After Dying on a Spy Mission, I Become the Frail First Disciple of an Immortal Venerable

Your writing is like a smart elf, galloping freely in the world of words. Every character seems to be given fresh life after being arranged and combined by your hands. The plots of your stories have ups and downs, like a passionate piece of music, which firmly captures the reader's heartstrings and makes people immersed in it involuntarily, following the fate of the protagonist in joy or sorrow. When describing the scenery, he is meticulous and can show the picturesque scenery vividly before his eyes, as if he is in that wonderful world, smelling the fragrance of flowers and hearing the singing of birds. So author, don't stop updating😭😭

There's not much to say. It's just a little different from the master-disciple stories I usually read. It's a very novel setting. But I don't know why I felt so bad watching Xiao Tan's story. It's very interesting. I'm looking forward to the following plots, just don't be too sad [laughs]

Personally, I feel that this book is quite interesting. It is different from the general master-disciple novels. The setting of Judge, which is integrated at the end, feels a little separated from the previous one. But because I like both books very much, I think it is okay. Overall, the author's setting is very good. It's novel. I hope that the problem of Qin Gu's life can be completely solved as soon as possible. I feel that he is suffering too much. I hope he can feel better. I want to read about losing horses and getting caught. Although the author updates once a day, the number of words in each update is quite large. I hope the author can be more productive.

It is undeniable that the plot and writing really attracted me. However, the plot in the early stage where the protagonist's body bug drags down the protagonist is really too long. It is not recommended to watch the fast-paced movie because it will be annoying. I really like it and suggest that you wait until it is finished. You can skip chapters appropriately and fill in the plot later. Then there is the fact that Master's character is really cool in certain places, but! When he thinks that the freedom of the protagonist should be restricted for the good of the protagonist, I personally think that the sick and weak setting of the protagonist at this time makes me feel aggrieved. At this time, I am very invincible and hope that the system (useless thing) or any external factors can directly bring the protagonist out to relax the mood of the protagonist, including me, a frustrated reader, and enable the protagonist to solve the shortcomings of being sick and weak on the way out, and then improve himself, instead of going out and either fainting or fainting. ! ! The protagonist has become like this just to save the world. You still provoke and look down on him. Damn it, I will beat you to death. I am so angry. I re-read the book for the third time before choosing to post a book review. I originally planned to wait until the protagonist becomes stronger in the later stages, but now I'm really pissed off. The four stars are acknowledging that the author's writing and plot settings are indeed good, but they are too draggy, and there are not enough highlights. The protagonist falls down due to illness from time to time. I am really frustrated! ! ! (I don't comment on the setting of "The Judge". Readers who have read it may not be able to accept it, because I also felt a little uncomfortable and weird when I saw it, so I took a rough look at it. I personally think that the plot will not affect the later development. The homework in the article is probably just to introduce the function of the cage. If it is not possible, it will not be too much to jump directly.)

The brushstrokes are delicate, and the emotions burst out from every word and line, which not only tugs at the heartstrings, but also touches the heartstrings. The emotions triggered in the article bring me into the perspective of the protagonist, as if I am immersed in the scene, as if I am forcibly brought into the protagonist's life. The emotions exuded by the protagonist range from the calmness of an ancient well to the ripples of a stone dropped into a lake of heart. Every scene I experienced touched my heartstrings. The protagonist is not only doing traditional tasks to fulfill the wishes of his old friend and make up for the regret of accidentally killing his predecessor during the undercover process, but also to save himself from losing interest in anything and sinking into the dead sea. In the process of saving himself, he saves himself. This book is the best novel among the many novels I have read. I highly recommend you to read this book! I hope the author will take good care of his health and never stop updating! ! !

So stunning! Makes you want to read on. The portraits of the characters are three-dimensional and full. Each character has his own story and stance. There is no absolute good or bad, but they are all impressive. The description of details is at the textbook level. Whether it is every plant or tree in the scene, or every look or movement of the characters, they are all described with meticulous detail and full of picture quality. What's even more rare is that in addition to being entertaining, the story also contains profound thoughts, stimulating readers' discussion of human nature and society. It is a masterpiece that is both entertaining and thoughtful!

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Oops, I've read more than ninety chapters and finally come to review. Putting aside the issue of "Judge"'s blending of plots, the writing style is still good and the pace is slow, but there are a few obvious gaps. After solving the matter of Master's friends, there was no clear answer as to Di Yun's whereabouts, or whether he returned to space or was trapped in a cage. I think it was never explained from the time he left in Chapter 60 to more than 100 chapters, really. . It's quite annoying. Although it is a spiritual beast, its appearance rate in the early stage is okay, but it doesn't appear in the later stage. Oops. . . . If the author can see it, can you give me a reply?

The author's writing is good. I highly recommend the very different story about masters and apprentices who cultivate immortality. It just set up too many pitfalls. I was still interested in reading it and wanted someone to come and tell me what the mystery was.

This book is really good. I have fallen in love with the cp setting card. I love Tan so much for this character setting. In fact, the ratings were relatively low at the beginning and I didn't have any expectations. But the author gave me a big blow and hit my heart. 🤓This book will be my top 1 from now on. I hope you can update it as soon as possible🤏🏻. The anchor will follow you to the death!