation routine, but in the trap of a Douluo.