The Dragon Clan Here

Chun Hua Da's new book, needless to say the writing style, has a sense of story so far. You can grasp the text at once, and the writing style has also improved a lot. It is more than a hundred times more comfortable to read than other novices and no-brainers. I hope it will become popular, go beyond revisiting the old days, and break through my own limits!

A novel with a very novel theme, a dragon tribe fanfic. The setting is very interesting and novel. Two similar but different protagonists in parallel time and space exchange their lives and achieve a perfect ending. The characters are well drawn and the writing is very good, giving me the feeling that the characters in the book are vaguely alive. From the current point of view, there are no poisonous points. Various people with completely different personalities but the same essence exchange lives with themselves in the parallel world. Here, you can see the confident and excellent Lu Mingfei who has been strictly trained since childhood, has top-notch resources, is no longer bullied, has parents around him, and is confident. We can also see that after the exchange of lives, the bad boy gradually evolved in this direction from the bad boy. You can also see that his father is still alive and by his side. Although his family is not rich, he is still happy and full of real life. Although he has the same ambivalence as normal people in the rebellious period, it is this kind of psychology that makes the original Chu Zihang come alive in the author's works. No one is destined to be extraordinary, everyone's character is caused by their own experiences. Even the same person may have completely different personalities due to two completely different experiences. This also allows us to see the multiple possibilities of cultivating the same flower in different ways. I feel this book is very amazing. Logically speaking, it should be given an S, but the current number of chapters is too small, and I am not sure whether the subsequent plots can maintain the current level. So overall, my rating for this book is s- When there are more chapters later, I hope to advance to S or even S+

It's nice to read, and the writing is also very flavorful, but the description of Lu Mingfei in the dragon world is a bit too wordy. In fact, everyone has read too many novels about an outstanding Lu Mingfei making up for his past regrets. It can be seen that the author is a little tired now. After all, this It's easy to start writing about a topic, but it's not easy to write about it. I'll give you some ideas so that they can change it every day or for a period of time. I feel that what everyone wants to see more is the collision and friction of ideas between the same people with different experiences. I also want to see the follow-up of Chu Xia in the ordinary world.

The flipping of the mirror is irreversible. Sakura in the original world was finally able to see the vast world of dragons after living in misery for more than ten years. As a result, she woke up and returned to a world without dragons (tentatively) to face the pressure of the college entrance examination, not to mention that the original person in this world was a god of learning. . It's really hard to think about this. Apart from that, there is no doubt that the storyline is excellent and the writing is at the top of all Tomato's dragon fan fiction. There is no doubt about this.

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Maybe the Dragon Clan fans have read too much, but they prefer the daily life here. If Lu Mingfei lived in a world without Dragon Clan, what kind of story would they have? I hope the author can write more content like this.

I have been reading Dragon Clan and his fanfics for so many years. This is the first one at the beginning. It really made me happy. The writing is so good and it gave me a feeling of what Dragon Clan should look like in my mind. Support me and wait for me to give you some gifts. Don't stop updating.

The most difficult thing about multi-line narrative is to express and advance the plot reasonably. At present, the author has made certain compromises for this. The relationship between the two worlds should not be a simple parallel world. The writing style has a diluted dragon feeling. Overall, it still has great potential.

There is no time to mourn for the poor boy Lu Mingfei. Next up is the mirror world of the Dragon Clan. He is the first in the high school entrance examination. He taught himself many foreign languages ​​and grew up with his parents. The only one in Chen Wenwen's heart is Bai Yueguang. He is the best friend of the little girl. The one Zhao Menghua looks up to. He is the child of another family, the independent and powerful Lu Mingfei! Personally, I feel that the early stage may look a bit messy. The author did not handle the early planning well. For example, it is difficult to distinguish Lu Mingfei in the two parallel worlds. Although the distinction is made later, it is a bit too late. This should be the reason for the low score. But the flaws are not hidden, the characters are well conceived, people are products of the environment, and the protagonists who grow up in different environments also have different personalities. The author uses parallel worlds to construct different protagonists, and then interchanges the original protagonists. It can be said that it is really unique. The characters are very consistent with the original work, and the writing is really great. It makes me feel like reading Jiangnan's "Dragon Clan". I have seen a lot of cool articles in Tomato, and I have also seen books with different styles. I think Tomato can be regarded as a good book.

The reason for the five stars is that this is indeed a good book. There are no problems with the novelty of the plot or the characterization of the characters, but there are still some personal perception issues. First of all, the original book looks awkward for me, and the characters always have an OOC feeling. The plot is very different from the original book. Secondly, the brackets after the names of the characters in the two worlds are a bit awkward. Although it can better handle the readers to distinguish the characters and figure out the relationship between the characters, I personally think it is not very good for immersive experience of the plot. It's always awkward to read an advertisement in the middle of a novel. Thirdly, the relationship between the characters is personally very painful. Because I am a pure lover, I have to consider the relationship between the lovers of the two-world characters in the future, such as whether Xia Mi and his senior brother are considered superior to each other. If Eriyi falls in love with Lu Mingfei later, which world will she fall in love with? How will the author handle the emotional line between Caesar and Nono? Finally, I personally think that the author's writing style has changed a bit from the previous books. The writing style of this book is a bit Western-style. But despite my many personal flaws, the subject matter of this book is indeed interesting and the logic is relatively smooth.