I'm a New Writer. I've Just Written 80,000 Words for the First Time. Could Someone Give It a Review?
I'd like to read something similar to "The Legend of the Dragon King: Misty Clouds Defying Fate". It's the author's first time writing a story that's over 80,000 words, and now they want to work hard toward 400,000, aiming for that kind of length. They're bored at home after just finishing their first semester of college, and their writing style...
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I rarely read science fiction literature because I know that my brain capacity is limited and I don't like to discuss things like matter, energy, particles, and data. I still remember that the first article I read was a short story in micro-science fiction. I forgot which third-rate magazine it was from. It was a paper journal with rough printing. I still remember that the article was called "Gaia". The reason why the protagonist discovered the secret of the collapse of the world and persisted in living was "she", the mother of the earth. However, "she" is not a specific person. The author's anchor point is also focused on "her" "eyes". People's eyes are always the most guiding and convey the most intense emotions in urgent situations. I have forgotten the general plot. I only remember that "he" finally escaped from the virtual world supported by "Gaia" as a carrier, only to find that it was nothingness when he walked out. The difference from this article is that that article gave me a more "realistic" feeling. I read this article today and read the first few chapters carefully. I found that it was difficult for me to immerse myself in it. I was more like a bystander, visiting the "collapse, contradictions, collisions, and struggles" of a game world. This world is very novel. It seems to be composed of many data, derived, and then collided with another data, or a "bug" appeared within the data, causing the data to anomaly and the world to collapse. The NPCs in the data began to save themselves, either rebuilding or looking for a new world. After reading a few chapters, I stopped reading because the author stopped updating...
The description is very detailed, but I just started it, and it feels like it has a lot of potential. Each chapter is quite long. If this number of words is updated twice a day, it should be updated very quickly.
The structure is novel, the logic is rigorous, and the plot and details are handled very well. I look forward to more updates. It's super beautiful! Love watching! More updates soon from the author
I like it, keep it up