I’ll Be a Knight Even in Another World

The plot has a smooth rhythm, the subject matter is good, and you can read it. But language always plays a role. If it is a Western fantasy style, don't use very local vocabulary, such as folks, salary, coward, and local idioms, etc. (Solving this is very simple, just throw the gpt and check it again). Aze can be more local, but there was a chapter where he suddenly made a statement that made me crazy. When I saw this, I went crazy. Overall flaws are not concealed

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is more focused. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are in the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates on scriptures are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

The author takes this work very seriously. The plot is fascinating, the details are detailed, the combat descriptions are smooth and innovative, and the characters are vividly portrayed.

It's really great, but when you think about it, a lot of people died.

I don't know if you have read the original novel of King of the Immortal. The excitement of this book has been equated with King of the Immortal in my heart. When reading, you can easily sink into this story. The supporting characters are also well portrayed, without any feeling of supporting characters. It feels like they can become the protagonists without the book.

Darkest Dungeon + Souls Series + Goblin Slayer

Soul Travel + Dark Dungeon, the ancestor came to find slaves to become a god again

Gua! It's Soul 5! Is there a female protagonist? I just finished reading the first volume. The author is born evil. Life is tiring. How can I read a foreign persimmon and a knife😡

If not, my lord, my brother, is dead?

It's very nice, but Aze's character design should be improved.