The Eighth Book by Yilou Tingyu

In the early stages of the article, there is a feeling of life and death, which is particularly wonderful, you know? In life and death encounters again and again, they have become each other's most trusting existence. If you continue to read below, you will find that it is on fire, ah! ! ! I won't say too much, but I'm urging you to update it. If you want to know more, read it yourself (/≧▽≦)/~┴┴

The author was adopted without having to transform into a book [almost crying] I came here just to read Tie Tie. After reading it for a while, I clicked on the catalog and scrolled to the end but I still didn't see Tie Tie [smile] I just wanted to read Tie Tie. Author, you have to satisfy me [smile]

This book has a fast pace and a novel setting. Life and death crises ensue one after another in the plot. Although it is a bit compact, it does not hinder the overall impression. The relationship between master and pet quickly heats up in the tribulation, from dependence on each other to tacit understanding, and gradually forms a strong bond of "I am in you, and you are in me". The work cleverly uses programmers' logic to interpret the training, alchemy and combat systems, and the rational perspective is refreshing. The interaction between the two heroines after their transformation is extremely sweet, and the plot of "Tie Tie" is delicate and moving, fully satisfying readers' expectations for the emotional line. What surprised me was that the book also included the protagonist's reflections on his own gender, which is rare in today's bianbai novels.

It is more important for you two to live a harmonious life than anything else [crying] [crying] [crying] (In addition, the protagonist is still too supermodel, can it be reduced or the villain can be strengthened? I want to see super wits) Also: If there is any later, you will pretend that I didn't say it [blowing kiss] The author is very active, please like [like]

Leave a comment. Zheng Moumou, some people know that they can't even take a fake exam, you little dwarf, why why why why why, you are back to school at noon today, what are you two doing in the woods, the goddess Jingran is with you, do you know how uncomfortable I am during the exam, Look at my eyes Tell me Ahhhhhhh, ahhhhhhh, ahhhhhhh, ahhhhhhh, ahhhhhhh, I feel so bad, my mind is full of Chunjiao and Zhiming all afternoon Sure enough, some things really don't exist if they are not born. In the end, I can only wish you two a happy marriage. Well, lastly, this book is very beautiful [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Facts have proved that the above content is true and is my real experience. Alas, one last thing to say, the author should not be able to see it. [Thinking] [Thinking] [Thinking] Chunjiao and Zhiming are so good, I want to listen to them forever [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] [licking] I am not boasting, but the people here are all majestic, admired by thousands of people, unparalleled, jade trees facing the wind, both internal and external, talented, noble sentiments, super invincible, proficient in their work, reaching the pinnacle, flying sand and stones, miraculous craftsmanship, deafening. He is enlightened, the candle illuminates the world, he can see thousands of miles clearly, the rain and dew are all over the world, and the trees are covered with all directions. The eagle watches the wolf, the dragon walks and the tiger steps. He is heroic and majestic. He is in a commanding position. He is benevolent and moral. He is charming and suave. He is selfless. He looks like Pan An. He is more talented than Song Yu. A pear tree weighs more than a begonia. , You have it, you have it, you have it, you have it, you have righteousness, you have the breeze on your sleeves, you have good virtue, you have a pure heart, you have a beautiful view of the mountains, you have high sentiments, you have great virtues, you have immeasurable merits, you have good gold and beautiful jade, you have bright virtues, you have a beautiful heart, you have a good heart, you have a beautiful heart, and you have a lot of good things. , A man of lofty ideals and a benevolent person, a white crane in the cloud, a man of great splendor, a romantic figure, a dragon and a phoenix, unparalleled in the world, a peerless hero, one of a kind, a branch of Guilin, a man of cranes, one of the best, unparalleled in the world, named on the gold list, a piece of jade in Kunshan, unrivaled.

If you like it, please support and rate it, leave comments and suggestions, Tingyu will actively make corrections, thank you all [laughing] There will be a surprise after the third tail of the protagonist.

Overall it's pretty good, the female abort process is described in detail, but I feel that some key nodes are not handled naturally enough. The protagonist's emotional transformation during the transformation period feels like there is a lack of foreshadowing (either I didn't see it or missed it). Originally, the protagonist had a vision of "guarding" (and it was urgent) and then led to the subsequent transformation. This should obviously be the beginning of a new stage, so it is logical that the protagonist should The degree of acceptance needs to be improved, but in the original text, the main character is "strongly rejected and unable to accept the emotion of becoming a girl". It feels to me that in order to continue to create a character who is "obviously honest physically, but always reluctant mentally", a certain period of psychology is hardened, which is a bit too hard (). It might be better to add a simple treatment, and simply point out the reasons. For example: when it was originally in the fox form, the protagonist subconsciously avoided the fact that he had changed his gender. However, the jade body revealed after the transformation easily broke through the window paper, forcing the protagonist to face this problem head-on. Such a sudden change led to the protagonist's shame and difficulty in accepting it. The second thing is that the previous "special events" were arranged a bit too tightly. It seemed that Su had just saved Nangong, and then Nangong saved Su again. The cycle (), and to be honest, the homogeneity was a bit high. Then after the transformation, it can be seen that the existence of the system has been deliberately downplayed, but at this time Nangong Li has to take over the banner of "mentor". In the previous stage, the mentor was the system, pushing the protagonist to become a woman step by step by constantly issuing tasks. In the second stage, the logical arrangement is that Nangong Li will be more proactive and create more "small theaters" to promote the protagonist's further sexual degradation. (However, I haven't read many chapters of this part yet, so I'm looking forward to it first) Generally speaking, it is actually a very classic hero's journey narrative structure, and most of the arrangements are pretty good. Of course, the above is just my personal opinion. Please don't blame me for any omissions that offend.

I don't have much to say. If you like watching it, just watch it [face covering] Anyway, I personally feel a little short of breath [laughs awkwardly]

[Adoration][Adoration][Adoration] I like it, the interaction is loving, I look forward to turning into a human form, the author will update soon, five stars for encouragement I like it so much haha I finally transformed. Come back and comment. I also like the pictures made by the author🥰

Kids, I couldn't pass the book review. I don't understand why. Okay, let's get to the point. I have summarized the following 3 points in this book. I hope the author will adopt them: … No! I'm not willing to give in! I'm not done with you in reviewing this! ! ! Didn't you expect that? I have written another follow-up review. I mainly want to say a few points in writing this review. First: I'm hungry Second: I have eaten Third: I'm full Fourth: I've seen it The above are the 4 points I want to express. Only the smartest people can see what I want to express [laughing evilly]