A Stunning Immortal Journey: From Shut-In to Primordial Spirit Powerhouse

It's pretty good. It doesn't have any big bad points. It's a bit more traditional fantasy. But I have a suggestion for the author: "If the protagonist has an incarnation, it's best not to be a man." Otherwise, it will be a bad point [eat melon] [eat melon]

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It's well written and quite novel. It has three female protagonists with different genders, a virgin, a witch, and a robot. It's quite interesting. There is currently no trend of marriage changes, the three heroines should be in love with each other. But it's a bit strange why the heroine is still serving as the clan leader. The writing about family content should not be the main line, otherwise it should be a family cultivation article. The map could be bigger, and there are not enough group characters. Is there a second male lead with a more distinct role? The author's writing is a bit sexually repressed. I was very excited when I watched it. There is no doubt that he has enough control. Of course it's free, so come on, author.

The more I write, the more exciting it becomes. It has the potential to be a great master. I look forward to the author's subsequent updates! I feel that the author can slightly revise the previous part if he has time, otherwise some readers will be screened out by the excessive description of mental activities and appearance in the previous part. It's a pity that I can't watch it anymore. It's all a perverted plot. It's so embarrassing to watch, it makes me sick to my stomach, goodbye [salute]

It has a bit of a girly flavor, but it's neither bad nor good. Friends who are book lovers can add it to their collection. Forget it, stop reading, Shennong is dead [Petrochemical]

Too over the top! The setting of Otaku's Counterattack on the Immortal Path is super interesting, the plot is compact and not procrastinating, the protagonist's growth line is clear and passionate, and the writing is also online. Xianxia fans should jump right in! Big reminder to the author!

Single Lily getting married? One chapter a day is a bit too little

Not bad, not bad. Although it is a bit boring, the logic is rigorous and it is not awkward to read. It is just right to pass the time...

Very good, very beautiful. The heroine is very powerful, with one soul and three bodies. It just feels like the characters are missing a bit!

The writing is okay, but the author is a bit dazzling and depressing