Genshin Impact: Disguised as an Old Woman, I Become a Harbinger

The second review of this book is here Summary: 1. This book switches between Desmoulins and the protagonist. It is a poisonous point for others to know that the protagonist is a vest. Reason: Desmoulins is a woman and the protagonist is a man. Suggestion: Change others to know that the protagonist is Desmoulin, and change it to make others think that the protagonist is the adjutant Desmoulin brought when he was the adventer. 2. Some of the paintings are too abstract and can be considered toxic, but considering that I am not a professional author, I can accept it personally. Reason: A large number of readers are always not adaptable to an overly abstract style of painting, which may result in the loss of a large number of readers. Once the recommendation period is over, readers may drop off significantly. Suggestion: Reduce the overly abstract style of painting and change it to an abstract style that is acceptable to most readers. 3. This book is a rare theme, Delta X Genshin Impact. This subject matter will attract a large number of readers, so I hope you are prepared to be criticized by fans on both sides. Reason: There are always people who will argue and cannot be stopped, so don't be conceited. Suggestion: Don't engage in theoretical warfare and actively listen to good opinions. Summary of this review: New authors have a bright future. If you are a professional author, you cannot get more than 3 points, but for new amateur authors, 5 points is a compliment. Note: The above are personal opinions and are for reference only. Okay, let me follow up on the review. The author is very good and is willing to listen to opinions. I have changed what I said. If there are no such obvious mistakes in the future, this book will have a bright future.

To be honest, the author's writing is still a little short of five stars, but I want to see if he can write a better plot later. The character of the protagonist is quite good. I like it very much.

The author is pretty good-looking and listens to advice [like][like][like]

It's very nice, but the update is a bit slow. I'd like to give it a five-star rating to encourage it.

Very nice, (the sky belongs to Havke)

Super super invincible and good looking

The subject matter is so good

Very good, very good

Ok, i like it

So the Queen of the East=Jacob Harfke?