Wisteria Fragrance Across the Far Shore: Shen Shui and the Butterfly

Very good, the writing is delicate, the emotions are rich and sincere, both the literary and martial arts scenes are very exciting, the plot is advanced reasonably, the characters are not OOC despite so much self-created space, and the original story and setting are cleverly connected. It is one of the rare books in gi-nin literature that takes the butterfly ninja as the main perspective, and the family relationship between the butterfly sisters is also very, very well written, which makes up for the regret that the emotions between the butterfly sisters were quickly conveyed in the original book. Needless to say, the speed of updating is very impressive. The author is very generous and can basically update once or even twice a day. The number of words can range from four to five thousand to as many as ten thousand. It is not unreasonable for it to be popular. It's not like someone who is too lazy to stop posting for a month, and doesn't post until the readers start school, and doesn't know who it is for. Also, the early writing is too vague, and the emotional expression is not enough and procrastinating @kunbot, you are right [Thinking] In short, this is one of the best works of righteous ninja, worthy of praise and learning from other creators.

One of the top works of Ginin fanfiction, the plot is not conflicting, the writing is delicate, the emotional line between Giyuu and Shinobu is very smooth, and other descriptions are also very good. I look forward to the next Ginin fanfic.

The writing is very good, the writing style is excellent, and it is top-notch among the Tomato righteous ninja novels. He is worthy of being the Carrot Fish teacher who has done language C.

From the perspective of Hu Dieren, this book tells the story of Hu Dienin's efforts to change the tragic outcome of the second week of the game. The author's writing style is delicate and profound, his daily descriptions are warm and touching, and the battle scenes are realistic. He is also good at hiding foreshadowing, and the echoes are very clever. Yiren CP line: There are many foreshadowings, and each foreshadowing promotes the development of the emotional line, making the relationship progress quickly but not abruptly. With the company of Hu Die-nin, Yi-yong's autistic state gradually alleviated; and with the help of Yi-yong, Hu Die-nin also saved his sister. The young lovers supported each other and made progress together, step by step towards a happy ending. Sisterhood line: It really fits my imagination of Ninja Hu Die as a boy. Growing up under the care of her sister, she didn't have to bear the responsibility of Butterfly House prematurely. She is both sinister and cute, like a firecracker that explodes at a moment's notice. The author added the sisterly affection that was briefly mentioned in the original work, which makes people feel sour after reading it (I can't help but feel that it would be great if the sister was still there in the original work) The description of each character in the book is consistent with the original work, not OOC at all, and has a very deep personal understanding of the work. The difficulty of writing a full-length novel is self-evident, but I read it very smoothly, which shows that the author has profound writing skills and clear thinking. Not only is he good at laying out foreshadowing, but he can also recover it in an orderly manner. Forgive me for my lack of language. I really cannot fully express my love and praise for the author. Kavin's process is inevitably painful, but I still hope that the author can draw joy and happiness from his creation. Finally, I sincerely thank the author for his hard work.

The battle is very consistent with the original work. This is what surprises me the most. I hope the author can maintain this level of description of battle. I started reading fanfics in 20 years ago, and it has been five years now. The battle scenes in this book are the most consistent with the original work [Love]

The first time I watched Demon Slayer was when I was in the second grade of junior high school. The Spider Mountain chapter happened to be released at that time. It was also the first time I got to know Butterfly Ninja and Tomioka Giyu. I really liked Ginin at that time. I watched Demon Slayer's videos almost every day. I liked every one I met. I was also very fascinated by Ginin, but later the enthusiasm faded, and I didn't love Ginin that much. The two of them interacted less, and Tomioka died and Tomioka did not live to be 25 years old and had offspring, so I stopped fighting Ginin at all, but sometimes I brushed up on Ginin. But I can't help but stop the video, thinking if I can survive with Tomioka, and if Kanae is still alive, will she be with the Immortal River? But I don't know, Immortal River and Tomioka have descendants. This is the best life Crocodile Teacher can give them. If not, I will continue to fight, and there is some regret in my heart. Reading the author's article really completely fulfilled my inner regrets, even if it is a fanfic, I saw a different ending. Happy The ending reminds me again of the time when I watched Demon Slayer. I don't know what the world is like. It's perfect. I really like it. Even if I don't like it now, I still think the author's writing style is really good. The emotional line is not abrupt and he doesn't say anything. I give you 5 stars [heartfelt]

Nice! ! ! Every righteous person should read this book! ! ! ! I came here from a certain book. It's really good-looking. The characters' personalities and settings are very consistent with the original anime. The teacher's writing is also super good! ! ! ! !

The best Ginin article I have ever read, and also the first article I have seriously evaluated. The author's control of the character of Giyuu is really not OOC. I have read so many articles and many have OOC, but the author controls it very well, the emotional description is also more delicate, and the plot is also very innovative. Come on, author [laughing]

It is a really good book. Whether it is the early plot or the daily activities of the righteous ninjas, I felt that they are not two-dimensional, but are real living characters living around us. It is really a very good novel, and the writing is very delicate. It is rare to see such good writing [crying] [crying]

It's so beautiful, it's like the finest chaff among fine chaff. The battle scenes are also well described, the writing is superb, the plot is very close to the original novel, the new plot is also very reasonable and logical, and the characters have no OC at all. I am lucky to have discovered and read this novel!