Love Apartment: The Love Apartment in My Heart

It's considered average among the love apartment fanfics. There is no particularly well-written fanfic about iPartment, whether it's Tomato or Qidian. Generally speaking, there are three categories The first category is urban cool stories, which usually involve pretentious pretense and multi-female harems. At this time, the worst ones are not worth reading because they are written by party urban cool stories. Why don't I just read better ones of this type? The second type is a bland narrative, usually adding a heroine to follow the plot. The bad ones are just a running account. The good ones have deviations where the protagonist and the heroine join the plot, which is the case with most fan fiction. The third category is the love apartment world plus other worlds to create attractions, such as movie variety shows, Pokémon, etc. Why are there so many iPartment fans that don't write well? I think it's a matter of positioning. The positioning of iPartment is plot comedy. Do you want to write cool articles? Putting aside the problem, the male protagonists of the original sitcom are already a great story. Your best friend is by your side and your favorite person is opposite you. Do you write about literary youth? Isn't it NC to write sitcoms about all kinds of troubled young people? The bigger problem is that in writing, in the end, the protagonist's own situation will appear, and other situations will be used as sitcoms and reality exploration. For example, in this book, we will study the situation of Xin Ling and analyze whether there is someone behind Teacher Zeng, etc. However, the relationship between the protagonist and Dali is obviously a situation that only appears in sitcoms. This is a contradiction. If it is not done well, this contradiction will be magnified. More importantly, the essence of iPartment is a sitcom, that is, comedy plus love elements, or a group portrait. This leads to the fact that everyone in the show is handsome sometimes and sometimes gets teased. However, the protagonist of the novel will not be teased or deflated. The protagonist himself cannot reflect any comedy elements. This is basically the case in all fan fiction. The protagonist will not be pranked or deflated like in the original drama. It is the most win-win situation, and the protagonist knows that he has a purpose and wants to be like this. This means that the protagonist and the heroine are always in a transcendental position, and they are absolutely infallible and will not have any conflicts. The relationship is always peaceful and moving forward. This is not to say that this is not possible, but it requires extremely strong writing skills to write well. Most people do not have it, and the transcendent status makes the protagonist never be able to integrate into the apartment no matter how he creates an original plot or a naturally interjected plot.

For me, this is the best one. It's not copy and paste, it's not AI dialogue, the characters have emotions. And some reasonable plots developed for the development of the plot have been removed. For example, Zhang Wei was encouraged to attend a wedding and was still the bridesmaid! Normally, it wouldn't happen.

The writing is very good. The author has a very iPartment flavor. I have read many iPartment fan novels. I can't say that yours is the best but it is definitely the most flavorful. Come on💪Keep it up💪

Give me a five-star encouragement. As we all know, iPartment is the story of a group of bourgeois young people. Many authors who write love apartment fanfics will give the protagonist a similar setting, such as having wealth and freedom at the beginning, or being a rich second generation. But in this book, the protagonist is a financial tycoon who has invested in many well-known companies, almost the same as the richest man. In this way, the identity of the protagonist has been separated from the class of the little bourgeoisie. Mixing in the protagonist group of the love apartment makes it feel like an adult playing with a child. Other than that, it's ok. The author will not only write the story that happened in the original plot, but also add stories written by the author's own ideas.

I like reading it, Dali Wen feels the best. Not pretty.

It's a very good apartment novel. I've read a lot of novels. This one can be said to be a good quality novel. Every character is very realistic.

This book is very good, but I think the author has no foreshadowing. Dali is an absolutely rational woman, such as: "Huh? This is quite interesting." Dali looked at the sleepwalking Zhang Wei in front of him with his eyes shining brightly. As he walked towards Zhang Wei, he suddenly felt an extremely cold gaze. She turned around and saw Chen Fei looking at herself and Zhang Wei indifferently. His eyes were like looking at the people in the story, right! Just like the people watching the story, they don't have any emotions at all. She didn't understand why her boyfriend became like this. A boyfriend like this made her feel inexplicably afraid! "What's wrong with you?" Dali looked at Chen Fei worriedly and asked. Chen Fei's indifferent gaze slowly shifted to Dali's face, and the glare made Dali's heart ache! "Husband, what's wrong with you! What are you thinking about?" Dali stepped forward and took Chen Fei's arm to act coquettishly. "Huh? Ah! What's wrong, my dear wife! What happened?" Chen Fei looked at the cute girl in front of him and didn't understand why! "Hey? What happened? Isn't Zhang Wei sleepwalking? Dali seems to be interested in Zhang Wei's sleepwalking, so can I pretend to be sleepwalking? Hey~ (¯▽¯~) Hehehe, there's something wrong." (Small white space) "Ahem! Honey, I'm fine. What happened?"

It seems good at the moment, but don't force Yu Mo and Zhang Wei to get together. A woman of the new era, who has all kinds of skin care products and cosmetics. She spends a lot of money to buy these things, and she won't fall in love until the fifth season. Another stingy person, although he is a real man, but at first glance, they have opposite quality of life. Don't put them together, it really won't be good.

This is the best book I have ever read (still updating) with Dali as the heroine.

All I can say is that this is not gold, it can only be valuable ore. One of the fanfics you can read is at the coarse level. What can I say~, I thought it was okay at first, but as I get to the end it becomes more and more difficult to explain - and to be honest, I usually give four to five stars to iPartment fanfics! This one actually broke my record! !