The Outcast: Starting With the Ox Talisman, Xia He Begs for Mercy Until Her Voice Is Gone

Yes, Xia He, Feng Baobao, Feng Shayan and other original female protagonists have all been accepted. To be honest, this is just for the protagonist to accept the female protagonist. As long as you don't give away the female protagonist, you can write whatever you want. If you like multiple female protagonists, you can read it. It's very good.

I've read all the forty-eight chapters, it's pretty good [laughing][laughing][laughing] My favorite with many heroines [laughing][laughing] The protagonist's spells, magic energy, and golden finger mask are also very good [laughing][laughing][laughing] As for the plot, although it follows the original plot, the protagonist has a strong presence, and some plot changes have made it seem very coherent and smooth [laughing][laughing][laughing] As for someone who may She is said to be the nanny of the little virgin, but actually that doesn't really count. [Chigua] [Chigua] The protagonist is originally a classmate of the little virgin, and the original plot also requires contact with the little virgin. It's okay to improve the little virgin a little bit [Chigua] [Chigua] [Chigua] Anyway, as long as the protagonist's presence is maintained [Chigua] [Chigua] [Chigua] Come on, try hard to update, so little is not enough [Chigua] [Chigua] [Chigua]

Come on, author, the writing is very beautiful. As long as you don't pretend that the demonic energy of fire and the demonic energy of the moon are combined and you try your best, you can't defeat the master of heaven.

Looking forward to the follow-up, treat Zhang Chulan harshly, or even kill him directly when he is about to get there. The person's set up is not very clear. Treat the things and people you care about, be warm, gentle, considerate, pampering, tolerant and understanding... Except for oneself, everyone and everything should be kept indifferent and at a distance. There is also the improvement of the female and power system. A woman needs a heroine who can walk alongside the protagonist and manage the harem. The power system can follow the path of laws and three flowers, and the core can go inward to open up itself and its own universe... Integrate and optimize various abilities without too many bells and whistles. The image of the Black Shadow Corps needs to be optimized, such as bad guys, Jinyiwei, Xuanming Cult... After all, I personally find the image of ninja quite disgusting, and in the future, I will travel through God-killing, Armored Warrior, Super God, Super Beast... That's all I can think of for the time being🤔

It's good to read. I love reading it. When I saw it was a fanfic with the main character named Gu Qingci, I knew it was right. It's my cup of tea. However, the author has failed to finish several of them. It's such a pity. I hope the author can make this one longer.

Very good. This is one of the novels about aliens that I have read. The subject matter is relatively novel. The author has also integrated some settings from "The Adventures of Jackie Chan". The language and text are also relatively fluent. It is a novel with great potential. I hope the author will continue to work hard [Blow kiss] [Love]

I have read a few one-person novels with spells. My favorite one is about the dealings with the Shadow Corps. I prefer a novel about villains, pretending to be ninjas in their childhood and stealing things. The image of this thing is no different from a hot potato. A bunch of shadow ninjas come out, and the decent protagonist uses this ability. It's a big effort by the author not to be regarded as a small life. I just saw the protagonist fighting Zhang Lingyu with a shadow ninja, and I haven't seen the back yet. The younger generation of aliens may not think so much, but the older generation of aliens who came from that era cannot not doubt the protagonist, right?

It's a typical multi-girl romance, more lighthearted and funny, which suits my taste.

Not bad. As long as I can continue writing and finish it normally, my grades won't be too bad. The beginning and the end seem to have been written by two people

Genuine, pure and cool, the female giant has Feng Baobao, a rare heroine.