Detective Conan: Ashes of the Embers

Original, novel and smooth! Demon is the first fanfic I read with gusto, but it's a pity that Eunuch... This book is the second one. I hope the author sticks to high-quality plots. The overall pace is slightly faster, which is not a criticism! The plot is quite good and the connection is tight. Small enough, smart enough... Although the brandy "ended hastily", the rest of the article has been using this to make a difference. I think it has become a finishing touch! The plot, on a macro level, is a heroic tragedy in which the protagonist "carries everything on his own"; but there are also details interspersed with daily comedies. Only when it ends in tragedy can it leave a more profound emotional impression. The part about the missing protagonist is also quite good. Various clues hint at the loneliness and pain in the protagonist's heart. It's a pity that I didn't write it in a separate volume... (I just wrote about the sudden obsession and what happens next. I feel that it is quite interesting) The memories of Brandy, my deteriorating body, my helpless struggle that I can't die yet, my depression and collapse, alone bearing it... I feel the same way!

It's quite good, mainly because there's been a shortage of books recently, and there aren't many good Conan fans lately. Personally, I think this book is very delicate in its description (although I don't know if the sequelae of battlefields are so [cool] [cool] in reality). The description of the protagonist's heart is quite good, but it lacks excessive emotional promotion (my forced explanation to myself is They rarely come into contact with kind people, so their emotions are promoted quickly [cool][cool]). The plot is quite good, but there are some places where you shouldn't take it too seriously when reading it. You will feel pretty good after just a glance. My personal suggestion (I'll just say it casually, don't scold me [cool][cool]) is to have less stories with the red side and more with the black side.

Let me rate it for myself [laughs]

It's super good-looking. It's different from other fanfictions in the past. It doesn't have those watery chapters. It's full of fire all the time.

After reading Chapter 28, I can summarize two problems: 1. The plot goes by too fast; 2. The character development is not deep enough. You can take a look

It looks good, but I feel like I will be stabbed to death in the end.

Yes, I like this kind of original plot. Come on, author.

The pace is relatively fast, but it's a pity that it doesn't have a happy ending.

Will there be another book? The author is great

Good looking, tight plot