Stop Chasing the School Beauty, She's the Trouble-Maker Upstairs

Great book! Give me a five-star review! Lao Ji, you must keep writing. O(≧口≦)O The first volume is over, give yourself another thumbs up [cool]

Tomato is a rare first-person novel. I was attracted by the cover at first (it should be changed now). After the first 15 chapters, it becomes interesting. The author will also add some very beautiful AI illustrations from time to time, which is not comparable to 🍅's AI. The heroine's setting also has a fantasy and romantic color. A smart person should be able to guess the name of the heroine after reading the introduction. This is the highlight of this book and traditional campus novels (but it will take more than 200 chapters to complete) Now), the author also laid out good foreshadowing. A frequently mentioned image in the book must be useful later. The early plot may be a bit confusing, such as some of the heroine's behaviors (why she should be nice to the hero), but this should be related to her setting background (actually I don't know why, because the real setting of the heroine has not been fully revealed until I wrote this comment. Anyway, it shouldn't be a cliché just because I saw it when I was a child) Although it is said to be a novel about youth pain, the author has already guaranteed that the ending will be he, so feel free to read it, the knife in the middle is just a bump in the road. One of the few shortcomings may be that the early writing is not very good, which makes it a bit awkward to read (it smells like a Japanese light novel), but this problem was solved soon, because those who really read it should be immersed in the plot, and the writing has improved greatly after 40 to 50 chapters. Finally, I highly recommend it based on my 1,300 hours of reading time. I know that first-person campus novels may be very niche on Tomato, and even many people can't read it, but you might as well take a look, because after reading the book for so long, the last novel that can really stir up my emotions with a knife was read a year and a half ago. This book has a strong sense of substitution, and the plot and setting are definitely worth the money. The current situation of this book definitely cannot match its content, like a buried gold mine. So recommend, strongly recommend, strongly recommend (say important things three times) In addition, the author should hurry up and write such a long recommendation [angry] [angry] [angry] Finally got a rating [laughing]

Feeling uncomfortable, I went back and read the first chapter, so it means that Xiaohua is really dead? Is it also in vain to hold Ye Ye again? Like the male protagonist in "Seeing Spring", he can only rely on imagination to be with the female protagonist? I feel very sick in my stomach right now, and the following chapters are constantly expanding around the memory of the male protagonist towards the female protagonist? Is the last person guarding the memories? When school started, the way my classmates looked at Ye Zi, I thought that maybe the heroine had to transfer schools due to family reasons or had to leave for a while, but suddenly she said she passed away. It was very sudden. Although I said before that I should "take care of myself", it was so sudden. If it was he, I couldn't think of anything to "resurrect" Xiao Hua. I was very upset! ! !

Highly recommended. The author writes so well, especially the description of the atmosphere and the various inner struggles of the male protagonist. It is really rare to see such a delicate novel written in the first person on the Internet. One scene that left a deep impression on me was about the male protagonist who was sad about something (I kind of forgot the details) and pressed the elevator only to find that the elevator was broken and he had to take the stairs. This aspect really portrayed the male protagonist's feelings very well. I have also tried to write some things myself. I didn't think much of this kind of scene description when I read it, but when I wrote it, I thought it was really amazing. Finally, I hope that if there are new readers, they can actually leave enough time to read more at once. After all, many things in this book need to be read slowly and immersed to get a feel for it. Speaking of the heroine's orange soda and orange aroma, I thought of a poem "Whenever I cry sadly, I always smell the fragrance of orange blossoms." Because the fragrance of oranges or tangerines is actually a little bitter, which feels very suitable for the faint sad atmosphere in the early stages of the novel (the author must say that there will be a good ending!!!)

The last time I saw this kind of youth literature that made me feel bright, it was the "Realistic Youth Story", but the author of that book failed to write a complete ending (Part 2) [crying] When I first read this book, I thought it was another traditional bamboo horse and heaven [face covering], but after that Later, I saw the throbbing confusion of the young boy towards the kindness of the girl; I saw the clumsiness and caution of the young man facing the emotions in his heart; I saw the changes in the relationship between traditional Chinese father and son... In general, the emotional portrayal is quite real and delicate, but some scenes are also quite embarrassing😓. I hope the author can give the work a complete ending just like Hua Qingxue will not lie to Ye Yunxiu. Come on!

I came across this accidentally, and it's really good if I look closely. I don't know why the traffic is so bad. I really admire the author for being able to persevere like this.

At present, I see that the author is not good at characterization. The writing style felt a bit immature at first, but the more I read, the more I feel it is improving. The images of each supporting character are also very three-dimensional. The comparison of various family friendships, love, teacher-student relationships, the growth of several key characters is very full, and this book is more like writing about the growth of Xiao Ye than the pure love development of most romance novels. The science fiction setting of Xiao Hua is also very attractive. There is no place in the whole text that makes people want to abandon the novel. I have not seen any novels of the same type. At least it's not of such high quality as Knife Weiwei, and it seems to have a good ending. It's also the last novel I'll finish before the college entrance examination. If there are any new novels, I'll have to wait until the college entrance examination is over before supporting them.

This is my first book review, for this delicate and gentle novel. Novels from a first-person perspective are rare and difficult to write in Western novels, but in this book, I experienced the unique charm of first-person novels for the first time. The story of Xiao Hua Xiao Ye is tactful and full of youthful spirit, and the work brings the characters to life and their souls. Look really awesome [grass has been planted] [admiration] In short, if you click on this book, you will definitely fall in love with this story, this growing boy, and this gentle and strong girl. (Keep working hard, you must write it down to the ending) [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

When I first read it, I felt it was average, and some places were a little awkward. But the more I read the back, I felt that it was really well written and of high quality. Although it seems that the traffic is a bit low, it is one of the best books I have ever read. It is much higher quality than many popular books. Now I just feel like it's not enough. Also, I saw the author say before that he finished writing and said it all in one breath. Is that true [laughs]. Come on, author, the writing is really great.

I finished reading it in two days and one night. It can be seen that the author's writing style is a bit immature, but the new author can accept it. Xiaohua said that he will never cheat on the male protagonist. This should be the most important foreshadowing. The message left by Xiaohua means that he will definitely return, but I actually hope that the male protagonist will take the initiative to find Xiaohua. The male protagonist has changed now, and it should be the male protagonist who takes the initiative. The author said that it will be completed in May, but it is a bit difficult to see the current update speed. Is the author going to do something big [smile] It is estimated that it has just started to be cultivated now, and it is estimated that it will be cultivated until the florets return.