In the Qin Dynasty, I Became the First Emperor's Imperial Tutor

It's really fun to watch, but I have a question. Maybe I looked too fast and didn't see some details, which is how he, as a time traveler, transformed into a calm imperial master so quickly. It feels like the transformation is very fast, but other parts are really good and beautiful.

The oppressive feeling of the supremacy of imperial power in ancient times. Every time the protagonist tries to get involved with the King of Qin, it feels very immersive. The author is very good at writing about the master-servant relationship with Zhao Gao. I don't know how to describe it, but I really think it's good.

No, it's so cool for me, Zhao Gao, no, it's so cool, it's this kind of dark servility, hahahaha, hahaha, it makes me so happy [laughs] Hahaha, hahahaha

The author's writing is really beautiful, but I know that the protagonist is very sick and weak, and his speech must be weak and intermittent. The author's writing is very good, and it also fits the protagonist's setting very well, but the protagonist speaks before Just write a little bit intermittently. After all, we also know that the protagonist is sick and weak, but we don't have to write every sentence intermittently, and it is still a word or two. I feel so anxious when I read it, and I wish I could give my mouth to the protagonist [laughing and crying] It's so uncomfortable to watch this talk, but I still don't want to read it [face covering]

The introduction is very interesting. I really want to see the reunion after immortality. I don't know if I can write about it. But it feels like it's been a long time since it's a new book. Ah the pain

How should I put it, there is indeed a gap compared to what I have seen before. The original identity of the protagonist seems not to be explained, and then he grows up a bit quickly, which feels a bit abrupt. The descriptions of the characters' actions, language, and demeanor when interacting, speaking, and doing things are piled up with words, which makes people feel that the characters in the book are not three-dimensional enough, and the description of the relationships between the characters is not enough. The writing is not profound enough. How complex is Qin Shihuang's emotion towards the protagonist? Every time he sees the protagonist vomiting blood and admonishing, it is described in a few similar words. There are repetitions in the description of characters and environment. Overall, it is very depressing to read. It is different from what I have seen before, which is also an innovation. Also, I feel that this book has some magic. Although I always feel unsatisfied when reading it, I just can't help but want to read it. I have read online articles for eight years, and this is the first time I rewarded it because I was "not satisfied". At the moment I rewarded it, I realized: Those repetitive scenes, piled rhetoric, flatness and depression were like a rusty nail, nailing me to the serial page. It does not provide pleasure, but provides "addiction" - I want to know whether the Hollow Man was finally crushed by the bronze giant, or really dug a crack under the Lishan Mausoleum; I want to know when all modernity is stripped away, can people still rely on "pure will" to leave a little warmth in the tyranny? I suddenly understood: This book is most like the Qin Dynasty itself - harsh, boring, and lacking in lyricism. This is the second time I have read a serial novel and collected it to wait for more updates. I hope the author will continue to work hard and never stop updating. Thank you

It looks good. Is there a female protagonist? The introduction looks a bit gay to me.

It's fun to watch. Emperor Shi Zhi'an is good at calculating people's hearts and calculating the world.

I was very excited when I saw the introduction. I really like this type of novel. But when I clicked on it, I listened to a few chapters, and even skipped back to read it. My eyes went dark. I can't tell what I felt. It's just different from other novels. I came here to read the wonderful story. There are There are joys and sorrows, separations, and separations. I am not here to see you describe the scenes with delicate writing. Each chapter has a lot of descriptions, including but not limited to, eyes, sounds, scenes, and scenery. My eyes darkened one after another. Sometimes the descriptions bother people who read too carefully.

The logic is clear and perfectly explains what conspiracy is.