Reborn in Dream of the Red Chamber, I Claim All Twelve Beauties of Jinling!

It's really good! 👍🏻 I just hope it doesn't suddenly turn into a cultivation story later on 🤦. I've seen too many cultivation stories with this sudden change, and it's a lesson learned the hard way... Anyway, I hope the author keeps up the good work! [Learned something]

It's good, but the pacing is too slow... After a year of preparation (over 400 chapters since the beginning), the plot is still not finished... The romance is purely ambiguous but at least well-developed, but the career development is indeed too slow... The second wife appears frequently in every chapter! Overall, the writing is quite good, but it's more suitable for patient readers to savor at a leisurely pace.

It's very well written. If it were on Qidian, it would easily get 5000 average views, but on Tomato, it's hard to say. 🙂 You're overestimating the author. He wrote 300 chapters of "Spring Enclosure" and still hasn't even started; over 250 chapters he hasn't even touched a woman, and he's still a virgin.

He wrote "The first scholar to pass the imperial examination" and then wrote it for more than 20 days without the examination starting.

It's not bad, it's rare to find a show where you can collect all the female leads, but the main storyline progresses very slowly. If you like shows with more slice-of-life elements, you might want to check it out. The pace is too slow, I can't stand it. Can you believe that after collecting all the female leads, we still haven't received a single word after more than 500 pages? What are readers coming here for? Don't you have any self-awareness?

Overall, it's fantastic. The creativity, writing style, and the overpowered plot devices are all excellent. Some might find it drawn out, but that's how Dream of the Red Chamber fanfiction is; if you kill off the old woman and Lady Wang right away, you've got a speedrun. 😂

Compared to other Dream of the Red Chamber novels, this one gets a slightly lower score; I feel it should be above 8.5. Some parts of the writing (actions and dialogue) feel a bit verbose, but the logic and plot are excellent. 👍

It's well-written, but the "Top Scholar" part hasn't even started yet. It's not that the author is bad, it's just that the author hasn't written much yet, so readers are getting in early. If the author continues updating regularly, this kind of start would be normal by the time the story reaches 4 or 5 million words.

It's a decent book. The romance storyline is long but not tedious, and it runs parallel to the career storyline, at least not overshadowing it. The flaws are also obvious: the two storylines, plus the sections on disciplining Jia Baoyu and making friends, make the book too long. The character development is also slightly problematic.

The garden scene was well-written, and the warnings were decent. The fact that Qin Keqing is a new character deserves praise. The main problem is the plot is moving too slowly; it's unclear when the imperial examinations will even begin. Of course, this meticulousness has its advantages, since the main appeal of *Dream of the Red Chamber* lies in the garden scenes.