I Make Pokemon Games in Honkai: Star Rail

There is no CP for the time being + the plot design is good = super good-looking~ However, some comments seem to hope that there will be a female protagonist. I personally hope that all members will be friendly and have no CP~ It depends on what the author writes in the future, but for now it is still a good-looking Pokémon~(¯▽¯~) The cutest one How should I put it, the protagonist used his ability to materialize Pokémon costume 13 and asked Ruan Mei to make the Pokémon, which was a bit shocking to me. It's okay to write about making games (the part about Gui Naifen that made people complain before has been changed) For me, this novel can only be read in a skip, but it's not worth following.

It's pretty good to keep this pace, come on. As for the heroine mentioned in the comment section, I don't really want to watch it. I came here to watch the introduction to see elves and bonds and communicate with friends, not to watch love. If I want to watch love, I should click in to watch elves. I can go directly to the heartthrob next door. I am looking forward to the plot of Yishou Xinghejing, which is abstract + funny + bonding + CD pair. I can't imagine how delicious the rice will be. Support the new book with five stars

Apart from anything else, it is brave to dare to combine these two IPs, and I will give it 5 stars directly. Moreover, so far, the characters appearing are not OOC as expected, and the descriptions of the battles between elves are pretty good. Except that the number of people is a bit small, the universe does not have such a small population, and it needs to be updated quickly. The author is locked in a small dark room, 10 chapters a day, and if he does not finish it, he will be whipped with a small whip [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh] [sneaky laugh]

The joy of the protagonist is really right. It creates a Pokémon game world, guides real fighting emotions, and creates a passionate fighting atmosphere. It is so joyful! ! [Laughing][laughing][laughing]

The best Pokémon story among Star Iron fans, the best Star Iron story among Pokémon fans [Learned], because it is a self-created plot rather than an adaptation of the original plot, so it will not be boring. At the same time, the design of the battle is also very good, which is better than many articles that specialize in writing about Pokémon, and it does not limit the word count of combat, so the details are appropriate. The Star Iron characters aren't overtly OOC either. I just hope it doesn't get cut in half. It's a pity that the League Battle and Gorgeous Contest chapters are a bit too long. Especially the Gorgeous Contest, which has been covered for dozens of chapters. There is no plot, just describing the performance scene.

The plot design is really good, the combination of Bentie and Pokémon is also a bold innovation, the Pokémon battle game is also well done, and the protagonist's ability projection has more operations. In the happy life, the protagonist should be from the Candy Knight faction [eat melon]

It looks good. Come on, author. Can you change the lightning rod of the Super Lizard King? [Smile]

666 Start making the game "Honkai. The Spirit of Karma"

It's great. I heard that the protagonist of the previous offline Masters was cheating. This was really a bad batch. But luckily it had been changed when I saw it. It will continue to be absolutely awesome in the future. I'm still waiting for the wisdom to be realized. I feel like a new race of Pokémon can be created in the future? It depends on how the author spreads his thinking. After all, virtual intelligence has not yet been realized, let alone an independent individual such as an omnic. It can be said that I am looking forward to the follow-up development. Come on, author.

In general, the subject matter is novel, the imagination is wide-open, the writing is fluent, and the pace in the front is too fast, but it does not affect the development of the story. The main plot of Bengtie is dragging, but I feel that the author will not focus on the main plot at all, and the main body of this novel is the selling point, which is the Pokémon battle in another world that is also the world view of Bentie. Therefore, readers who like Pokémon should like to read it more. It will be more comfortable to read if both Pokémon and Iron Breaker are involved. Because this work shows Pokémon battles in a game rather than a popular science or advent article, it is not the point at all whether you are a beast master or a Pokémon trainer, or whether Pokémon battles are good or not, because this is a game. For the time being, the game has not yet reached the required level of intelligent technology in the story, so the character and emotions of Pokémon have not been specifically expressed so far. We look forward to the follow-up development and hope that this will not collapse. I don't know why the rating is low, maybe! The reason is that some readers did not see what they wanted to see about Pokémon written in the Bentie worldview. Another problem is that the author is too slow to update. I am afraid that I will abandon the book that day. I usually send more than 1,000 reminders for updates. I hope to update a few more chapters. [Send heart][Send heart]