Esports: The Unhinged AD Only Listens to His Support

The writing is pretty good, but the author needs to bring emotion when writing [sending my heart] I think this article is overall good, the setting, hehe, I like it. The only shortcoming is that when I read it, I couldn't relate to it. It seemed that they had no emotions, or the emotions were too unified. It felt like all the characters had similar personalities and no distinctive characteristics. (This is my summary of my feelings after reading five chapters) Dear author, please keep writing, I will keep reading the first one [Blow a kiss] I didn't continue to read it. The author may have improved the shortcomings of the character's unclear personality in the follow-up. You can read other people's comments and then decide whether to read it or not. If you have any questions, you can ask them. As long as you see them, they will be answered. If it is about this book, it has been a long time ago and the reference significance is not very great. You can try to read a few chapters by yourself.

I write book reviews with both praise and criticism. I hope it is useful to you. The first part was very frustrating, but the second part was a lot better. The first part made me want to punch those people (I won't spoil who they are, and the writing in the beginning was so compact, it was a bit tiring to watch). If you can't win, don't force yourself to do it. E-sports is the original sin, but the dictatorship of the main attack is so exciting. The characters should have been improved, but there are still some characters that are a bit flat, and the first half of the book is a bit depressing. You can skip chapters if you don't want to read it after you understand it. I skipped chapters and I didn't find anything that I couldn't understand. I really like some of the descriptions of e-sports in this book. The kind of playing style where you just listen to others' instructions and don't use your brain can only be known by experiencing it. You can win easily without doing anything. It's very easy to play. I'm so envious😭😭😭 The setting of the protagonist is also very good, and it is not perfect all at once. I really appreciate the protagonist's performance in facing setbacks/things. The relationship between the team was written in my eyes again and again. The idea is really good (from the perspective of the protagonist's ideological and character shaping). In terms of the overall plot, this event is also a good springboard. After all, it is really difficult to accept a completely different concept and style of play. The concept of this book completely hit my favorite point. Whether it is his description of human nature or the overly rational fragments, this is a plus point for me. But I don't know why it feels a little awkward. Maybe it's because some things are a bit complicated to write. I keep mentioning one feature over and over again during the game. It feels very verbose, and the same point is expressed in the same way. You can try writing it from different aspects. That's not right. It's clearly written quite well, but I feel like it has some shortcomings. The current character development of the other protagonist is still a bit monotonous, but it's very cool and it can be seen that it is slowly changing as the writing progresses. 🌟🌟🌟Oh oh oh oh! I know why I feel that the protagonist is strange. Until now, I feel that there is a slight disconnect between the protagonist and the entire team. It is a sense of detachment and erratic. I have some ideas but I can't write them. If they are really the ideas in my mind, I have to praise the author's care in the characters. I hope to be able to write some relationship plots, group portraits, etc. In the future. This kind of business-like thing is fun, but it feels very boring without the emotional ups and downs. Getting along within the team gives people a lifeless feeling. The pride of young people should not be like this. The low rating may be because someone was disgusted by the previous plot (after all, I really want to kill those people in the early stage, but writing this way is essential. The best way is to skip chapters) Here are some things that I feel are unreasonable, for the author to see: I really don't understand physical training. A person with very poor physical fitness who has never practiced at all starts training with such high intensity. This is completely making fun of his body. It is a joke to say that he is a professional coach. To allow a person with such a high risk of sudden death to complete twice as many exercises as a person with better physical fitness is to kill someone maliciously. After all, he is not wearing clothes. His psychological problems can be ignored, but the accumulated physical fitness problems are still related to the body.

This e-sports novel is full of ignition. The players go against the wind, trust each other, and break through difficulties with never-give-up efforts. The blood and bonds are intertwined, making it a hearty read. The bright moon in the Qin Dynasty is so beautiful. Do you think it's a coincidence? No, that was all designed by me

It's good-looking, and I'm very satisfied when I finish the main text. There should be no sub-CP in this article (I didn't notice if there was one). Both babies are very sweet. Although the progress is a bit slow, this is also an advantage. The highlight of the book for me is the tactics of playing e-sports (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

Hey hey hey hey, this is definitely the most enjoyable e-sports novel I have read on Tomato. The two-male protagonist is particularly enjoyable. The author is so awesome, how can he write the ordinary combat links so passionately? It is really second-guessing and enjoyable (yes, I admit that it is very intermediate, but it is also very enjoyable). How can I put it, the writing may not be the best, and the feelings may not be the most delicate, but it is definitely the most enjoyable one. I love it very much😋

I stayed up late reading this book. Overall, this is the most detailed and exciting book about combat among the e-sports articles I have read on Tomato. Shi Yan's overall command is different from traditional command, and his calm command is very charming. For me, his character is a bit awkward in the early stage, but! The attack is really good! And this book makes people excited every time they watch it! So excited! I have read this e-sports article many times. I hope the rating can be longer so that more people can read it. It goes up again, I can't do it anymore, and suddenly I found that I made a typo

Although I only watched half of it, it was very comfortable [laughs] It's rare to see this kind of situation in e-sports articles. Every player is indispensable. Their growth is the nourishment for the team's victory. Haha, I like the author's interpretation of each position. It's not really like in some games where you just squeeze out all the lanes to create a god with top skills. MOBA games themselves rely on teamwork. This is a point that I'm very happy to see after watching it for a long time. Although I have seen many people being dissatisfied with the process of easing the relationship between Sky and the team and making all kinds of complaints that reflect reality... But I personally think that since Sky has made corrections later and sincerely integrated into the team, it is already good. If you have to put it into reality, no player is perfect. You have to work together to become a better player. Generally speaking, the interaction between the main CP is very sweet, the game part is also well written, and the personal growth is also very good (Ci Qianqian) Anyway, it looks good [blowing kiss]

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. ! ! ! In the end, Qin Feng Shiyan will be a long-lasting, happy couple for hundreds of years, and will be happy forever｡:.ﾟヽ(*´∀`)ﾉﾟ.:｡

It feels so good, okay? It feels like the best novel I have read among all the novels I have read. I have never played League of Legends but it feels inexplicably cool. I like watching the two male protagonists and I also like the feeling of being evenly matched.

The rebirth part is handled very well. There is no sudden change in ability, but the ability of the original owner plus the ability of the male protagonist. The combination of powerful forces can be regarded as an invincible opponent in the world. The storyline is on point step by step without any delay. I haven't read such a heart-warming story in a long time.