Reborn to Reach the Pinnacle of Martial Arts with Him

It's very good to watch, the plot is very smooth, and the upgrade flow is very enjoyable [like] [like]. But the emotional line is really slow [laughing] [laughing], and now the two male protagonists give me the feeling that Yang Xiuming is like He Xuan's little brother. What kind of monkey year and horse month will it take for their relationship to change [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] [crazy] By the way, I want to ask the author, am I on the wrong side? He Xuan should be attacking, right? This should be our main article, right? [Eat melon][eat melon]

It is indeed a great story about men. The two male protagonists are neither sissy nor saintly men at the moment. The plot progresses very quickly and lacks a lot of details, which is a shortcoming for me. For example, many of the battle establishment systems, academy scale rules, etc. Are not written; and then there are the four big opportunities obtained. In addition to the sword and some tests, the other three ways to obtain it are a drama to me. Love is exactly the same, the soul is still there, asking to be passed on, but it disappears after a few words, making it very stale. Whether it is the way to obtain opportunities or the bad guys in it, they are all very stereotyped, including the betrayal by both the lover and the friend at the beginning. What's more, the two of them have some signs of a relationship, but it's a bit stiff. From the beginning, it gave people the feeling of being brothers in life and death. Suddenly, they felt embarrassed to sleep together and pulled up the progress bar. Maybe the author saw that some people in the comment area disliked the slow progress of the relationship. I think it would be better to make it longer according to the current plot progress, and I especially hate Mid-Spring 💊 and other such things, but looking at the trailer..., There is a black line on the face. Fortunately, the author's writing style is okay, he is not a novice, and the protagonist is more decisive in killing. Currently, except for traditional Chinese medicine, there are no other big bugs that cannot be tolerated.

It's well written, quite enjoyable, and the writing style is okay. There are just too many people who look down on the male protagonist. Forget about the test. Going to the assessment requires struggling with a steward for a long time, but this can be regarded as a classic plot of a male channel. But the male protagonist has a pretty good character.

The author is great, and the writing is very good. Like before, just follow your own pace. Don't worry too much about suggestions. It's you who are writing, not the readers. Just express the story you want. This is the best. I am also a writer. I firmly believe that I will be satisfied when I finish writing the story I wanted to write at the beginning. It is good to want to write better, but writing a book? There is always a process. The more you write, the better your writing will naturally become. I also like male videos with dual male protagonists. Do you have any recommendations? Can't find what I want to see. It's very distressing =_=

It has such a strong flavor of ancient male characters. When I was young, I wanted to take a bite of this setting with dual male protagonists. Now, the old boy has finally tried it.

Thank you to the author for his diligent creation. There are really very few dual-male protagonists who write male porn stories. I give a thumbs up to the author for his innovative attempt. Next is my evaluation of this article. This article gave me an ancient feeling of cool male porn, like the ancient Xiao Yan version of a boy. 30 Years in Hedong and 30 Years in Hexi Don't bully young people into poverty, and the remnant soul of the ancient ancient cauldron of chaos reminded me of Yao Lao, and it made me very dramatic, so the plot gave me a very old-fashioned and ancient feeling. You feel like you will guess what the plot is in the next second? -_-|| It's very unattractive. The only highlight is the two male protagonists in this article, but there are very few emotional scenes before chapter 50. I feel that I can't stand the first 50 chapters. In short, the plot is not attractive enough. The male protagonist's character setting is too boring, and the protagonist's appearance is too late. It is difficult to attract readers if the previous article is not engaging and attractive. I can recommend the author to try the two male protagonists of the beast-control style, the two male protagonists who change jobs around the world, and the two male protagonists who counterattack to harvest the protagonist's destiny...

At first, I was attracted to the two male protagonists, but from the introduction, it seemed like a fantasy novel in ancient Chinese, which happened to be a genre I also like to read. Although I know that this kind of novel generally has less emotional lines. Yes, Shou appears in chapter 50, and I only kissed the male protagonists three times after reading the 300th chapter. It is not suitable for those who want to see more emotional lines, but it is ok for those who want to read a refreshing novel with a little emotional line. For Shuangwen, the whole article is still very smooth and not verbose, but the more I read the emotional portrayal later, the more I feel like brothers. You protect me and I protect you, the two of them are portrayed upright... At first, I thought Shou was a cold-blooded young man, but I don't know why he was portrayed like a big boss🤷‍♀️, but after all, they are two fantasy heroes, okay, I accept it.

Very good-looking. He is the male protagonist of a popular novel that has been upgraded to a male channel. Moreover, his image is not that of a delicate, graceful or thin figure. He is a handsome and strong swordsman. The most unexpected thing is that his identity is not a son of a noble family, a Celestial Dragon, but a commoner and a powerful swordsman. It's great. It really fits the mood.

It is a very different book. The characters are outstanding and the plot is smooth. It is a two-male protagonist novel in the male-video genre. The two male protagonists are constantly upgrading. The relationship between the two is also very sweet. It is not an industrial saccharine, but a long-lasting relationship. They can protect each other and are a true duo.

It's so good to read, it's not love at first sight, it's love that grows over time. I came here because I am 50/50 focused on my career and my relationship. I really think it's good. I hope to update 5 chapters every day [I've learned it]