Slay the Gods: In the Name of Xingtian, I Sentence the Gods to Death!

It's good, I like it very much. I like a single heroine. I hope it's Xiaonan or Qiangwei from Masked Team. I've read too many of Hongying. If the author can't write the emotional line, don't write it. It's okay without a heroine. I will follow this book. Finally, thank you to the author for writing this book to satisfy me, a ten-year-old bookworm. I hope the word count is not too short.

The writing is good. I just want to read a book about armor recently. Please continue to keep Lin Tian's abstract reading from boring. There is no follow-up for the heroine yet. If it is based on strength, I think Xia Simeng and Jiu Mian are better. I think Gongyang Wan is a bit too old (just a personal opinion), but I still respect the author's arrangement. Pay attention to your body author

Please ignore my identity, I am just a passerby now … Guys, look what I found? ! Wild and fresh Zhanshen fanfic! There are still many stalks without knives! Should such an interesting thing be supported by a five-star review? (Super sincere eyes) Not giving it? It doesn't matter if you don't give it, you can just come in and take a look! Being able to make the Yifei ancestors in front of the screen smile is considered a complete merit [full] [full] There is no heroine for the time being. If you want to have a heroine, Afu will hold a vote for Yifei Yanzu and you guys to choose. Afu will try his best not to let the emotional line collapse (PS: I will not remove the original partner [give my heart])

This is quite acceptable. What can be done by linking national comics with domestic special photography is to change Lin Tian's character. After all, if you can bear it, just bear it, and if you can't bear it, do it. Is there a Shura Armor Summoner in it? [Face covering][cool][laughing evilly]

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It's a very interesting fanfic. I hope there will be a Molly. I really, really want to see the others. Either there will be no updates or there will be more heroines. Please.

I was thinking, my crickets, they are not scary, they are cool summer nights, where people can sleep without worries. They are my Bai Qi, Han Xin, and Zhou Yafu, they are all affectionate and righteous, they are a pair of smiling tigers , two black dogfish, is the most powerful pass in the Central Plains, and is the expedition of the emperor. If I hear you talking about Mr. Kong Ming again, I will pierce my own ears. Deaf, but it is the embassy of the emperor, so fine, even if you pierce my ears, I will be deafened. He was stabbed to deafness, stabbed to the last moment, and committed suicide. God's will helped Cao but not Liu. Sirs, if you can tolerate the wantonness of God's will here, then allow me to retire and return to my hometown. You are gone, we What to eat? Yes, what to eat? Hurry up and find honey water. The cooked duck flew away. Where did he get such courage? How dare he attack my Yanzhou? Even if you have 80,000 steamed buns, Liu Bei will have to chew them for half a month.

I've read four chapters so far, and it's a little bit toxic. How should I put it, Xing Tian Armor Agent doesn't feel right to me. I remember that the original setting of Xing Tian Armor seems to be General Kai? Surely General Zhikai didn't use the Xingtian Armor to suppress the situation because the general was not strong enough, right? (Self-understanding, you are right to scold you) I think Xingtian Armor is just a foreign object after all, just like the Skyfire in Kevin's hand. As Kevin said: "A sword can become my weapon because only I can break it with my own hands." (Of course, Xingtian should not be the core of the Herrscher, self-understanding) And Xingtian's expressive power is so strong now. In theory, the protagonist's health is not good at the moment, so he shouldn't support the high-power output of Xingtian Armor, right? Just like when the Skyfire Saint uses the Skyfire Sheath in Siegfried's hands (it seems to be the zero rated power?), Half of his life will be lost. Kevin uses it as a flat A. It feels a bit unreasonable, so I will give four stars for encouragement first, and I will talk about it later. Discussions are welcome (Stacked Armor, I don't have any ill intentions, discuss in good faith, if there are mistakes, you can correct them, welcome to peaceful discussions, if you scold me, I will cry)

The author I hope the heroine is Memorial

The author, please take a look at my comments. I have read nearly a hundred chapters so far. As an old bookworm, I have found the following points that I suggest to modify. The first one is the description of the transition. Basically every transition uses an ellipsis to directly start another conversation, without transition words. The second is to write clearly who said this before or after what the character said. For readers who listen to books or read too quickly, this situation can easily confuse them. Regarding the issue of repeating the end of the previous chapter at the beginning of each chapter, although it is a bit uncomfortable when listening to the book, it does not affect normal reading. Five stars for encouragement By the way, there is another point. As a new author, it is okay to start writing from fan works. Fan works can save the construction of the world view, but it is best not to skip the description of the plot. You should write chapter by chapter according to the original work, but readers do not read it according to the original work. Many plots have been forgotten. If you omit the original plot, you may be worried that others will say you are stupid, but you cannot omit the rewritten original plot. You can write it from the perspective of the protagonist.