After My Disciple Killed Me, My Junior Brother and I Got a Happy Ending

The author is really good. It's quite good. There are many parts that give the feeling that "it's good to have an outline" (although I don't know if it actually is), but there are quite a few foreshadowing elements that are resolved. Other things, let's explore some fun ideas.

Well, the author's writing is good, but why doesn't Si Qiushi tell Xu Xiao anything? It's true, as Xu Xiao himself said, Si Qiushi is always self-righteous, which is quite frustrating to read. They are indeed a strong-strong pair, but in everything they do, it's always Si Qiushi who's strong; there's almost no mutual help. It's always Si Qiushi's doing, and Xu Xiao has to guess everything.

The author writes well, but many of the comments section's double standards are really off-putting. Earlier, the protagonist blames himself for taking on a disciple who misjudged people, thus harming his sect—this is his inner conflict. Yet, many in the comments genuinely blame him.

So good! What an inspiring ensemble cast! The eldest brother is such a wonderful person, picking up one broken child after another (who later became his junior brothers). They refused to accept their fate, defied destiny, and dared to defy it. Especially the ending where everyone survived—it was truly wonderful! Points to note: Multiple pairings (and easy to switch sides).

It's beautiful, very well written and detailed. I deducted one star because the romance is progressing too slowly. When are they finally going to clear up their misunderstandings and confess their feelings? The main plot is also very slow.

It's so good, really good! Why is the rating so low and not many people are reading it? I almost missed it. It doesn't feel like a typical Taobao novel. The pacing is a bit fast in the mid-to-late stages, and the emotions don't build up enough before it fizzles out, feeling a bit light and airy. If it were more refined, it would be worth the price per word.

The author's writing is excellent, the plot flows smoothly, and the romance is well integrated into the storyline, avoiding monotony. I really enjoyed it; it's very engaging. Although it's still being serialized, I'll continue reading. However, if there's a long hiatus, I might forget about it. Maybe I'll accumulate a lot and binge-read it all at once? 🤔

Ahhh, this is so good!! I've been stuck in a rut for so long!! I stumbled upon this book and found so many of the settings were exactly what I liked. After reading a few chapters, it really captivated me!! The foreshadowing was there from the very beginning, and after finishing it, I couldn't help but admire Si Qiushi. He's so smart and powerful.

Super, super good! 💕💕💕 It's an ensemble piece with a smooth plot, well-developed characters, and a great world-building. There are tons of side couples, all of them incredibly strong (as everyone knows, the truly strong couples are the ones that make you want to switch sides). The nine fellow disciples and the master are all wonderful, and the disciples are fantastic too.

Why is no one reading such a good story? Completed This book made me cry buckets 😢😢😢 The author's writing is amazing, and the world-building is incredible. I initially thought it was just about rebirth and revenge, but I never expected Qiuqiu to even scheme against the Heavenly Dao.