I Made Up a Story Right from the Start

Overall it's pretty good, with very few pitfalls, but I still prefer the one without cp (this is my personal preference) and it doesn't affect writing, so it's still very good. It was originally 5 stars, but I missed one, so I'll add it now.

There are a lot of minor quibbles, but nothing major. There is one thing, it feels like the characters of Zhou Ze and Zhou Ling are different, but the characteristics of the vests themselves have not yet been seen. At the beginning, the two vests were different in character. When the author wrote that after the vests were with their own CPs, the two vests became like one [grievance] By the way, Zhou Ze and Zhou Ling are both nanny-type vests. They cook, do housework, refill tea and water, and protect their loved ones. They do almost everything they can do [face covering]

Polite review, I read it a bit confusingly in the early stages, and then I realized that it was all foreshadowing, so it was a bit confusing to read. Moreover, the main character is a nanny type, and the relationship line is very fast. Basically, after 3 or 5 chapters, you can confess your love or get together, but the pace is very fast. Okay, now this is how I feel after reading Chapter 46, and then the whole article is also very slow, and it takes more than 40 chapters to enter the plot of King Lu's Palace. (It's the nanny type. One vest matches one protagonist group) And the little flowers written in the early stage are a bit annoying, and I don't really like this type. The protagonist undergoes a big change at the beginning. Everything has changed, all the way down. Then, in addition to the protagonist's reputation, February Red Queen found a bodyguard to accompany his apprentice for 10 years. As a result, the protagonist works as a nanny for someone. She is the kind of person who is very annoying anyway. She is a bit supercilious. Ah, after knowing her for so many years, she is still the little flower that the protagonist protects. Because the protagonist doesn't like to show her face, she doesn't let him see her face. February Hong guessed what the protagonist was like and had all kinds of suspicions. Xiaohua also has him. I don't know which chapter it is in, but it's the first few chapters anyway. Xiaohua hasn't seen his face in a few years, so she feels a little unsafe after all. The protagonist completed the task given by the system and disappeared for about a week. After Xiaohua sent the protagonist away, he went to look through the protagonist's bag. It's just very irritating to watch, it pisses me off to death, and I signed a 10-year contract and then wanted someone else to renew it, which is a bit suspected of moral kidnapping. When I wrote about the blind man and the protagonist's other vest, who is also the master of the vests, the writing style was very beautiful, the emotions were inexplicable, and it passed quickly. It's not bad at all, it's pretty good. I think it's okay, it's pretty good to drink, and the character isn't annoying at all. It's just a sunny and cheerful character. Later on, the main character, the vest, will break up and become a dark and yandere character. He doesn't do anything annoying. Moreover, the protagonist and Wu Xie were also the first to fall in love, and it was Zhenggong Aaa! ! Just quit. The teacher's writing is very beautiful. It's because I'm a picky eater and can't eat anymore. (You're right, I'm currently in a genderless state, my mother is healthy, and I don't have a pee or mirror at home) [laugh][laugh][cry][cry]

It's okay. I liked the character of the vest next to Xiaohua at first, but I don't know why. The teacher wrote on the back that the characters of the four vests are very similar, and there is no big difference. This is a small surprise. I feel like their personalities are very similar. It doesn't have the meaning of a vest, but overall it's okay, so four stars.

It looks so good, but I hope the male protagonist will not stop in the world of tomb robbers At one point, I felt that the emotional scenes of the protagonist were not very natural, so I talked about it. He was a straight man in the front, but he was the straight guy in the back. Wasn't it like a child to raise Xie Yuchen? Falling in love after not seeing each other for a few years? Emotional scenes are unnatural, like industrial syrup

Come on, Zhou All, a male-male writer, don't get a bad score just because of this, read the introduction, the water will flow, come on [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's super pretty, and it suits my taste. I arrange a boyfriend for each of them first, and then we put them together later. Isn't this a perfect slice, hahaha

I was following the serialization of this book at the beginning, but then I forgot about it. Now I came back to read it, and found that the author seemed to have made some big changes, and some of the plots in my impression were not consistent, but it is still good, so I will read it again.

It's very interesting to watch, the story is exciting, the logic is quite rigorous, and every pair of CPs is a hit! ! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][admiration][admiration][admiration]

Looks good, okay, you are excellent