A Lighter and Mint Candy

How should I put it? It was very complicated after reading it. This is how I felt after reading the book for the first time. At first, I thought it was a mutual healing between a gentle and beautiful good girl and a boy who appears to be sunny but actually has an unhappy family. Later, when Deng Deng and Jiang Jianian got together, I didn't feel happy. It's not that Jiang Jianian is not good. On the contrary, he is very good and the male protagonist of youth novels. But in my heart, I feel that Deng Deng should be with a sunny boy. But in fact, she and Jiang Jianian are rare. They accompany each other all the way and come together naturally. A gentle and ordinary life is hard to come by. He didn't have much feelings for Wang Mingyuan. The misfortune of his family had caused great harm to him, but he was lucky enough to meet the gentle and kind-hearted Deng Deng. The deliberately disguised sunshine allowed Deng Deng to lay down a "salvation" rope into his muddy life. However, instead of grabbing it, he "scratched" Deng Deng's hand holding the other end of the rope again and again. It was not until those hands were full of scars that he lost the rope and he wanted to crawl out of the mud. At first, I had a trace of regret after he woke up, but some of his actions in college later made me treat him... I can accept that he is not good enough for Deng Deng, but I cannot accept that he is not good enough for Deng Deng. Such a kind Deng Deng has given him opportunities again and again, but he still can't control himself and hurt Deng Deng. Maybe no one taught him how to love people, maybe he can't be very good to Deng Deng from the bottom of his heart. I hope Dengdeng and Carnival will always be happy. I hope Mingyuan wakes up early next time and meets his own "dengdeng".

It's pretty good, but I think the timeline of the main text is a bit too fast, which makes people feel more dramatized. But I think the extras are very well written. The extras written from the male protagonist's perspective are very detailed. The shortcomings of the previous male protagonists have also been filled in. The writing style is also very good, and there is room for improvement. I look forward to your next work. The reason for the timeline may be that the author writes mostly short stories, so he can go through them quickly.

It's pretty good. It would be better to add Jiang Jianian as an extra. He should also have his own secret love history, right? Quite curious