Tomb Raiding: Did That Toxic Solo Fan Just Walk Into Another Shura Ground?

It mainly focuses on people's hearts. Judging from the foreshadowing, it feels like the author is playing a big game. The writing is quite smooth. The image of Gong is charming and the image is really gradually established. The reader feels comfortable while reading. From the current point of view, there are no surprises or frustrations. It can be seen that the author sincerely likes and patiently shapes the characters who steal the pen and the protagonist Xiao Mo. The only shortcoming is that it is short. I look forward to the follow-up.

Talk less! High martial arts! Respect the patriarch! ! I said this is beet! ! ! Ouch, this Zhang Mobei is too serious, hahaha. I knew it was the Zhang family at a glance. Our society is afraid that Mobei baby only cares about the patriarch. The wounds on his body and the slowed body recovery ability indicate that he has been subjected to long-term human experiments and the identity information implanted by the system. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, the damn Wang family has bullied my good baby! ! ! (I know it's the system, but I'm still angry! Ahhh, the children of the Zhang family are all good babies, why do they suffer so much?) The most important thing is that the Zhang family in the dark discovered that there was an unidentified person next to their patriarch who was suspected of being the Zhang family. Instead of turning a blind eye, he found someone to test. With the temperament of the patriarchs of the Zhang family, how could they let suspicious people get close to the patriarch? The author's writing is super, super good! The logic is rigorous and the protagonist and supporting characters in the stolen novel are not regarded as fools! ! !

Please, please give me more. I really like this setting. I just have to put on this kind of pretense, but look cool. It's a bit ambiguous, I love it! ! ! It is recommended that the protagonist maintain this strong character. Just want the bright moon to hang high in the sky. If you want them to maintain their true nature, they can't help but get closer. The emotional line doesn't need to be too fast. A little tug and ambiguity from time to time is actually quite good. The character has not collapsed either. Big, great! Come on! ! ! Please update me according to the standards of the donkeys of the production team. (I wish you good health and don't push yourself too hard!) Why is my book review collapsed? Did I speak inappropriately?

This is the correct way for the host and the system to get along. It's so comfortable to watch. Don't be aggrieved, don't compromise, just be cool, or die together at worst. I like the character of the protagonist very much, and the emotional scenes are also very natural. The protagonist is not forced to get along, but the protagonist is also very straight. He doesn't have feelings first. From other tomb robbers fan fiction, I feel that they are a bit licking the protagonist. Even the one who is being chased is quickly attracted and doted on.

The story is very interesting. If the language can be clearer and more concise, readers will be more immersed in it and the rating will increase. As long as some contradictory logic and incomplete components are corrected, the readability will be greatly improved. Overly lengthy modifications will blur the main body of the sentence, and continuous and multiple overly complex sentence patterns will increase the difficulty of reading, making the reader need to wipe a piece of glass repeatedly to see what is inside. Repeated reading can only understand the idea expressed in the sentence, interrupting the coherence of reading and destroying the sense of immersion. Appropriate use of dashes and semicolons as logical connections will greatly improve this. For example, in the chapter about Monty Python, when the protagonist looks at the wound of the giant python, the overly long modifier "almost stabbed by him" destroys the main sentence of the sentence, and the logical adverb in this modifier is (almost) a little far away from the modified word, and the paragraph about the wound at the beginning of the next chapter "Spreading Salt", "Almost at the same time, I discovered "After the python's reaction", almost (close to but not completely) and at the same time (completely at the same time) are two completely contradictory words. If they appear as adverbials in the same sentence, there will be logical contradictions. It is understandable but very awkward. If the fixed phrase "at the same time" is not added after, there are many similar problems. Again, the core of the story is very interesting, but the expression is somewhat lacking. If it can be improved, the rating will definitely be higher.

I want to see the main attack on the heartthrob + all the members single arrows + the male protagonist Tie Zhi Dumei [I learned it]

It's a really good read about Tomb Raider 00100. The protagonist Xiao Mo is super cold-faced and cute, and it's natural to get along with the protagonist group. With the help of the system and him, in the eyes of outsiders, Xiao Mo is a super beautiful and strong woman who can arouse people's desire for protection. However, the experience is just to complete the background and not abuse the protagonist. The protagonist control can feel free to enter.

The setting of this book is also great. It is a series of beautiful, powerful and tragic stories. The male protagonist is not controlled by the system, and he threatens the system to die with him at every turn. What looks beautiful and miserable in the eyes of outsiders is actually not that miserable. This book is very interesting, but there are too few of it nowadays. But looking at the introduction, can the male protagonist be bent? Can he not be bent? The male protagonist has always been straight, and others are interested in him. This kind of writing is very interesting.

It's good to watch, and the character of the protagonist is very interesting. There are some points in the protagonist's speech that really poked at me and made me laugh to death. The system is also easy to integrate, not annoying and not too stupid. The abilities and prizes given by the system are not directly invincible, they are just right. Especially the current plot and this parallel world, I think it is quite interesting to write. Putting it down a bit, it's still a good watch, but Wu Xie has too many inner dramas about love, and he doesn't even realize that he is very attached to love. It feels like he has no core of his own at all. As soon as he sees the protagonist, he is obsessed with inner dramas about love, and he is extremely dependent on the protagonist. I think this is a bit too much. Although fan characters are inevitably biased, I think it's a bit too much.

It's a fairy tale. Needless to say, the author's writing is great. The plot is smooth, the emotions are sweet, the protagonist setting and Goldfinger are refreshing and reassuring. Different people have different points of dissatisfaction. To me, the whole story is unremarkable. The protagonist is too cute. It is a contrast between cool guy and cuteness. The atmosphere with the little brother is truly the only one I have ever seen in a BL article. Both of them are people of few words. In some cases, there is a cute and cute sense of déjà vu (pure eye contact is like this), but at critical moments, they understand each other very well, and they are very in tune with each other. They are both strong. It's delicious. Come on boss, I will chase it to the end [Send heart] I saved some articles before after seeing the protagonist pass out and travel to another world and meet Wu Xie and Heixiazi from different periods. Is there any sister who is following the article and can kindly inform me that the protagonist has returned to the previous timeline? [Sending Hearts]