Myriad Worlds: Bringing Nine Yang Divine Skill into A Dream of Red Mansions

Looking at the title, I thought it was a mindless piece of writing. From a practical point of view, the author still has a certain foundation in Red Mansions. At least it's much better than the author who can't figure out many timelines and has a bunch of bugs. The character image has not been magically modified. All in all, not bad. I mainly listen and occasionally read. Saw the latest. Well written. The wording and sentences are closer to the original version. For example, the male and female relatives are separated by a screen, and the wife prepares dishes for meals. The main story line is not out of order like many noobs commented. I read it carefully because the protagonists of many events were deliberately changed, so this kind of thing does not count. There is no time lag in the main event. There are also shortcomings, 1. It is often transformed into ancient dragons, and some psychological descriptions are too complicated. The protagonist thinks about one thing for a long time. 2 Some minor mistakes, for example, Jia Dairu is Jia Rui's grandfather, and the author writes it as his father. This is an obvious error, but it is not many and does not affect reading.

There are some small flaws in the details. To be honest, Goldfinger has an impact, but it is really not big. As a time traveler, I am not a brainless writer in the early stage. I plan step by step and seize opportunities as much as possible step by step. I face various situations and mental games in the early stage. The step-by-step arrangement is really brilliant, especially the inner thoughts and thoughts on the follow-up plans. The writing is very detailed!

Jia Min's death was caused by Wang

This cheat is set very well!

It's beautiful. Jia Lian's writing is satisfying.

The writing is okay, the plot is okay, but it's just not that exciting.

It's okay, keep up the good work!

Very nice Red Mansions novel

Mark it. Good