Tang Xiaoyi's King-of-the-Kids Moments

Congratulations on the completion of your second book! Your writing style is understated yet subtly powerful. If your first book focused on storytelling, this one makes Tang's character more fleshed out and three-dimensional. I believe Shuyan is not just a character in the book, but also our perspective on Tang.

First of all, I want to say that it's very, very good. The writing is delicate and just right. The beginning is like big, sweet candies, but with a slightly sour taste, because everyone knows that after the candies come sharp knives. Later, the candies are mixed with ice shards, and in the end, there's no more pretense; several knives are stabbed straight into my heart.

This book really made me cry 🥺 Although Tang Xiaoyi isn't the main character in "Charlie IX", in this fanfiction, he is the brightest and most dazzling person in his own life! The author portrayed his childhood mischief and resilience so realistically, which made it even harder for me to accept the ending he was destined to face later 😢.

The author wrote so well! Shuyan is so adorable, and the foreshadowing was excellent, making the ending all the more poignant and heartbreaking. Early on, I could feel how much Shuyan cared for Tang Xiaoyi, studying medicine for him and working tirelessly day and night to save him and other ALS patients (though there was a little personal motivation involved).

This is the most complete and well-rounded Tang Xiaoyi I've ever read. Not only him, but the world itself is alive. We witness his growth, life, and encounters within this world—a truly real world. Most of the books I've read so far feature protagonists with fixed personality traits, such as aloofness, obsession, or optimism. You immediately recognize them as "Oh, that's so-and-so."

The story isn't built on flowery language; the future is written by oneself. Following one's heart is true feeling. Shuyan is a vivid character, and Xiaoyi is even more fully developed. It's like a blank canvas filled with the brightness of youth. After reading it, I was deeply moved, as if I had stepped out of the book. A new work from the author. Looking forward to the author's new works.

The author writes exceptionally well. The beginning is full of sweet moments, but the death of the three members of the Feather Adventure Team brings a lot of heart-wrenching scenes, especially the death of Grandma Tang, which felt so real it made my chest tighten; I wanted to cry but couldn't.

I think Tang Xiaoyi, as portrayed by the author, is very vivid and has a real knack for being a kid, which reminds me of fun things that happened to me when I was a child.

You are all good babies, take good care of yourselves!

The author's writing is excellent, the storyline is great, and the update frequency is very consistent. I hope it becomes popular soon.