Heaven Does Not Perch

The writing is very good, more plot would be better. The heroine's character is a bit like Nan Xian, which is to my liking. I hope that the heroine will always be like this, high above Bai Yueguang, without cp, just in the clouds all the time.

Um, it seems that the author's writing style is quite good, and he seems to want to write a big-picture novel, but 🍅 in fact, it is too young, and the vocabulary is too gorgeous, and most people can't understand it. I hope the author can improve it. Seeing that the author likes ancient style, I would like to send a message to the author: "Quality wins over literature, which leads to wildness, and writing over quality leads to history." Good luck, author.

Come on, work hard to update! It looks good, and the heroine's character appeals to my heart. Remember to keep it free! ! ! Come on!

Not much plot can be seen in the flowery words. . I have read Chapter 37. It is actually quite long [currently in the process of being drafted], but the plot line is about joining the sect, getting to know my senior brother, entering the secret realm, inheriting the book, and laying down some foreshadowing. From the introduction, there is no cp, but I personally feel that I am a bit ambiguous with my senior brother (personal opinion [sending my heart]) When we first meet each other and interact with each other, the corners of our mouths will curve, the heartbeat will rise and fall, and then we will be indifferent to other people [what] Each person's appearance and actions are described in particularly detailed ways. It may be that the main character is cold and cold, and it is difficult to describe it in language, making it inconvenient for abstract jokes and causing a lack of traffic. Maybe in the later stage we can create a lively treasure or something to create a lively atmosphere (?) This kind of writing looks very comfortable at first glance, like a gorgeous massage and bath. After reading it for a long time, the plot is a bit delayed and I feel very irritated. It may be due to the fast pace of the fast era [Thinking] But overall, the biggest advantage of the article is that it is very gorgeous (eh? This review is a bit like the sentence "Life is a gorgeous robe, covered with lice". I can't remember the original sentence, and it has nothing to do with this book [Blow a kiss])

I spent one night reading more than 70 chapters of the current update. This writing is really the best I have ever read in foreign persimmons. The characters, plots, psychological scenes are interspersed smoothly and naturally. I think the plot is also full of climaxes and ups and downs. The character of the protagonist is very interesting. If it is not the Virgin Against Heaven, the charming design of thousands of people will not collapse. It is really well written, and the description technique can be used as a model article. However, the protagonist is only 1.6 Meters tall... Although there is a reason, can we make her longer later? The height of the heroine cannot be inferior. As for the emotional line of this book, I actually very much prefer the main heroine to have no cp because based on my current reading experience, I feel that such a layer-by-layer analysis and solution of problems will benefit me, and the fight will be merciless. The protagonist's intelligence is really very refreshing, not brainless, very comfortable and appropriate, and I fell in love with the protagonist. Support the author greatly, come on, come on [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

It's very beautiful, but there are so many gorgeous modifiers that it makes people's eyes dazzled.

It's good, but there are many destiny protagonists who like the heroine, but the heroine always ignores them🌚

I think an author with good writing style can really bring resonance to the readers and express deeply in the words. The poems in the article are very artistic, and the description of the appearance of the heroine will make us subconsciously fantasize in our minds! Come on, author, keep up the good work

Can you use less fancy words [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

It's good-looking and good-looking. This article in Yang Persimmon is considered good. The exaggerated writing style actually fits the artistic conception of the fairy tale. I just like the protagonist to be beautiful, heartthrob and ruthless. It pokes me too much. TT is too short. It doesn't matter whether you have a CP or not. Everyone loves the protagonist. The protagonist is a clone of Tiandao Qingqing. No matter how hard you think, you can't understand love. No CP to compete! ! I just feel like the protagonist picks up children a little too much, but it's still acceptable.