Jiang Jin, I'm Claiming the Number One Player's Wife!

The sweet romance novel from the early days has a bit of a sadistic flavor, and it's okay for newcomers to write it. However, in the later stages of the novel, it may not be particularly relevant to the title of the book. However, there are early ancient novels where each character has the feeling of a little related story, which is more suitable for those who have just started novels, or those who are not smart and like sweet things, just skip the sad scenes. These are suggestions only. The title of the book is Online Games, and the introduction is about the same. The early online games and meeting parts are okay, but after this stage, it basically has a little bit of content, so it feels like the positioning is wrong. It would be more accurate to change it to another name and a more suitable introduction. (If it's not suitable, just keep it now) In terms of character design, in fact, the protagonist, supporting characters and their families are relatively complete settings. Some of the descriptions may feel like a novice novel, so the character design slightly makes up for this shortcoming. In terms of emotions, because the male and female protagonists are set in different places, it is probably the male love brain that falls in love at first sight vs. The female sweetheart who responds to the preference after receiving it. There is no big problem in this aspect, but the description is a bit old-fashioned and crooked. Emotional descriptions in the early ambiguous period are better than straightforward verbal descriptions in the later stages. The storyline is fast-paced and somewhat jumpy. After all, it is an online game - meeting - campus - junior battles between wealthy families - grudges - big fights between wealthy families. This is probably the case If we were to look at the early ancient times and complete the writing, it is estimated that there would be 1000-2000 chapters that could not be finished. The rhythm is just right at the moment, but there are too many parts that I want to express, and the transitions don't seem to be well connected. In the newbie period, the focus is on the complete ending and writing and character creation. On the whole, I feel that the writing style mainly needs improvement in the transition from emotional ambiguity to the later stage and later (mainly I still think it is too much, maybe now I prefer the kind of implicit but direct expression without losing unrestrained. This requirement is high, hahahaha). The supporting character setting and deputy CPs are better off because they don't have so much emotional expression. Come on

What is the relationship between Xia Ru and Lu Shujun? [Thinking]. It was mentioned earlier that Lu Shujun is a playboy. In the newly updated chapters, it seems that he also has feelings for Xia Ru, so what is the situation between them? What is Lu Shujun's relationship with Xia Ru? Does Lu Shujun really have many women? [Exploration] The sight of Lu Shujun and Xia Ru makes me heartbroken [staring], I don't want them to be together, I want Xia Ru to be beautiful alone [laughs]

Good looking! ! Although Zhou Yuan's words earlier made me very angry. But I feel so distressed when I see it later. Can you please let Zhou Yuan leave as soon as possible? I beg you.

It's really good-looking, I like it so much. The love between Brother Jin and Tang Tang is so amazing, I like it so much.

It's sweet at the front and slightly knifey in the middle, overall good. The previous settings are fine

Wow, I really like this kind of book. I also found such a beautiful book. The author's writing style is so good. Please give me more [love] [send heart] [make faces] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

It's beautiful, I like it very much, it's wonderful

Very nice

It's very interesting to watch, with ups and downs in the plot. It's a bit sadistic to make people happy, but a big bit sadistic is harmful to the body. Cry hard for me

The writing is very detailed, the scenes are very real, and it feels like you are actually there.