I Made Up a Story Right from the Start

Overall, it's pretty good, with very few plot holes, but I still prefer stories without romantic pairings (this is just my personal preference). It doesn't affect the writing quality, so it's still quite good. It was originally a 5-star rating, but I missed one, so I'm adding it now.

There are a few minor flaws, but nothing serious. The only issue is that Zhou Ze and Zhou Ling's characters seem too similar; we haven't yet seen their individual characteristics clearly. Initially, these two characters were quite different, but after the author wrote about them each being paired with their respective partners, they started to seem almost identical. 🥺

A polite review: The early chapters were a bit confusing, but then I realized it was all foreshadowing, which made it a little disorganized. The protagonist is the "nanny" type, and the romance develops very quickly; they usually confess or get together after only 3-5 chapters of knowing each other. The pacing is just too fast. Okay, that's my feeling now, after reading 46 chapters.

It's alright. I initially liked the personality of the person with the alternate account next to Xiaohua, but I don't know why, as the teacher wrote more, the personalities of the four alternate accounts became very similar, lacking significant differentiation. This is a minor drawback. They seem to have very similar personalities, which negates the point of using pseudonyms, but overall it's alright, so four stars.

It's so good! I hope the male lead doesn't just limit himself to the world of tomb raiding. One thing I felt was that the main characters' romance felt a bit unnatural. They just started dating like that; he was quite clueless at first, but then, wasn't Xie Yuchen supposed to be raised like a child? How could he fall in love after not seeing her for years? The romance felt unnatural, like artificial syrup.

Keep it up, author! It's a BL (Boys' Love) story, so don't let that affect your initial rating. Read the synopsis; let's build a long-term relationship. Good luck! 😘😘

It's super good-looking, just my type! They'll each have a boyfriend first, then they'll all get together later—isn't that just like a series of slices? Hahaha!

I initially followed this book as it was being serialized, then forgot about it. Now I've come back to read it again and found that the author seems to have made quite a few changes; some of the plot points I remembered don't match up. But it's still enjoyable, so I'll just treat it as a reread.

It's really good! The story is captivating, the logic is quite sound, and every couple is so adorable!!! 😏😏🥰🥰🥰

That looks great! You're doing well, you're excellent!