Pity the South

The first time I reviewed a book on Tomato, I stayed up all night to tie it. The author has been too hasty in developing some plots and even made them a bit abrupt. For example, why Cheng Jue suddenly fell in love with Nannan. Perhaps he drew warmth and long-lost concern from her, but I think this emotional line can be paved a little more to make the transition more natural. However, the above problems do not affect my perception of the whole book. I like the author's control of details. For example, during the campus period, when the male protagonist expresses his feelings, I think that is a highlight. The description of the two's heartbeat reminds me of the feeling I had when I first fell in love. Also, the author's way of inserting narratives is very clever. I think this is a highlight and should not be changed. Sometimes reading requires setting up some "traps" to ensure the reader's desire for discovery and space for secondary creation. I think this is the charm of imagination during the reading process. And I don't know if other readers have discovered that the author always reasonably inserts the memories of the male and female protagonists' past plots into the main story line. There are many small correspondences between memories and reality. It is these small foreshadowings or small details that touch people's hearts even more. The plot is a traditional campus love and reunion, and the flower of the high mountain is willing to surrender for love. But what is commendable is that the author is willing to dig out the details. The early encounters pulled each other apart, and the psychological description of the trial was very good. This is why I decided to stop and finish it. I hope the author will update ten times a day! In recent chapters, I feel that the author's plot setting is a bit too hasty and perfunctory. I think it is unnecessary to use the so-called heroine and the male supporting character to be framed and sleep naked on the same bed. This kind of story where the heroine is mute and eats coptis and suffers unspeakable suffering in order to abuse the woman and increase the drama and conflict. Maybe ancient romance novels did not bother to use this kind of bad plot. It is entirely possible to conceive a new plot to promote the development of the story, but the author chose the laziest way. This kind of plot even makes the male protagonist's character collapse a little. Based on what the author has written before, if something like this happens to the female protagonist, I think the male protagonist's first reaction will be distressed and think about the female protagonist's situation. After all, too many things have happened between them, and they have long been connected. It is impossible for the male protagonist to react like this. However, the author insists on using such a plot to torture women. He insists that the male protagonist shows this reaction because he cares too much. It can barely make sense, but it is so different from the previous character that it is somewhat disconnected. Another problem is that it is too hasty. All the male supporting characters revolve around the heroine unconditionally without any foreshadowing. For example, does the commander like the heroine? Why do you care so much about the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist? Doesn't a dignified commander have anything else to do? The characters are thin and lack soul and charm. As I said before, why did Cheng Jue fall in love with the heroine all of a sudden? There was no foreshadowing and he was just a tool to serve the development of the plot. The author wrote these chapters too hastily, I hope he can make some changes. That's how I feel right now. The detailed description of the campus stage is really well written. I hope the author will work more slowly and carefully in the later chapters.

The emotions are very delicate. I hope I can torture the male protagonist.

After reading it, it was okay. The rating is a little lower. There are no highlights for me. From the introduction, you can see that the early tone of this kind of reunion is to abuse the female protagonist. The male protagonist hates the female protagonist for abandoning her and wants to take revenge on the female protagonist. Although I want to beat the male protagonist in the previous part, it is undeniable that his love and care are obvious from a God's perspective. Moreover, this separation setting has many years later in the routine of the male protagonist counterattacking the female protagonist's bankruptcy. , Many other male protagonists grew up relying on hatred to take revenge on the female protagonist, but this male protagonist actually maintained his original intention of working hard to match the female protagonist and his adoptive mother. In this regard, the emotional shaping of the male protagonist is relatively good, and even if the status disparity is reversed, the male protagonist always puts himself in the lower position in the relationship, and is attached to the affectionate and dedicated male protagonist. Although I cried over the love between the male and female protagonists in the second volume, I think the ending in the previous volume will be fine after they get back together. The ending will be happier then, while the finale will be a bit regretful. Those plots would be better used to write about the daily life after marriage, daily life during pregnancy, and the daily life of the male protagonist raising a baby.

I stayed up late to tie it. It's very beautiful. The author's writing is very delicate and the details are in place. Please update it ten times a day.

Seeing this, I can't help but leave a comment anymore😭 because it's too bitter. Two little bitter gourds. Our kind-hearted Nan Nan is so good, so kind, so innocent o(╥╥)o It can be said that she is a ray of light during the male protagonist's school days. The second male lead is also very good (◍•ᴗ•◍)

This is the first novel that made me cry. The content is also good. Those who like to read reunion after long separation➕ can read it. It won't be a loss if you invest in it.

It's very interesting. The only flaw is that the updates are too slow. But I feel like the finale is coming soon. Maybe the author hasn't conceived the future of Lian Nan and A Heng yet, so he can only wait slowly.

Very interesting, I like what the author wrote ❤️

I really want Cheng Jue and Lian Nan to be together! ! Ahhhhhhh

It's so good, but I just didn't see enough. Can the ending be a little more sweet?