A Farmer's Son's Road to Wealth: I Picked Up a Prince

It's quite nice, and it's different from ordinary time travel. There's no system, no golden fingers, no soap making, no braised vegetables. The first pot of gold is fried crab meat [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] It's probably from the free shipping area. .

I want to know who the male protagonist is. I'm so curious. Is it Yaozu or King Yan? The author, you use too many words. I think we can start with facial expressions. It feels a bit weird, but the plot is good. I quite like the group portrait. The deputy CP is also very annoying. Later, I wrote that love is too vulgar and the plot is too cliche. I think that career can be the main focus and love can be supplemented. Become an official first and then write about love. Studying hard in the early stage should not only be a preparation for love. Don't be anxious, just take it step by step. It has been a long time since I felt like a teacher. It was clearly explained that when Shou entered the capital, he asked a few questions about the teacher's movements, and then did nothing else. He only focused on falling in love for so long. I'm sorry for his respect for the teacher and the teacher's help to him before. The plot lines of the story were not sorted out in sequence, which made people uncomfortable.

It's very interesting to watch, and the plot is compact and not procrastinating. At present, it seems a bit like a small group portrait of the protagonist's family, and there is also a branch plot of the protagonist's wife, and the protagonist's emotional line has not yet begun. Hope is the feeling of Baozi working hard to take the imperial examination and finally meeting at the top. [Send heart][Send heart]

It's very interesting. As a new author, I have already written very well. I read all 64 chapters in one go. It's not enough. Also, when will the other male protagonist appear? Come on! I started reading this book when it had less than 60 chapters. I have been reading it for two or three days intermittently, and now it has reached more than 180 chapters. It is really good, super good, the plot is compact, and the emotional scenes are also very enjoyable. I hope everyone will read it. It is really a good book.

What's going on? I've reached 180+ chapters. Why do I feel that 0's character has collapsed, 1's character has developed into a domineering prince, and 1 is seriously injured. 1 Doesn't know if he can survive, but he asked 0 to marry him, and he didn't explain his situation clearly to 0 [star] Everyone can quit, 0's character design has collapsed into some romance heroine [face covering]

It seems that the pace of the article is not grasped well. The pace of "The Separation of the Family" is a bit slow, and I am really angry, but the pace of seizing the throne feels clean and tidy; I like to read imperial examination essays recently, and there are very few Shuangnan ones, so I can only look for those without CP. I almost met the heroine several times. Fortunately, I abandon the article quickly, so this article is rated as a five-point as long as it is not wrong. Of course, after reading 2000 pages, the content is indeed rich, and the deputy CP is also very good. Overall it is good.

The plot is pretty good, but the tone and sentences are a bit strange, with a lot of exclamation points. I think if I change the punctuation and sentence breaks, the tone will be better and more natural. Now when I read the text, it gives people a more urgent and intense feeling [thinking]. Come on, author, for more updates [please update]

The story is not bad. There are a lot of places where you need to catch bugs in the article. The logic in many places is mediocre and there are a lot of bugs. [Facepalm] Five stars are given to the author who is writing for the first time. It would be great to revise this article in the future.

This book is good at everything, with a reasonable plot, tight rhythm, vivid characters, and clear context. There are many minor flaws, such as typos and sentence fragmentation, and the names of characters are always wrong or simply replaced. Some modern words pop up from time to time. There are also many wrong names for characters. For example, the fifth prince often calls the fourth prince and fifth brother, which still affects the perception. But when I watch it, I automatically correct or skip it, so it doesn't have much impact. Overall, except for some minor flaws, it is still very good-looking. Some transitional plots are also handled very well, not too abrupt, and very comfortable to watch.

The author's writing style is actually pretty good, but his control over the plot of the chapters may not be very good. Everyone who clicked in to read must have come because of some of the things in the introduction, or some external labels. Some unimportant plots can be written briefly, and it will not affect anything. If the author doesn't know much about this aspect, you can learn more about it (I don't mean to preach, just a small suggestion [love] [love] [love]).