Western Fantasy: I'm a Ghost! Not Your Sister!

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Yes, the setting, world view, and story are all pretty good. The only thing missing now is a main line that can support the whole story. Now it's better to be strong for the sake of being strong, not for what you're strong for. All in all, it's worth watching, and I quite like seeing the ending. Secondly, although it is light, it would be better if you could appropriately increase the emotional line when writing about daily life, or create an accident to make the relationship between the two people further. Of course, it would be even better if there are stickers [laughter]

It's quite interesting. I thought Velcy was the main heroine at first, but later I found out that she is a strong heroine with 65% Arya and 35% Velcy. (I blame my stereotype. I didn't read the label and thought all time-travelers were big.)

I finished reading it in one go. It is very well written. It is definitely the first among Tomato Transformation novels. The character relationships, plot development, and writing descriptions are all excellent. However, the number of words is too few now, and there are still many world settings that have not been written. It is a novel with a promising future. Recommended, come on the author! ! !

It's not bad, but it's too compact. Things will happen wherever you don't go. It's a bit too deliberate. At least arrange some time when nothing happens and treat it as a daily transition. I also read more than 100 book reviews. Most of the places that are said to be poisonous are not felt at all (maybe it's because I've been reading for a long time and the poison resistance is high or the author has changed it). Please write more and don't cut it. The book is in short supply. I can see that most of them are waiting for updates or don't want to click on it. It's too difficult to find a book that I can read now.

Good book. Coordinate 67, I watched it all night. I only wrote about the middle of the second major event, so I can't tell much about the overall story development, but the plot arrangement of each event is still quite smooth, and the behavior of each character is logical. The interaction and sense of distance between the characters is what I loved most about this book. The initial little thoughts of the two protagonists are quite interesting. I hope there will be more in the future. Who says that when the relationship gets better, you can't have your own little Jiujiu. The actions of NPCs are also relatively consistent with their settings. It is really good to be able to show the arc of ordinary people at critical moments. So far, I haven't seen any classic villains with bitter hatred and deep hatred that I'm tired of seeing. The topic of Industrial Cthulhu is indeed more appealing to me than the traditional Cthulhu. The big ships and big cannons are powerful and exciting. It is interesting to watch after coming and going. Being chased by endless high-ranking beings for 200 chapters is still insensitive.

In the process of catching up, from what I have seen so far, I feel that it is a very good work. Should it be a dual protagonist? Everyone's characters are well developed, and there are no obvious flaws. Every character who has appeared and is worthy of the author's efforts to describe has a personality. The more realistic aspect is that the characters will have a self-interested tendency, but from this aspect, it is more highlighted that the importance of their true pursuit is noble, higher than reputation and life. Basically, it gives me this feeling [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The introduction of the novel does not match the atmosphere of the story. So far, the novel gives me a sense of cold-toned tension. The plot is compact and reasonable, and it gradually narrates the world view. Although it has eased a little in the latest part, it is obviously to pave the way for subsequent major events. I suspect it is a classic fish-man. The article has been describing the protagonist's external characteristics, but it will blur the protagonist's sexual cognition, and the protagonist's past life experience and gender are currently unknown (should be a deep foreshadowing). This article is worth reading.

It's a very strange start. We traveled back and forth to become ghosts or substitute messengers. They were suspicious of each other and gradually accepted it. It was quite good. The last book was not cured due to force majeure. I hope this one can be completed with good results. Come on.

I saw the latest 43 chapters. There are no bad points. They are very interesting. I hope the author will not disappear and continue to update. Why did I encounter this book so early? I am sad. I feel that the author may add some Warhammer content [Thinking] (I personally don't play games but I also like the content of Warhammer games). Finally, I hope the author will not stop updating.