Honkai Archives: Becoming Yunli in Abydos

How should I put it? The book is a good book but it has some poisonous points. 1. The combat power is a bit harsh. Yunli, as a destiny walker, is much stronger than ordinary people (not excluding the situation of not having enough food). In the PV and main line, Yunli can hold such a big iron and jump up and down on the roof, which shows the agility of his body and the power of his strength. 2. At present, this book has a bit of incorrect setting of iron collapse, which has been changed. I hope the author can read the information to understand [shy] I hope this book will get better and better Happy reading, fellow pioneers

Putting aside the minor flaws such as students not being able to tell the difference between Halo and the salty porridge setting, every character I created is pretty good, and the plot is also very warm. Although I think Hoshino at that time would not have said that much. Now he is portrayed a bit like the dwarf senior who couldn't beat me in the game in our college C&C. There are also some plot plots that I hope will be solved in a way that is comfortable to watch in the future instead of frustrating. I'm really enjoying reading it so far, and I hope the author can stick with it.

It's OK to say that it's a growth form, and it's true that it's a little explosive, but I don't know why it feels inexplicably aggrieved, especially the quarrel in the new chapter (Yunli himself may have such a reaction). However, the author himself has said that this Yunli is not Yunli, and hopes that the emotions of a time traveler can be added to Yunli's own emotions, otherwise it will feel like an iron bastard who is sulking no matter what. In terms of combat power, Chun Chun is preparing for a long story, otherwise the description would not be so slow. I hope that it will be around the time when the teacher comes, or at the end of the first week, he will directly regain his full strength and slap Mystery on the ground? (It's best to show Lao Xing's broken worldview. Yunli should have that kind of strength, right?)

Looking forward to the mid-to-late stage and the knife, please support the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

The writing is quite nice, but the update frequency of once a day is a bit too little. It's not enough to read (even if it's updated once a day, how come it has dropped from more than 2,000 words to just over 1,000 words now [face covering] [face covering] @ Different Diebao

Hoshino's temper shouldn't be that bad. If it's really that bad, I think I know why there were only two people left at that time.

It's so good that you can read it in one sitting without any problem („• ֊ •„)੭

Diebao's writing is very good, I will continue to work hard [Love]

This book has potential and is very interesting.

The first words are quite satisfactory, but I feel that the second part is quite interesting, especially after Lao Meng's death. You can watch the plot carefully. This is one of the few novels I can find that contains a knife, and I feel that the knife is very appropriate. Anyway, I hope the author can update it frequently [Like][Like][Like]