The King's Avatar: Glory World Invitational Tournament

I've read more than a dozen chapters, and the pacing is pretty good. I just don't know why I always feel that there's something wrong with Ye Xiu's character and way of speaking. It looks a bit awkward. Also, Ye Xiu's family background is mainly about politics and supplemented by business! Come on, author, I hope to read more of the original work and ponder Ye Xiu's character and way of speaking. You must remember that in the original work, Ye Xiu is also very qualified and doesn't speak dirty words!

Fans of the full-time master Super high quality! The author's traffic and quality are separated 🤦 This book is really good. As an operations officer, I hope this book has a better future. The fighting scenes are really exciting, HDL writing!

I've just finished reading the first volume, and to be honest, it's actually pretty good. Personally, I feel that, in order to describe the various difficulties in the running-in period, the distinct personalities of each character were slightly amplified, so it was a little strange at first (such as Fang Rui's lack of confidence in transformation or Tang Hao and Sun Xiang's arrogance), but it got better later on. The battle scenes are also well written and quite detailed. As a fanfic, it is very close to the original work. The author is too strong. I look forward to the subsequent plot 😘[Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

I don't know why the score is so low. As a reader who is a full-time master of five brushes, I don't have any big problems with this. The battle scenes are also very good. It is the best among the second creations I have seen.

I'm lazy and rarely write reviews, but this book is really amazing! 🥰🥰🥰 There is no sense of disobedience in this plot. Everyone written by the author can highlight their own growth, and their own characteristics and images are well displayed. Maybe at first I thought Ye Xiu was a bit too serious when teaching them (for example, when Ye Xiu often said something to inspire them and criticized their ability to unite and cooperate, there were too many such descriptions (personally think). Others are very good. I am going to recommend this article to other full-time fans [Bird Food] When writing Ye Xiu and other characters, I sometimes feel that Sun Xiang and Tang Hao are too radical. The characters curse a bit too much. I hope that the characters of Wang Jiexi and less talkative characters can also reflect their respective personalities.

I have read the original work five or six times. I have also read the anime, audiobooks, and fanfics frequently and repeatedly. I have also read the Qidian World Invitational fanfic. Among many full-time colleagues, I feel that the Tomato fanfic is very good. There are indeed some problems in the early stage, but I have improved a lot later. I hope the author can continue to write [Congratulations]

It looks good, it looks good, except that the character is a bit 00c at the beginning, and the description of the fighting is really good 👍 Most of it is fine, sometimes it's a bit ooc. Mostly it's a bit lacking in daily competitions.

There are also works for the World Invitational Competition that have been completed, but I think your writing is more vivid and the description is particularly good. I hope it will be updated soon and the subsequent plots will not be carelessly completed.

It looks good, the quality is super high, and it can be seen that the author has really read the whole book "The Master". The writing is not bad.

I just read the first 50 chapters. They are very well written. Even when calling the commander, he still uses his character account name or direct battle mage or something. When it comes to Team Wang, Team Yu and so on are weird. At least Ye Xiu, who has no lower limit, doesn't know how to call him. He can only call him by his first name or the name of the game character.