Sunday: Starting with Attack on Titan, I Set Out to Redeem the World

The nerfs were too severe. Not only was their power reduced, but their rank was also reduced. Sunday is the Gemini of Order, how could he be inferior to the rank of a native of a planet?

Well… how should I put it? Tomato's writing style is unparalleled (at least in my reading experience). This style has obvious strengths and weaknesses; it's highly engaging for readers, but it's also difficult for Tomato to attract a large readership. Personally, I think the biggest problem is Toriyama's personality and combat strength.

There's a lot of repetition. I think the most important thing about an article, like products on a production line, is quality control; at the very least, the content shouldn't be repetitive, author... The content is good, but there's a lot of repetition. It's like how whether a product is good or not is secondary.

I initially thought the altered persona would be made funnier or crazier, but it turned out to be a thug and hooligans 😅 On Sunday, he doesn't speak without spouting all sorts of profound truths, and while he has a bit of a humor, he never uses profanity 😅

It's great! Although the wording is a bit repetitive and somewhat verbose, the flaws don't detract from its overall quality. Keep up the good work! (I really love the Sunday and Attack on Titan collaboration concept; please keep updating!)

The writing is very good, and the Sunday theme here has a stronger sense of divinity 💕. However, there are a lot of repetitive sentences, and the repetition makes it a bit tiring to read. I even thought it was a problem with my phone.

This book is acceptable for Tomato, given its decent writing style, but it's overdone. It's overly ornate, with excessive and exaggerated vocabulary, giving it a flashy but impractical feel. There's too much repetitive description; some descriptions could be summed up in a single sentence, but they're stretched out into a long paragraph.

This book is so tedious to read. You can tell the author put a lot of effort into creating a Sunday atmosphere, but if you don't have the writing style, don't make it so verbose!

It's a captivating story about a god who falls to earth and creates unpredictable events within a seemingly inevitable, cyclical plot.

The author is amazing! Does the author always have to translate titles into classical Chinese first? And thinking about it carefully, from other people's perspectives, isn't Sunday just a riddle?