
Out of Control on the Battlefield: His Heart Beats Only for Me
战地失控:他的心跳只为我颤
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 424k Words
- Genre
- Modern Romance
- Subgenre
- Modern Romance High-Concept
- Audience
- Female
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
227Reads
123Chapters
11Listens
17.6kReads · all time





I go, it's so beautiful, the scene descriptions and the psychology of the characters are all well written! The results of every major event have reversals and the tension of a glimmer of hope! Really, I haven't seen such a beautiful book in a long time! The male protagonist's paranoia and possessiveness and the emotional changes between the male and female protagonists transitioned very naturally. When writing some scenes, I would also be nervous for them. I would like to give a small suggestion, that is, I feel that the transition of the event is a bit unnatural, there is suspense but I forgot to fill in the holes, and some parts are a bit vague. I only understand it after reading it. I hope it can be improved a lot. It is just my own personal opinion. [Blowing kiss] [Admiration] [Love] Overall, it is really creative and new, and it attracts me!
It's very beautiful. I love the characters of the male and female protagonists. Why are there so few of them? The emotional lines are also well written.
Very good article
The beginning is full of tension
It's beautiful. I haven't seen such a good book in a long time.
It's so good to watch. The plot has ups and downs and so on. It's very well written.