
Naruto & Sasuke's Inaction: A Blueprint from Me and Madara
鸣佐不作为,我和斑爷给打个样
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.1M Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 8mo ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
Other names
- When Naruto and Sasuke Are Useless, Madara and I Crush Boruto鸣佐无能,我和斑爷爆杀博人传Former title · until Oct 2026
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It simply restores the original Naruto. You can see all kinds of wonderful ninjutsu and intricate chess games in it. Don't miss it if you pass by. Sister Juan's book is so good to read. This is simply a unique Naruto fanfic. It makes up for the regret of Boruto. I can actually read this novel in my lifetime without any regrets. The new ninjutsu settings for Naruto are amazing. People can't help but wonder, can this really be written by a human?
The beginning of the chapter is okay, except that some readers of The Crimson King thought they had discovered a poisonous point, but in fact it was deliberately foreshadowed by the author, and the two people were criticized by name, Naruto and Sasuke.
I asked why it was so familiar, and it turned out to be Sister Juan's book (if you don't know Sister Juan, you can search for Naruto: The Two Kamui Obito at the Beginning, one of the few books with a 9.2 Rating in Naruto fan fiction)
Divine book! It's truly a divine book! The third young master of the Tang family was about to cry when he saw it, and Tiancan Tudou was amazed when he saw it! This is the reincarnation of the Four Great Classics, the leader of the literary world in the 21st century! "Holy Ruins"? I lost some of my literary talent in front of it! "Dou Po"? I owe it some connotation! "Zhu Xian"? In front of it, my feelings fade away! "Covering the Sky"? In front of it, I lost three cents of my imagination! "Buddha"? Half of the layout is missing in front of it! This is a once-in-a-century classic of online writing! The greatest literary masterpiece of the 21st century! From Luo Guanzhong, Shi Naian, Wu Chengen, Cao Xueqin, to Kong Mo Laozhuang, Shixian Shisheng, Sansu Jiaxuan; from Qin Emperor Hanwu, Tang Zongzu Songzu, Genghis Khan, to Sakyamuni, Plato, Copernicus, Aristotle - who can read it without being amazed?! This book by the author is truly the work of heaven and man! The writing is brilliant and the rhetoric is exquisite. It inherits the style of the Wei and Jin Dynasties and promotes the charm of the Tang and Song Dynasties. It is deeply penetrating! It is truly a blessing to read this book in my lifetime! However, after reading this book, a feeling of sadness suddenly emerged: If I never have the chance to see such a masterpiece again in the future, what would be the point of my life? What's the point of my life?! Fortunately! Make a decision immediately and put it on your bookshelf! A restless heart can only find a moment of peace. Otherwise! If these masterpieces are covered in dust and the world cannot see them, wouldn't it be a waste of resources and the author's efforts?! After a battle between heaven and man, I finally made up my mind: sacrifice the small self to fulfill the greater self! This book review is dedicated to everyone in the world! This book must be held up to the sky again and again, so that the whole world will know it!
This novel is so well written, it perfectly combines a sense of warmth and privacy. It has a tender feeling. Although it is said to be Naruto, it gives me a feeling of watching daily anime and a feeling of daily writing. It may be that my vocabulary is too small and I can't even find words to describe it! Perfectly made up for my regrets about Naruto. It's a pity that Itachi-gami doesn't have anyone else, it's really nothing
Alas, let's give it five stars first. The author's writing is indeed very interesting, and I enjoyed reading it in the early and middle stages. But in the later stage, Nazuo and Sakura Hina... Were unable to explain in words. Reading this book, it's okay to take the perspective of the protagonist, but it's not suitable for those who like Naru Sa Sakura Hina, like me. I stayed up late to see the part about the god style... Touki, who represents Hinata's dark personality, and for revenge, Naruto is pure green. I was almost heartbroken when I saw it, not to mention other things. I originally thought that in the middle of the game, Narusa would be able to change his past and fight against powerful enemies with the protagonists, Madara and Obito. But the image Naruto has always created is that he is as stupid as a donkey, making mistakes again and again. Every time when he wanted the truth, there would always be a cross step to make Naruto continue to make mistakes. All in all, it makes the original Naruso fans uncomfortable to watch. All I can say is that the characterization in this article is like this. This is the first time I read a fanfic in such detail. I can't say anything about the logic of the writing. It's really excellent. Anyway, that's the same sentence. I don't recommend it for Naruso fans. It's only suitable for taking the perspective of the male protagonist of Shuangwen. In the early and middle stages, we can see the regrets of Madara and Obito. Sigh... It made me so heartbroken to read the latest chapter all night long. Naruto, Hinata and Sasuke and Sakura, two beauties, neither of them died well. I won't say more about Hinata, Midori and Naruto... Sigh.
Sister Juan's writing is as good as ever, and each book has a different setting. The story is novel, humorous, and an authoritative work of Naruto fan fiction. Unfortunately, except for the twin Kamui, the rest of the endings are not very good.
In this battle, Susanoo combined with the pupil technique to synchronize the user's ninjutsu. It's simply amazing. The creativity of Sister Maki is six, what a genius. Those who give low scores in the comment area generally give negative reviews to all other Naruto stories. They are obviously trying to suppress the scores of other Naruto story creators. I also write Naruto stories myself. Sister Juan's writing style is really the strongest I have ever seen on Tomato. Her innovative ninjutsu and pupil techniques are also the best. Even the description of the emotional lines between the characters is top-notch.
I must support Sister Juan's new book! I hope it has a reasonable ending this time Hey, as a loyal reader of the volume, I think I really have to give up this time. I vaguely remember my surprise when I saw the twin gods. Although the writing is a bit immature, it has a good ending. The Return of Naruto is my favorite book. It accompanied me throughout my boring high school career. It can be seen that Sister Juan's writing skills have improved a lot in this book. The actions, actions and dialogues of the characters are very consistent with the original work. It reaches its peak in the Indra chapter. Even if it is often interrupted in the later period and the ending is hasty, this book is still very good. The Return of Sasuke is considered to be the pinnacle of Sister Juan. It not only has the advantages of The Return of Naruto, but also the description of big scenes, the control of rhythm, etc. Are all at their peak. Unfortunately, it still fell apart in the later stages. Even though every book has flaws, it is still possible to see Maki's love and understanding of Naruto and Tomato's authority as the number one Naruto fanfic. But this book Chen was quite disappointing to me. I started reading it when it only had about 20 pages. I don't know why this book, which I used to have such good pacing, was so slow to write! So much nonsense! The character's personality is also broken! The writing style is completely different from the previous books, not even as good as the cubs and Shisui that I think are trainees. Maybe Sister Juan has not changed, but I have changed as a reader. The books I read anymore cannot give me the same feeling as before. Hey, goodbye Juan
As a long-time fan of Sister Juan's books and a man who has read Double Divine Power 7, I would like to call this book the strongest and most styled book after Double Divine Power. The plot is interlocking and very exciting. Alas, Sister Juan, maybe life after marriage is not easy, she was a bit too devoted in writing, and ended up going high and low.