The Last Rays of the Rhine
莱茵河的残阳
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 1.8M Words
- Genre
- Historical
- Subgenre
- Historical & Ancient
- Updated
- 4mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
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Has Anyone Written Their Own Novel? Let Me Check It Out!
Are there any? Are there? (￣∇￣) Let me take a peek!
New Writers, Come On In
It's so upsetting to keep seeing the stats barely change. The reader count doesn't go up at all, and there isn't a single comment. Hardly anyone reads the whole book, and by the last chapter, almost no one is still reading. New authors, let's support one another.
I’m 80,000 Words In and Only 9 People Have Read It. Anyone Doing Worse?
I want to read something similar to A Martial World Big Shot Falls in Love with Me. I have been writing for a long time. Maybe it is just my own passionate effort, because absolutely no one is continuing to read it.
My Story Flopped. Please Save Me 😭😭
Looking for books like Heartbeat Never Lies. It’s doing so badly, sob sob sob, please save it and leave a comment!
Follow for Follow, Likes for Likes (Book Recommendations Welcome)
I reply to every comment. Like once, get two likes back.
Anyone Writing a New Story? We Can Review Each Other's Work.
Historical Fiction: No Nonsense Allowed
It doesn’t have to be completely historically accurate, but at least don’t make it ridiculous. I want power struggles and political maneuvering that make sense. People shouldn’t just get confused all the time and believe the protagonist at first sight. The language doesn’t need to be perfectly period-appropriate, but please don’t throw in internet slang and memes at every turn.
I’ve Noticed a Problem: Most New Books Are Extremely Lackluster
Any New Books? I'll Give Them Five Stars!
I want to read books like "Myriad Transmigrations: After Turning Into a Phone, I Enjoyed Every Perk". Support new writers and let’s keep each other going. This similar title is actually my own book, so if you can, please give it five stars too ≥﹏≤
Historical Novels About the Holy Roman Empire, Byzantium, Rome, and the Second German Empire
Looking for books similar to "A History of World Empires: The Austro-Hungarian Empire".
Any Books by New Authors? Let's Review Each Other's Books, Give Five Stars, and Add Them to Our Shelves
Looking for books like "The Cannon Fodder Characters' Beloved Little Princess". Something like "The Fool's Reversal" or with a cover like Yuan Dazhuang's. They're so cute.
Historical Novels Set in Europe
Stories set in ancient or modern-era Europe, but not contemporary times. No characters getting dumber for the plot, and a solid grasp of history. European history, not Chinese historical fiction.
Reader comments 7
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The description is very delicate, the description of the environment, the actions, and the details are very delicate, as if he was born in a major. The only drawback is that he should not write too many sublimated words in each chapter (especially when planting wheat), it is too much.
There is a reason why few people have read this book. First of all, the literary talent is indeed good, and the emotional descriptions are very delicate. However, the problem is that it is too delicate, too slow and too soft, which will undoubtedly give people a very pretentious feeling, which is the so-called "literary youth disease". Some minor historical errors are irrelevant. For an online novel, the biggest problem is that the pace of the book is too fatal. Modern people don't even want to read classics slowly. The advancement of your story is too slow. The audience's enthusiasm will be exhausted by about twenty chapters at most. At this time, the article cannot provide new explosive points, and of course it will become dull.
Well, the writing is quite good. The protagonist is not weak at first, but gradually he becomes a little stronger. Moreover, he is one of the few novels in Tomato that writes about the last years of Western Rome. Most of them are about Eastern Rome.
It's good to read. I really like the Roman text. Good luck to the author [plus one on the bookshelf]
It's great, very historical, and it's about the late Western Roman period that few people have written about. I've followed it up. After reading it for a while, I felt that the writing structure of each chapter was a bit too repetitive, the lyrical content was a bit too much, and I felt a bit tired of aesthetics. My sister's clues were also a bit confusing.
The writing is good, but sticking to the main theme can easily lead to fatigue. I need to polish the narrative more. Come on. There are very few historical novels about Western Rome, I hope they won't be unfinished
Very well written