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Edmund is simply a top-notch guiding daddy. He has a very charming personality and is completely from a succubus. The two of them are simply the embodiment of "you were raised by me, so you are also mine." Dumbledore didn't teach Tom anything, but Edmund taught him completely. The relationship between the young lovers is very complicated, but they are definitely true love. The value of the phrase "what pot goes with what lid" is still rising. Edmund's character Very plump, he is mature, stable, gentle, bad, kind... Rationality and sensibility are perfectly integrated in him. This is one of the rare HPs I have seen where the protagonist is a Muggle. He lived during World War II and he longed to return to his motherland and his world. I have marveled at his strong heart countless times. No one would not want to be nice to him, because he deserves the best. It is really great! Looking forward to follow-up and new works [Send Hearts][Send Hearts][Send Hearts]

The two strong characters are so cool and the high-intelligence protagonists are so exciting to me. They are testing each other and tugging at each other. It's so good to watch. I'm already looking forward to being imprisoned. . (Will there be one🥺)🔥🔥🔥The author has a strong literary quality and actually tried to incorporate knowledge into the novel for me to read. I have eaten the fairy food again😋

It's very good. In the words of a book friend, it fits perfectly. "I really like this kind of story. The main line is HP fan fiction. The main character in the sub-line has his own life, story, unique plot, missing hometown, home across time and space, separated by the Atlantic Ocean and Pacific Ocean of far physical distance, the feeling of the past and the future that I want to pursue... In the background of World War II, not only the excitement of the magic world, but also the highlights of the entire environment. This is not the best era, but it is not the worst era either." @Run towards the night

It's super beautiful, it's almost immersive, as if there really is an unlucky guy who traveled through HP⌓‿⌓ Edmund's IQ is very online, and from time to time he makes Tom in his learning stage look like a dark chuunibyou hahahahahahaha Looking forward to the follow-up story.

Oops, I forgot to review it. It looks good. Although I didn't review it after reading it as I said before, this is a HP novel in which the protagonist has no magical means or magic and only relies on personality charm and intellectual charm to win over Riddle. It's super good-looking, and the protagonist is in England and his heart is in China. He is always worried and helping his homeland on the other side of the ocean. It's really touching. Every failure of support and every step of progress always affects our hearts. The author, please give me more support!

The writing is quite good, I haven't finished it yet, but it feels a bit too dull, which makes me feel a bit depressed. I feel that life is hopeless. I have money and fame, but it seems like I have nothing. I have worked hard for so long, but I feel that there is no reward.

It's good to watch. The names of the protagonist and Little Tom as brother and brother are a bit pseudo-orthopedic. It's fun to watch the ambiguous pull between the two! The protagonist is simply a cold and restrained human succubus! The micro-abstinence type really eats like crazy! I really like the protagonist! Tom's personality seems to be quite right. He has great ambition for power. Later, he becomes possessive towards his brother. It will be very uncomfortable for him to ignore and deal with his brother. Oops! It tastes sour and sweet to me! However, when I looked at the back, I realized something was wrong, holy shit! You're standing on the wrong side! The main focus is on writing, and the relationship is in the new year. The author said that there may be mutual attacks later, eh. . . Sorry, it really can't be done anymore, I give up.

Very good, the environment is well rendered, and you can vividly taste the difficulty, despair, and depression of the protagonist's belief in returning home and doing his part under the erosion of the times. It is a bit biased towards the kind of serious literature. Maybe it can be divided into more paragraphs. After all, it is not convenient to read a long book. I believe the author's works will definitely attract more people (=^▽^=)

The author's writing style is still very good and very immersive, but the content is too heavy. But if you like to read light novels, you won't mind. This novel basically has a very depressing and depressing atmosphere. The protagonist seems to be in a state of tension at any time. My heart felt bad when I read it. If I didn't like to read novels that break away from the main storyline of the HP savior, I generally wouldn't read novels with a heavy and depressing atmosphere. The author's writing style is relatively sharp and exudes a moist and fatalistic atmosphere. Of course, the author sometimes writes some hellish jokes, but they are so hellish that they give people a creepy feeling. Generally speaking, it is a very good HP fanfic, yes. Fine.

It's good-looking, and rarely associated with the situation in China at that time. The protagonist strives to do his best to contribute to the motherland, which is really touching.

Very nice! I read more than a hundred chapters in one go. The author will update soon [sending heartfelt wishes] Generally speaking, the academic and theoretical content may be boring to some people, but rest assured it is not very long. The emotional line between the protagonist and Tom Riddle has been somewhat revealed. I really love this sticky, dark and complicated entanglement! I'm really looking forward to the two of them being together! The only drawback is that private settings may cause some people to have a bad impression. There are some problems in the article such as the unclear distinction between the names of Hagrid and Hagrid (it doesn't have much impact later on and he has very few scenes), and there are issues with Dumbledore's age (he was not old when he taught Riddle, he was middle-aged). However, there is almost no description of Dumbledore's appearance, only words such as "old man" and "silver eyebrow" appear occasionally. Finally, this should definitely be a two-male protagonist. I don't know why the label is a male video? Straight men, beware of straying in!

Help! This is the best HP article I've read this year! Agricultural students traveled through time and became Muggles, started to increase potato production in the magical world, and educated the future Dark Lord to become a socialist successor who "does great things quietly". I don't have a love brain, I just have a career and complain about it. It's really good to watch. In the early stage of the double-qiang story, the male protagonist regarded Tom as the key to go home. Who knew? When he found out that he couldn't go back, he started to save the dragon in the east and sent a large amount of supplies.

Get rid of fancy settings and explain in a plain and simple way what careers Muggles living outside the magical world can create. The most attractive thing is the connection between the two protagonists in the undercurrent of the British magical world and the war-torn motherland at the same time offline. After all, in the fantasy world of Harry Potter, everyone loves to dream and talk about CP, and few are aware of the turmoil in China during this period. When I read that the male protagonist was almost overwhelmed by the difficulties in delivering supplies, I felt very uncomfortable😣. There is no easy way to live a happy life, and I am deeply favored by our revolutionary ancestors.

I enjoyed reading it. The teacher's writing style is very delicate and delicate. It's so beautiful to me. Although I have only read more than 100 chapters now, I feel that Tom Cat has already become a bit obsessive and has become a black love. He is diligent, and the knowledge points look very professional (ah ba ah ba, I can't understand). He even has a special chapter to answer questions (teacher, teacher, we like you). He is also very responsible for this book, and the introduction is also very authoritative. I look forward to chasing my husband at the crematorium (?). In short, cheers teacher [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

In fact, I have read this book several times. I always felt that it would be difficult to write well if you were a Muggle in the magical world, so I had no desire to read it. But who would have thought that this book would literally unlock a new world! ! Excellent value for money in every sense of the word, far exceeding expectations. First of all, after almost 500 to 600 pages, the writing got better and better. The most important thing is that the protagonist really became more and more charming as the writing progressed. Sometimes there was a dual perspective switch, and different perspectives could see the differences in their personalities. Recalling the subtle differences between their perspectives and the truth, there is a subtle sweetness, and many details and foreshadowing reflect each other. Including that teacher-student episode, my god it's so delicious! Whether it's the philosophical topic they are tentatively discussing with each other or the resonance of this topic with their feelings, it's all top-notch delicious! The author said that he learned a lot of novel techniques while writing this book, and I completely believe it, because the quality speaks for itself. It's been a long time since I've seen this kind of novel and I couldn't bear to finish it, so I slowly savored it and decided to join the rumination series, and even wanted to download it. After the author completes the update, it would be great if this book could be released in physical form. I really want a hardcover collection. It can be said that it is an article where you can see the author's continuous improvement, and as a reader, it is indeed more enjoyable as you read it. Not only is the relationship between the young lovers written delicately, but the author fills in many details as he writes. Sometimes there are many memorable things that can be compared with the previous article, and at the same time, it also makes their images more plump and charming. Not only did Tom fall in love with the main character, but so did I.

Not sure what will happen next. But so far it is a novel worth reading. It can be seen that from the beginning to the present, the author's writing style has improved significantly, and the character creation has become better and better. The plot is very fast paced. But after entering the emotional description in the middle and late stages, the pace slowed down a lot. I felt that the author was a little delayed in describing emotional events, but it didn't have much impact. The protagonist also feels that after Tom entered school and knew that he could not go back, I think his personal development began to become clearly clear. All in all, it's a second-generation work worth reading!

The writing is quite good, but there are too many professional things. I want to relax in the novel instead of chewing on the words, word by word, pondering some things that I can't understand. Sometimes I skip reading, skipping over professional things about studying work, and skipping some comments after articles, otherwise it will be a bit tiring to read. Everything else was fine, and the relationship transition was pretty good too, but the progress was a little slow. Maybe it was because I saw more fast-paced movies, and everyone has their own preferences in this regard. The description of the emotional line is a bit hazy. I can't comment on the parts described with professional or connotative words. You may also have read it without understanding it clearly. People will comment only when true emotions are revealed. In some places, the two sides secretly compete with each other, which is a bit suppressed, and there is no mood to comment. The above are all my personal opinions. This novel is mainly about daily work, supplemented by feelings, and mainly based on the Muggle world and supplemented by the magical world. Relationships are about mutual testing, two smart people fall in love, Tom is a bit stubborn, and Gong's character is completely an upright male protagonist who guides lovers.

It seems that the main focus is on writing, and the emotional line is negligible (it may be that the place I saw was both underage before, so it is considered a family relationship). When Tom was in school, the protagonist was concentrating on his career. It is a story about two strong characters and a brain-sickness. It is very realistic. At present, it seems to me that the protagonist is very eager to return home, and he is also very tired.

This article really gives me a heavy feeling, like an ancient tree. It is really good quality. The language is unique and beautiful. It is very beautiful. Thank you teacher ❤️ And Tom is completely a male ghost. More importantly, the Tom in this article is very consistent with my understanding of him, his paranoia and desire for power. More importantly, this article is very exciting! And what Tom cares about first is that the protagonist has a very strong personality, and the world view, setting, and theory are very rigorous! Highly recommended! The plot is online! Nice! ! ! ! ❤️

Nice! ! ! To be honest, I saw what Tom looks like in this article, and I also know that he is the protagonist. The character of the protagonist is very good. I want to say a lot, but I can't say it. The main reason is that it is really good-looking. I recommend everyone to watch it. First of all, let me say that the protagonist is a Muggle and has no magic, but he is a magician in the Muggle world!

The author is simply a god. I really didn't expect that I could find such beautiful gold in the Tomato fandom area. The author's writing style left me with the impression that "the writing style of this book comes from a classic". I have read so many books on Tomato, and it was the first time I saw such writing. It was a strange feeling. The author always gave me a metaphor in unexpected places. This book did not use too many intense emotional terms between the lines. The first part was calm and depressing, and the second part had a feeling of sudden enlightenment. Although I don't know why I suddenly became enlightened, when I thought about this novel later, this feeling couldn't help but take root in my heart. When Edmund gets along with Tom, that kind of um... Light tranquility (here specifically refers to the warm cookies, not involving too much calculation) is delicious. Usually I read books without thinking, so when I saw their emotional confrontation, I didn't think much about it. It wasn't until later in the article that the author explained separately that I discovered that it was so delicious. I didn't dare to think about what I had missed before, so I read it again. This time, it was amazing. It knocked me to death. I was in the pit originally, but now I have smashed through the bottom of the pit. And the extras written by the author are also very interesting. Five-star gift [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart]

The writing is very good, not too OOC [snickering] [smirking], the emotional line is very touching [shy] [shy], and the story is very rigorous, and everything that happened during that period in the UK is very real, giving you an immersive feeling. The author is often active in the comment area. Overall, it can be rated as a five-star [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss] This book is the best I have read in the past year [flying kiss][flying kiss]

It's wonderful. The two protagonists are both people who are constantly working hard in their respective fields. They have similar extreme and stubborn personalities (very attractive), which can be regarded as a medium of mutual attraction. The author prefers to be "low-key" in handling the emotional lines, but it is very touching. There are also many references to knowledge, and it can be seen that they are really searching and understanding. It rarely goes into details about redemption and the like, and more often it shows what two people are doing in parallel time. From being tentative and wary to being honest with each other, it feels like a natural progression. The interaction in the intimate relationship is also very delicately written, like two bitter gourds relying on each other (generally bitter, not as bitter as me😓) hahahahahaha. I tied it without hesitation! Great author! Hit me to death with your manuscript!

It can be seen that the author has sufficient knowledge reserves and the characters are well created. I feel very depressed after reading it. Nothing the protagonist does can change anything. I can't empathize with the protagonist in terms of sexiness. I feel a bit frivolous, but it is undeniable that the writing is great.

I've only read part of it so far, and I'm not very used to the first-person perspective. Especially at the moment, the content gives me a depressive feeling of being dark, cold, and moldy in the British winter. Coupled with the first-person perspective, it really doesn't feel good. This is a very "exquisite" novel, with a lot of detailed and exquisite psychological environment descriptions, and many metaphors and personifications. It is so exquisite, and the emotion is greater than the plot. I thought it was a cool novel about the protagonist traveling across the UK to pursue a career. But the author's writing is not bad, the writing style is quite good.

Delicious, but I had mixed feelings after watching it. On the one hand, I want to see a bloody plot, such as "Tom turns into a dank puppy for love and the protagonist Mei Mei falls in love." I don't want to see the protagonist and Tom being wary of each other. On the other hand, I think the author's circuitous writing is very reasonable and has a unique flavor. Can Madam please do some sweet extras? It's a bit too painful to watch 80+ chapters [crying]

This book is very delicious, the teacher's writing is good, the rhythm is neither slow nor hasty, the characters are well understood, and the images are full. The characters in the text are narrated by the teacher in 3D, which makes you feel like you have seen them yourself. The protagonist CP is very sweet and delicious (●°u°●) as the introduction says. Of course, it also lays out a lot of questions and foreshadowings. The love described in the article is not just love, but a kind of "being seen". This is what I think is amazing about the teacher, and it also reflects the teacher's delicate perception and understanding of the characters. Moreover, the teacher is really passionate about the characters he writes about (//∇//). All the friends of the protagonist and the people who live in the cracks of history are all written very vividly. When I saw the confession of the designer woman, I really burst into tears ≥≤, why is the teacher's pattern so big? This book is a human-person narration. Some of the previous chapters are in the form of the first-person "I". The psychological description is very vivid and humorous, allowing us to feel all the uneasiness and psychological fluctuations of the protagonist when he comes to a strange world to the maximum extent. The latter person pronoun becomes more convenient for narration. Using names to tell stories promotes description and provides foreshadowing and other things, which is very nice. Moreover, the teacher feels a bit erudite and talented. He has consulted a lot of information. I feel like I have a lot of knowledge in my mind. I kneel down at the writing style. Why? Why? Why? >O<I just saw this delicious spiritual food yesterday. I was angry. Why is the score so low? [Angry] One million words has been tied! I don't want to talk about this anymore It's really delicious (//∇//). I want to tell the teacher that I will follow you! ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄₎ฅ˒˒ How to say it? I just finished catching up on the update and here comes the review. After I felt that the novel setting had passed, I realized the shortcomings of this book when I read the new chapters. Other book reviews also mentioned that there were some repeated sentences, but they did not serve to emphasize but instead increased the pressure of the text. The reason why the current sense of perception has become bad may be because there are too many extras, which almost squeeze out the share of the main text. (The protagonist has grown up, so the character design feels too big, and coupled with the other side of friends and career, it is too full) (This is just my current personal reading experience, and I will not change the rating after reading it for the first time)

I feel like I wrote well, as expected of me [laughs]

This book has a low score. The writing is very good. The author also did everyone's research and was very serious. Because I wasn't interested in HP fanfiction, I didn't read it at first, but then I started reading it after reading it. In fact, the background of the full text is HP, and the content has little to do with HP and can be read independently. Although I think the two protagonists have too many ideas, this is also the basis for the development of the story.

It's really rare to see such an article on HP Fans that is well written, not mindless and has characters that are not OOC. The author is very serious about imparting knowledge to us (I can't do it anymore) And as a fan, this article may be depressing in the early stage and a bit uncomfortable to read, but it is really sweet and heartwarming later on. The author also has his own understanding of the characters, and El is also very charming. Full marks for being able to constantly catch Tom's temptations. Finally, I would like to thank the author for the unique reading experience.