National Fate: From the Start, I Die Remonstrating, and Ancestor Li Er Is Stunned

It's so beautiful, even though it's an act, but it's such a good knife, wow wow wow, I'll cry to death "So this road should not be taken by you." Ye Weiqing raised his head suddenly and his pupils shrank. "Your Majesty is a body of ten thousand gold and the Lord of destiny. Your hands must not be stained with blood, and your holy name must not bear the slightest dust." Mu Zibai slowly knelt down and saluted Ye Weiqing for the third time tonight. "I will take this road." "I will bear all the infamy." "I will resist all blood debts." "My lord, I am willing to use the sword in your majesty's hand to kill all the villains. I am also willing to be the shield in front of your majesty to block all open and hidden arrows." "My lord, I only want one thing." "When I become a powerful traitor, a national traitor, and a sycophant among the people of the world, when everyone in the world asks Your Majesty to kill me to thank the world..." Mu Zibai raised his head, his eyes were calmer than ever before. "Please, Your Majesty, kill me with your own hands." [When the trumpet of victory blows, and when the iron hooves of the foreigners recede, the 'sword' stained with filth and sin will no longer be of use.] [Thousands of people petitioned, and hundreds of officials submitted reports, all saying: 'Until the horsetail dies, the country will never have peace! '] [The emperor who promised to live and die together, the 'brother' who personally handed over the sword and private seal to him, finally chose the world and abandoned his 'brothers'.] [He acquiesced to that trial, acquiesced to the rebuke of all people, acquiesced to his 'brother', and was beheaded under the Suzaku Sect.]

It's quite interesting. The two time travelers competed with each other's acting skills, and then used the sky projection method to shock the ancients, and then mixed in the setting of the national destiny. I felt that the writing was okay.

The setting is very good! ƪ(˘⌣˘)ʃElegant It's just that the male protagonist has a female protagonist, but I don't like it very much. It would be better if there is no cp It just might be a bit confusing. Historically, the male protagonist of the National Games and the system canopy are piled together, and then why can the canopy be selected for live broadcast, and then there is no explanation of its use. . Of course, maybe I didn't see it now!!

It's beautiful, and the words are powerful. Although I know it's an act, I can't help but shed tears.

It's very beautiful, and the author you write very well. The protagonist is very vividly described, and his loyalty and patriotism are particularly well written.

Overall, it's pretty good. To be more objective, I wanted to give it four stars. To encourage the author, I decided to give it five stars⭐️ I won't talk about the advantages. You should be able to feel it in other book reviews, and it can give readers a certain emotional value (I read novels just to cry and laugh~ I won't worry too much anyway) It's just that Mu Zibai (Puppet No. 1) Came off the assembly line so quickly, but Mu Zi Yu and Mu Zi Dingguo (Puppet No. 3 And No. 4) Were too slow. The two-line perspective was cut, and the possible future development of Ye Weiqing and Mu Zi Yu was specially written. Live broadcast viewers of other dynasties let Ye Weiqing receive a prompt, and the "emotional line" of the two Muzi brothers was added. Is it a bit confusing? It's not broken yet, let's take a look at the follow-up development (I like to ignore all kinds of unreasonable things). The test between the monarch and his ministers is a bit unclear. Why does Ye Weiqing always want to confirm whether the other party is a fellow countryman?

From the current point of view, the whole book is good and okay. I am a bit lacking in language at the moment, so I really think this book is well written. Anyway, I quite like it. The author's writing style is quite delicate. I think he portrayed each character very well. I think the portrayal of the protagonist Mu Zibai is really good. He is a time traveler and he will do whatever it takes to achieve his own goals. Although Ye Weiqing is also a time traveler, he is also ruthless and will do whatever it takes to achieve his own goals. They both have intentions, but their goals are different. But now the ending is undecided, and I can't comment on it, but judging from the current trend, I think it's pretty good. You can wait a little, and you can look at the front first, and then take care of the back. I really recommend it, it's really beautiful.

Well, I think it's okay. But only future generations will know about the eternal injustice. I think this Muzi family should be loyal and loyal in the eyes of the current world. He shouldn't be considered a loyal man, after all, he is called a handsome man. At least you have to clean yourself up in this world before you can be considered a loyal person.

I quite like it, it looks good. At least it's not too outrageous. I've read a boy's video about ancient tactics before, and it seems like it's time travel. The first sentence of the chapter is, if a friend comes from afar, he will be killed no matter how far away he is. Some of the authors don't seem to have even had a primary school diploma. Most of the authors are already very good. Keep up the good work! It feels a bit weird, inexplicable, and needs to be improved

Yes, the current problem is that the protagonist is destined to change his identity, but the predecessor of the general's identity is CS (I'll tell you the truth, I'll tell you the truth, the circle can't come back). Although the sky has led to the family's blocking, it is really difficult to write how to compensate for the temporary identity of the heroine. If the predecessor's actions are retained, the emotional line is not enough to explode (not a classic, but a SARS) ( ^ ∇ ^ ) ﾉ♪, other people got angry when they saw it 😏 ( ^ . _ . ^ ) ﾉ: Ha!