The Outcast: I Have a Primordial Calabash Vine Within Me

Keep it up, especially the character traits. Don't change them. Don't be like other novels where the character is decisive and calm at the beginning, but suddenly turns into a funny shark. Come on, the author will take good care of you.

The front is OK, decisive enough, although there are some flaws and bugs, but overall it is very good. Other than that, I personally don't like Fengshayan very much. Even Hua'er and Xiaobai like to be bigger than her. [Eat melon]

Great one-person story, but too short

Finally, I have a book that is completely different from the company. It feels very good. Come on, update it quickly.

I just read the beginning. Regardless of the rest, at least I was attracted by my imagination. But the protagonist has a very bad habit of talking to himself at the beginning. I don't know if the author has such a habit, but this is very bad. There are extraordinary things in the world you live in. What will happen if you overhear the protagonist? Let's put it this way. If the protagonist of many novels in the local world has a villain reborn at the beginning, it is almost always overheard inadvertently, such as a roommate or the one next to the toilet.

Thank you, the author, for reading your novel. My entropy syndrome, demon body, origin stone disease, Pamish infection, rainstorm syndrome, vocal cord worm infection, collapse syndrome, abstraction, money infection, radiation infection, cyberpsychosis, fear gas inhalation, homesickness, urban disease, distortion, slow shock, zombie transformation, witch transformation, madness, Honkai disease, loss of extraordinary beings. Control, hypothermia, Karabacteria, contact phobia, Harlan virus infection, worm infection, dark ether erosion, star scar syndrome, corpse cycle, pneumoconiosis, shock bomb disease, dragon disease, demon scale disease, ghoul infection, laughter virus infection, Flood infection, anti-life equation corrosion, subspace corruption are all cured [off single doge]

Keep it and don't change it. And this strength must be improved as soon as possible. I feel like I'm still a little far away from Heavenly Master. The Heavenly Master would just slap anyone with a normal attack, even the golden light would be useless. The protagonist has the same skill no matter who he kills. There is room for improvement. Before going abroad, I basically stopped following the Heavenly Master, and ended up going abroad for five years. Begin to engage in intrigues. Form cliques. . So speechless. It's like a different person. And the return of the Dragon King. There are a lot of them inside.

The writing is really good. Although I think the topic of revenge is a bit watery at times, it is still very good. The cultivation and improvement are also well designed. The useless growth time of the protagonist is also briefly mentioned. It does not follow the plot very much. It is just a Luotian Dajiao who was cheated by the protagonist and shattered the void. Hahaha, it is worth looking forward to 5 stars. There is nothing wrong with it.

I remember that after I traveled through the world without any risk, I was very happy and sang a song called "The Blood Song of the Three Realms". I was discovered by the "Lord of the Stars" and took me to the "Journey to the Misty" and entered the "Heavens and Worlds". I met the "God of Killing" known as the "Natural Disaster". He sat on the "Throne of the Divine Seal" and wanted to kill me, but was saved by the "Nine Heavens Sword Demon". After they recovered from their injuries, they said goodbye to me. Later, he recommended me to "The Evil King of Another World", and I did "Underworld Special Forces" in "The Unrivaled Tang Sect". There, "Galaxy Emperor" taught me "Swallowing the Starry Sky", and "Qin Emperor" taught me how to play the piano. I was developing Final Intelligence there, and I had Clairvoyant Eyes. When I have nothing to do, "The Magic Chef of Ice and Fire" teaches me how to cook, and "The God of Bacchus" teaches me how to mix wine. The most awesome thing is "Emperor". His old man taught me "Unparalleled in the World" "Peerless Magical Powers", and I followed the path of "Emperor Supreme". Soon after, I trained the "Immortal" Divine Body. Under the "Heaven Realm and Firmament", I used the "Destroy the Sky Map" to defeat the world's best master "The Evil God" and snatched the "Throne of the End of the Dharma". However, the world could not bear my power and the space was shattered. I was sucked into the "Perfect World" and returned to the "Wild Era" Yuan~~~Oh! I am old, and now it is the world of you young people, but young people, you have to update!

The plot is okay, but the writing is a bit lacking. You can read it, but it's easy to not listen to it when you listen to it I won't say that those who are curious can go and listen [laughing evilly]