Ghost Stories: Even as a Monster, I Still Try My Best to Get Close

Changes to a hundred, the writing is excellent, and there are zero descriptions of women's clothing, women's bodies, and female degeneration. The heroine has no trace of masculinity and can be treated as a woman. It's a very good setting. The heroine has her own system of weirdness, and the second heroine is a player of the national luck system. This is really amazing. The interaction between the two is also very sweet. Chapter 18 is well written. I cried when I read it. The empathy ability is too strong, and the emotional line is silky smooth. Looking forward to the follow-up National Games dungeon, the cute heroine and the strong female secondary character, tsk tsk tsk.

This is one of the better ones I've written so far. The writing style is good, and the story written has a certain logic, although it can be seen that it has been patched and the flaws are not covered up. It seems to me that this novel already has a score of 9 or above. Please update it well. Come on! Another note: If you want to write an emotional scene between the two protagonists, it is recommended to write it in a more stream-of-consciousness way (avoid the dark room). Another thing: the prologue and the first chapter are both set in ancient China. The previous script was a European castle. The next one may be a Yin Yang Lao, a containment object, or a Western urban legend (Wendigo or something).

Read from the beginning to the end in one go, and briefly talk about the problems in the novel. First of all, the relationship between the two heroines develops very quickly, which gives people a rather abrupt feeling, but it is not very affecting (it is really worth watching if you like watching dual heroines, the two heroines get along very sweetly). Also, there are currently two dungeons updated, but both are Chinese-themed. Since the rules and ghost stories are global, they cannot be too biased towards Chinese themes (the problem is not that big, after all, there are only two copies, and unlimited flow novels will not lack themes). Then there is the plot and story, a more classic tragic story background, and then the two heroines go through a series. The battle of wits and courage finally succeeds in influencing the weird villain with a tragic life experience, and the plot is easier for people to guess at a glance. That's about it, after all, you can't be too picky about new books. If the author has any clever ideas for the copy in the plot, he can write it down. Of course, it does not deviate from the novel. The setting and original intention are the most important. Anyway, keep it up, this novel still has great potential.

It would be better if we forget that the protagonist is a female protagonist. The heroine's IQ is very online, and the story is well written. What makes me feel best is that the country's think tank is very online, and the clues are analyzed perfectly. I will read the follow-up later.

Very nice It is simply a breath of fresh air in the current Internet literature world. Everyday yandere, every day yandere, just watch Dior. Reading online articles only makes you lose your brain and does not make you lose your mind. Really yandere literature has no three views. Although the subject matter is no longer new, the rules are strange and strange, these are all materials from a few years ago, but in the Internet where yandere novels are popular nowadays, this novel is really a breath of fresh air. Anyway, I thought it was quite acceptable after reading it. In short, if you think yandere is not good enough, you can read this book. But there is one evil point about this book. The third ghost story is probably because the author is not in good condition, which leads to chaos. This can be skipped. The most important thing about the third ghost story is that he got a master key, and there is nothing else. Also, the author, you are very slow in updating. You have to learn to be the donkey of the production team, you know? So starting from today, it's okay to update five chapters a day.

At present, the overall look and feel is very good. The characters are simple but the creation is relatively successful. The content is temporarily focused on the two female protagonists in the ghost story and working together to pass the level. Later, Luo Shutong seems to be able to return to the world with Xia Yubing (looking forward to (,,＞᎑＜,,)). The country is powerful, there is no mutual suspicion, and there are no brainless slaps in the face and other poisonous points. The two female protagonists are strong throughout the whole process (not counting the weak Shou Tong at the beginning!) However, there are some minor flaws in this book: the emotional transitions are a little rushed (but very sweet). The content is partly empty. For example, [Netherworld Academy] is a collective volume, but by Chapter 39, other adjudicators are only mentioned three times (uncertain). The role of the country and the barrage are somewhat reflected, but there is less writing. Our two female protagonists are very powerful, but we still need to give a little more content to other characters~ (This only represents my personal opinion, the author please don't beat me up>⤚<) Overall, it's a great read. I've read Chapter 39 in one go and my heart is beating fast. Girls' stickers are really the best. Keep up the good work, author!

It's very interesting to watch. The plot in the front is very powerful. The think tank also looks like a think tank, not a waste. I hope that the rest of it will be maintained. After all, every copy is a high-intensity brain-burning script (there will be a little knife in the middle) The only thing this book lacks is description, multi-line character description, emotional description, and plot details. The plot outline of each chapter is very good, but it is a bit difficult to express it. The relationship development is a bit fast (but it is reasonable, they are two people who lack love), and there is relatively little description of other characters. The story line is too concentrated on the heroine and the protagonist. If more multi-line descriptions can be added (for example, when the heroine is doing this, what are the other characters doing? Or give other characters more roles.)

The writing is very good, but the main character is a bit miserable. In fact, he was dissected when he came here. It feels like the brain's protection mechanism has been activated. I forgot about it. Later, I was specially trained by the system to use virtuality and flames to stimulate painful memories. Whether it is time-travel or fake time-travel, it is miserable. The speed of the relationship with the heroine is both unexpected and reasonable. The supporting characters also have very distinct characteristics (I feel that I can't survive without being distinct). The logic is very clear, and the overall writing is very good.

What is worthy of praise for this book is that the author's writing style is quite good, and the characters' perspectives are very normal, and there is no such inhuman behavior. After all, the characters set in many novels nowadays (including the protagonists) feel a bit inhuman when written by ordinary people (either with distorted views, extremely dark, crazy and perverted, or twisted yandere). It may be good to put them in novels, but sometimes it does ruin the views. Many successful novels are based on character creation. I believe that the author can definitely create a character well, unlike some novels where the protagonist is just a personal computer and cannot be saved. If the author thinks what I said makes sense, please give it a thumbs up, okay? Please don't spray thank you. This is just a suggestion, thank you all. 😀

I suddenly thought of a novel like that, in which a strange girl travels through time and gradually grows from a weak or immature to a cold and taciturn BOSS. She always stays in the strange world, providing help to challengers while also improving her strength to encroach on her territory. In the finale, she sacrifices herself to close the strange world? [Thinking] Just this Kanako can't stand it anymore. She keeps saying how important Luo Shutong is to Xia Yubing's heart. In my opinion, it's nothing more than that. If Kanako hurts Ye Zhen, she will be punched to death by Ye Fuli; if Kanako hurts any one of the orange peaches, the other one will be chopped into pieces and stuffed in the refrigerator; if she hurts Jiang Siyu, Ji Huaiyue will not allow her to live... It's a pity that she hurt Luo Shutong, which is considered a soft persimmon. Luo Shutong is the first heroine. She can be forgiven so easily for hurting Luo Shutong, and she still protects her. This so-called "Japanese yandere" is just like the previous plot of Xia Yubing contradicting Chen Jiaoxi. It is completely unnecessary. The difference is that the plot of contradicting Chen Jiaoxi will not make people feel bad at all. This Japanese yandere is just disgusting.