Demon Slayer: Saving the Butterfly Sisters Too Is Only Natural

Dear readers, the author has made adjustments to the work in response to recent feedback. This is what it looks like. First, the battle between the hand ghost and the real wild rice has been optimized, so that the protagonist's plot of pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger has been modified and can be eaten normally. Second, there is the problem of the second time traveler mentioned by many readers. It goes like this. The author has made major changes and changed the time traveler to the local aboriginal. In terms of the system, it is a defection system. There is no problem. Although the change may have some minor problems with the subsequent connection, I also ask for your understanding. Please give the author a thumbs up and let the author go up so that more people can see [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] If there are any problems in the future, the author will leave a message under this book review, thank you for your support [laughing][laughing] Regarding the suggestions provided by the Baozi for reading, the author believes that it is really reasonable, and the author did not consider it well and affected the Baozi's reading sense. Therefore, the author made the following changes. When Chengfeng's junior brother went to Tengxi Mountain, he did not kill Qiaoer in the end, but seriously injured him. Secondly, the author writes about multiple female protagonists, so the official original couple will inevitably be separated. At the same time, special female characters such as Tianyin and Kuizhi need to be seen by Baozi. Baozi can like it if they support it, or comment if they do not support it. The above is the revised version this time. Of course, if Baozi finds that some chapters have fewer words to read, it is normal, because Shen He is not good enough. Please forgive me [full] [full]

How to put it this way, I think it's pretty good-looking, but it's a little bit poisonous in some places. In terms of emotions, it can be optimized a bit. Kissing happens every now and then, even kissing on the lips is bad. It can be optimized. In terms of daily love, it doesn't have to be hugging and something that can be reflected. Watching kisses every day is a bit repetitive, and if there is no freshness, it will be a bit boring. Also, with Tianyin, there is something... The small head dominates the big head, which affects the viewing experience. It is not easy to bring in, and it is a bit uncomfortable to watch. The main thing is that I'm not that perverted and can't do this kind of thing. I can win Tianyin, but there are some problems with the writing. It will be better if I polish it more. Double time-travelers, as long as they are not specialized in multi-traveling, the kind of system cultivating immortal families, and time-traveling writings, they are all poisonous and very influential. You are okay with this, but there is not much plot in that thing. Besides, this complex component feels a little overwritten, and it seems to have an impact, although not too much. Think of the first book as a way to accumulate experience, and write the next one well. The outline, general outline, chapter outline, character relationships, etc. Should be written in advance. In short, it depends on personal habits. If it doesn't work, go to station b and read the tutorials, learn more and read more. I think it looks pretty good, okay, come on.

I was looking forward to this list after reading the introduction, but I felt a little bit off after reading it. The male protagonist is too decent, righteous, kind-hearted, and sentimental. The saying "a gentleman can be bullied" should be the male protagonist. Such a male protagonist can't imagine how he ended up accepting so many ghost girls, including Wuxian (he didn't dare to look back, for fear that he wouldn't be able to reconcile). So far, the writing up to Er Kill Zero is quite good. It's just a bit different from my psychological expectations. What's even more strange is Boss Cao's style. He would rather teach me to betray the world than teach the world to betray me.

It looks great, a multi-heroine harem is great! Although there are other second-generation content. But the main plot is still good. Worth appreciating

It's so good to watch. Come on, I hope the author doesn't stop talking [blowing kisses]

I have only watched one movie before I finished the original book, the one in Infinite City, but I think this book is quite good. I also like writing myself, and I want to be a writer in the future. My concept of writing is perfection. Even if there are some disappointments in the middle, the ending must be happy, and everyone must be well (at least they are all resurrected in the extra story). This book is very suitable for my taste. Come on, author, there are no books that are not wonderful, only irresponsible authors.

Look! The author updates three times a day on average, which is quite satisfying, but the articles are a bit yellow [laughter]

A very high-quality Demon Slayer fanfic, the author is very obedient [Like]

I have collected it very much. This book is so beautifully written that I want to read a word every day and I don't want to miss it.

The writing is very good. I like watching the two-dimensional version.