Stack Passives Like Mad, Then One-Shot Every Boss

AI-generated content, did you all notice? 🍉 The premise is good, but the plot is somewhat fragmented due to AI expansion. It's painful to be without something to read, but now that I have something to read, it's alright. The author will revise the text after using AI expansion, but you can still see the writing style of AI-generated content, since it wasn't completely cleaned up. (I didn't give it a bad review. If you think four stars is too low, I can't help it; everything I said is the truth. It's a free story, but we still see ads, the author gets paid, the platform earns money, and there are also paid gifts. Do you think anyone would write for love and then waste time writing all the time?) I'm here to leave a follow-up review. The premise is good, and I was genuinely experiencing a reading slump. Author, please use less AI. When I was listening to the audiobook around chapter 150 of volume three, I just couldn't take it anymore. Please expand and revise the text! At least you cut some parts in the beginning, although you could see the AI ​​traces. But in volume three, you really went wild! Because I was listening to the audiobook, I didn't remember the exact chapters, only that it got a little better after a few dozen or maybe a hundred chapters—I can't quite recall. You know, even listening at 3x speed still felt incredibly slow, right? If the attributes and skills haven't changed, you don't need to copy the whole thing; just write the part about the point increase. That's not how you write fluffy posts.

The rating is indeed a bit low, so let's give the author some encouragement. I also have some suggestions for the author. The writing style is more suitable for the other book, with more detailed descriptions and environmental descriptions. The protagonist is also always walking a tightrope, with growth, tension, and major and minor climaxes. One suggestion is to write details, but optimize them. Don't be too concise; don't cram multiple pieces of information into a single sentence. Online novel readers won't read long passages in their entirety. Emphasize the most relevant information. For example, in Chapter 59, Deco asks "What do you think?" And then inserts four or five paragraphs of background information before Riel responds. This makes for a poor reading experience. You don't know who the two people in the conversation are. Rearrange the order, clearly defining the information of both parties before adding the background; this will improve the reading flow. Secondly, don't keep changing or using the same pronouns (like "that man"). Again, readers won't read all your text; skipping a few words is normal. However, if you skip a word and don't know who "he" or "she" is, and the main perspective keeps changing, you'll see many complaints about this in the comments. Use names whenever possible, or have a fixed pronoun, like "a tuft of hair," which is very memorable. Don't be afraid to repeat names; don't be afraid of filler text. This is a summary of online novels. I think the author has great potential and talent, but still needs to understand readers' reading habits. After all, online novels need to cater to readers' reading habits.

I couldn't find such a good-looking Western fantasy novel in Qidian, but I found it in Tomato. The most important thing is that there is no messy harem for the heroine. Every time I read Qidian, I want to say that if you don't know the emotional line, don't force it. Sometimes in order to force the emotional line, I feel that the protagonist has been taken away. This is great. Every judgment is decisive and rational. Come on! Keep it like this!!

This author has a truly amazing ability: to maintain a certain level of content while also managing to padded it with filler. Every chapter has content, but overall, it feels rather flat. I have to admit, his skill is undeniable. 😂

It's very good to watch, and the pure technical skills are not as polite as there is currently no romance protagonist. A daily no-CP game that prefers adventure and combat style. To be honest, this kind of show is quite hard to find. I was tired of romance stories before, and the daily casual stories were too bland. If I wanted to find a male fighting show, it would either focus too much on fighting (I can't understand it, but it seems to be very strong) or the protagonist's speech would be unclear. This article is very good. Cheers, author💪

This is a rare gem among Tomato's books. The protagonist is decisive but not entirely cold-blooded, bordering on lawful neutrality. He takes what he should and doesn't covet what he can't. The background setting is detailed, and the integration of D&D ensures the power levels aren't inconsistent. There are some differences in the economic system before and after, but mature readers should learn to overlook that. The protagonist's overpowered abilities are also very satisfying. Some say the power levels are suppressed, but the protagonist is already so strong that you forget he's a halfling child. His journey has been full of hard work and sweat, with risks and rewards. The only drawback is that the protagonist is always passively dragged into trouble; hopefully, there will be a patch or a gradual increase in the protagonist's initiative later on. The supporting characters are also well-developed, some good, some bad, but none are stupid. However, the setting of the fellow countrymen is a bit confusing; they don't introduce side quests and diminish the protagonist's unique characteristics. They could easily be set up in other worlds. Compared to the author's previous works, this one shows significant improvement, and the author may find a suitable theme. I highly recommend checking out QD for further exploration.

Following on from the previous book, this one didn't disappoint. It's a Western fantasy novel, and the initial plot points, because the protagonist is still developing, are somewhat reminiscent of the martial arts world of a ranger. The pacing is excellent, with a good balance of tension and release, and minor climaxes every few chapters. The main storyline is clear, and the protagonist is well-developed. It doesn't feel like the author is simply piling up adjectives; rather, through a series of events, the reader feels that the protagonist is extremely intelligent, analytical, observant, and seizes every opportunity to improve his life.

The author's writing is as excellent as ever. While the story isn't particularly dramatic, it's captivating. I didn't initially like Western fantasy, so I didn't read it at first. But now, having run out of books to read, I found myself able to keep reading without getting bored. The author's writing is truly superb; even those who don't usually like this genre should check it out. You'll enjoy it after reading a few chapters. The author's skill lies in their character descriptions. They don't rely on adjectives but rather on the characters' actions and choices to reveal their true nature, making the characters vivid and real, rather than one-dimensional or artificial. Furthermore, the author... It also excels at portraying human nature, with good and evil (but not one-sidedly; for example, the protagonist would put himself in danger to save Xiao Lai Tou, but he also tested Xiao Lai Tou's lack of compassion, showing that he would kill people he had been around in order to survive. His words and actions showed that the protagonist is a person with principles but also decisive in killing). It also portrays the characters' desire to live, the different characters' stances (the people of the Black Mountain Merchant Guild also want the people of their land to live a life of plenty), and the villains are not necessarily vicious or stupid (although they are scheming against the unsuspecting, they are a step slower than the protagonist, but they can also react quickly). Weaknesses: The dialogue is a bit tiring to read, requiring you to understand the context; the novel's title doesn't match the novel itself; the synopsis is also average; the author's writing style is average; it's not bad anywhere (even compared to published books), but in today's fast-paced reading era, non-fast-paced, fast-paced novels are hard to be loved by the general public.

A rare and beautiful Western fantasy novel with a reasonable setting. I have read more than 400 chapters and have a few small questions. The first one is about the setting of adding attribute points. I don't understand it. The meaning in the article should be that the more points you add, the more points you need. If you only rely on adding points, the attributes can only approach 10 infinitely, but cannot exceed 10. But the problem is that if the attributes are increased by other means other than adding points, and then add points, won't the points used to add points increase at this time? I don't understand what the law is. Second, there is no clear one-to-one correspondence between attributes, levels, and transcendence, but there is a method in the article to correspond, but the author is not clear. Third, judging from the title of this book, it should be about passives, but now that it has 400 chapters, this is not very clear. Fourthly, the author should be trying to suppress the combat power. The development of the protagonist seems to be a hammer here and there. Before the swordsmanship is fully developed, he will engage in magic. Before the magic is fully developed, he will engage in lance and even carpentry. Fifth, the people in the article are too vindictive. This is how most of the protagonist's troubles come, but he can still barely accept it. Although there are some problems, this book is also a rare good book. I thought that the author would return to the main story later, but I didn't expect that the more he wrote, the more he wrote. It became completely unreadable. What a pity for such a good book.

Very good. I've read up to chapter 101 so far. While I don't know if the 7. X rating means it flopped later, it's the best male-oriented novel I've read so far. The author's control over human nature is brilliant; there are frequent scenes of human struggle, and the main and supporting characters are well-developed. There's no harem, no female lead, no ridiculous romance. The protagonist is rational, intelligent, decisive, and ruthless, yet retains a sliver of decency—for the little beggar who followed him during his most difficult time. Tears and anger are useless when you're powerless; emotions only have value when you can fight back. The protagonist has traits I greatly admire: he's always striving to become stronger, always calmly analyzing and decisively killing. As for the plot, just when I felt it was getting a little boring, the story would suddenly take a dramatic turn, and the pacing is excellent. I will continue reading. I've read the latest chapter! I didn't expect to finish reading over 700,000 words so quickly. So far, there are no major flaws. This book doesn't use exaggerated contrasting characters or plot devices to highlight the protagonist. Many descriptions that would be incredibly satisfying in other male-oriented novels on the Yangshizi platform are presented in a more understated way, making it very comfortable to read. There's no mindless face-slapping thrills, and the protagonist doesn't create unnecessary trouble for himself; he respects my intelligence. It's pure combat, pure growth, and a purely intelligent and rational character. From a beggar living in the sewers to a super adventurer, it's the kind of leveling-up and becoming stronger novel I love. There's no harem/ambiguity or brainless teammates. I don't know why the rating is so low; maybe it's limited by the Yangshizi platform. The biggest problem with this book might be that the satisfying moments are presented somewhat blandly, although that fits the protagonist's character. If it were improved a bit, I think it could be a paid male-oriented novel on Qidian.