I Went Home for a Visit and Accidentally Became Famous

First of all, the plot of the novel itself is very exciting, and the setting of the protagonist is also very unique. I have never seen it before. The subject matter is quite novel, and the various descriptions are quite accurate. I hope that the subsequent plots will also be exciting. The description of how the protagonists get along after they get together is also very nice [laughing], and the description of the pets is also very good. I fell in love with it and felt that I am not afraid anymore [face covering]. The writing is really magical. Secondly, the description of the relationship between the protagonists is not comprehensive, and there are relatively few descriptions, which makes everyone feel that the protagonist's love is a bit inexplicable. Although the author writes about love at first sight, the early development is too fast, and there is not much description, which makes people less immersed in watching and feeling less (the feeling of being unable to describe [face covering]). Then, I felt that the plot was not very coherent, and the transitions were a bit abrupt. Some chapters gave me the feeling that they were written directly based on feelings rather than following the previous chapter. A bit out of context. Sometimes I feel like there are some places in a chapter that don't connect, and it always feels weird, like there are flaws in the middle. There is a slight problem with sentence fragmentation in some places, and sometimes it doesn't make sense. Finally, I hope the author can update dozens of chapters so that I can't get enough of the rest of it, or not at all. I also hope that the subsequent plot can also be exciting

It's really a mysterious group, which makes people yearn for but also scares away... My favorite in this novel is Xiao Jin, Golden Dragon Gu, King of Ten Thousand Gu~ and Bungara Xiao Yin~ and raven Chi Jin~ and Jiao Kui Xiao Yan~ and Tai Pan Pan Pan~ and Xuan Ying~ and Arnold~ and Gu Yan...

It's beautiful and has a very novel setting. At least this is my first time seeing it. I personally recommend it.

I like it so much. Please write, write, write, write. I want to take a look. [Shy]

Oh, I finished reading another book. It's still sweet. Everything is written very simply. There are Miao doctors and Gu Chong, but there are very few. There are also relatively few in the entertainment industry. Variety shows and filming are not even as detailed as the extra love story later. The conflict in the middle is about the traitor in the village. Such a thing appeared inexplicably, something else was inserted in the middle, and then it was solved inexplicably [face covering]. Generally speaking, maybe because of the short story, five stars are given to the protagonist.

Record it in 7.2 Currently. The good intentions are not over yet. To be honest, I feel that I can write more details, because in fact, some of the content directly skips some timelines. Although it is still very interesting, I am still looking forward to the story between the police chief and Arnold (yes, I really like dogs... It can be regarded as catching up to the end in one go. An An and Sheng Sheng must always be happy ♥

It looks good, I like the abilities of the protagonist, and the story is also exciting. I look forward to the follow-up😍😍

The fried chicken looks great in big letters, come on, big letters [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

The structure is very clear and the characters are very three-dimensional! The story of the protagonist is not straightforward. The emotional lines of both parties are really clearly written! Super poke me XP! It's really, really, really beautiful!

Ah Jiu and Ah Sheng, love lovers who run in both directions, may your story be like the breeze in the mountains, like the setting sun on the long river, and never end. Wish you 99 [blowing kiss]! ! !