Zenless Zone Zero: The Madman from the Proxy's Family

It's very, very well written, and it's solid food. But there is a common problem in fan fiction, that is, the plot is too compact, but it is innocuous. Another problem is that nowadays, people are always very nervous. Excessive description will lead to a bad impression. I hope it will be less [eating melon] But, now it seems there is one... How to say? Since Yang Jian came out, the author seems to have become so excited about writing that he no longer knows what the world is. The entire writing style has developed in a weird direction, which has caused others to be horrified and frightened at every turn. This is too bad, and it has lasted for a long time, causing aesthetic fatigue. The writing style now leans toward dark narratives, which feels very disconnected from the previous ones. The Zero Zone is not only very heartwarming, but it is not like "three cunning rabbit houses plus one, almost killed by the dead end butcher", and people die at every turn... But it can still be watched, let's watch it for a while.

Cool, finished reading the current ones. How to say it? Cool! Because sometimes reading novels is like watching TV. That makes this scene look very dazzling, you know? The key is to just watch all of The Daring Party's current episodes. I happen to have an active mind and a lot of material, which makes this scene very dazzling, you know? (Personal opinion) 1. Personally, I feel that this novel is more of a group portrait, right? Judging from the plot. Due to the problem of the protagonist, the difficulty of the entire main line jumped from the normal mode to the purgatory mode. What is intuitive is that the praise club has expanded in power and appeared early. And it's not the kind that follows the main line. After the fairy appears. The plot can only see some shadows of the original version. Cool 2. The protagonist feels very oppressive. It started out funny (after all, I was in good spirits), but then gradually became serious. Not to mention the shortcomings, it is that most of the characters in the middle are on a trembling road. But the shortcomings do not conceal my personal feelings. The following is a personal guess. The protagonist appears along with the hole. In other words, the protagonist traveled through the void simultaneously. After that, due to some factors (such as being a high-dimensional life form), it developed abilities similar to Xinsu. You can fabricate your own personality and gain the ability to fabricate characters (that is to say, a person's plug-in is made by his own hands and may be different from the original version [thinking]). Then in order to achieve a certain goal, he turns himself into a madman. (Or simply I can't hold on anymore) One last word. Billy his face is not a screen!!!

It's a bit like a question I thought about when I was a child. After the finale of a role-playing system novel, will the presence of too many characters affect the host's mental state, causing the host to frequently switch between various role-playing roles? It's a pity that I was young at that time and couldn't write or find it. I didn't expect that there is a similar one now. It's very beautiful. I haven't found anything out of the ordinary about the character's design. I like it very much.

It can only be said that the protagonist is very complex and his combat power is probably invincible. Very novel trend

A very nice book I just have a question It is known that the protagonist is named Feng and can completely transform into a woman. It is known that the younger sister is named Ling, and the two of them are "Feng and Ling" And our brother Zhe is also known as the Succubus of Liufen Street. So, will one day [laughing evilly]

Very well written, good luck to the author!

Great, I have caught up with the latest one. Let me summarize my thoughts. The third-person narrative will always have a little less sense of immersion, which is fine, but the logic in the details is not done well. You can feel a little bit of "The Crimson King", so try to change it. There are many philosophies about life, and the part in Yang Jian is also very good. The time is closed, the logic is reasonable, and the plot seems a bit tight, so you can slow down appropriately. The writing is good, it makes up for the regrets, a good book, a good book

The composition of the protagonist is very complex, but the article is unexpectedly interesting. The different identities of the protagonist are displayed smoothly, and each character is very consistent with the prototype. It's very interesting, but it's too short and not enough to watch.

Is there a female protagonist? If possible, it can appease the male protagonist [laughing evilly]

A book with a clear style. If you can escape the framework of fan fiction, it will be a sacred book. I hope the book you write can be like the one in Honkai Impact San Xu Shu and get better and better.