Reborn in Dream of the Red Chamber, I Claim All Twelve Beauties of Jinling!

It's very interesting👍🏻, I just hope that I won't suddenly become a cultivator of immortality in the later stage [face covering]. I've seen this type of mutant cultivator of immortality a lot. It's really a bloody lesson... Okay, I also hope that the author will continue to work hard [learned]

It's good to watch, but the pace is too slow... I have been preparing for the exam for more than 400 chapters for a year since the beginning, and I haven't finished writing the plot... The emotional scenes are purely ambiguous, but after all, they are full, and the career is indeed too slow... The appearance rate of the second wife every day is in the chapters! The overall text is well written, but it is more suitable for people with patience to read it slowly~

"The top scorer in the scientific examination at the beginning" was written for more than 20 days before the exam started.

It's very well written. It has to be 5000 uniform in Qidian, but it's not sure in Tomato [smile] Kudos to the author. Chunwei has written 300 chapters without even starting. He has not even touched a woman in more than 250 chapters. He is still a young boy.

Overall it's great, the creativity and the writing style are all very good. Some people may find it slow, but that's what Red Mansion fans are like. If you beat the old lady or Mrs. Wang at the beginning, you'll be able to speed through the game. [Laughing and crying]

Compared with other Red Mansions novels, the score is a bit lower. I feel like it should be above 8.5. Some parts of the writing (actions and dialogues) feel a little verbose, but the logic and plot are both excellent [Like]

The writing is very good, but the first one has not started yet. It's not that it's bad, it's just that the author has written less and is reading early. If he keeps updating and writes the next 45 million words, such a beginning will be normal, but now readers have been looking forward to it. After reaching the top spot, I started to do things, but I kept putting it off. Now I have a score of more than 7 points, which is already considered merciful by the readers. I will definitely get a higher score after writing. The writing, plot, etc. Are definitely at the level of 9 points, but I need to work harder on the rhythm.

It's an okay book. The love line is long but not complicated, and it's parallel to the career line. At least it doesn't seem to overwhelm the protagonist. The shortcomings are also obvious. The two lines plus the treatment of Jia Baoyu and making friends are too long, and there are some problems with the character portrayal.

I think this book is quite good-looking, and most of the characters in the book are consistent with the original work. The score shouldn't be so low. Maybe it's because of the name of the book. I think it should be rated 9 or above, which is much better than most of the Red Mansions written today.

The Yuanzi play is well written, and the lightning protection is also okay. Qin Keqing is a new car and deserves praise. The main problem is that the plot moves too slowly, and I don't know when spring will arrive. Of course, there are advantages to being detailed. After all, the main thing to watch in The Red Mansion is the garden opera. In short, I hope the author can quickly finish the most exciting point of Chunwei. There will probably be plots about the confinement of the wolf to Juxu and the rebellion later on. There is still a lot to write about. I really want to see the protagonist step by step become a legendary emperor who can win three yuan in a row in literature and conquer the world in martial arts.