Starting with Bai E, I Set Off a Wave of Salvation

Great. At present, it is not only watching the movie, but also the reaction of all forces. The description is also very good. The pace is fast, and the plot of the movie can be understood in detail When watching the movie, let people know the general background and development process. I only watched a short section of the movie, and not all the characters' dialogues were written out. Come. I won't comment on the former, but the latter requires a hundred cards to start. For someone like me, It's not very friendly to people who just want to see the highlights. Write from the direction of Danheng's diary I have never seen a movie viewing system, and this can be said to be the first one.

The author's writing is really great. It's the first time I've seen such a non-OOC movie viewing article in Tomato, and he can explain the plot clearly very well. Will the author write more PVs of Bai E in the future? I really want them to see it. After Bai E went through some things, he took the initiative to understand him and help him. By the way, when will Bai E wake up? So looking forward to it! I don't know what will change. (Don't sleep all the time. I really want to see what happens when watching the movie on the screen, and then everyone cares about Bai E who is still around them in reality. Wow, oh, oh, oh, we novices must be happy!) The author must stick to it, this is really the best I have seen. I will always support you! ! This plot is really super awesome! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The author is really good at writing. I have read a lot of books, but the author's writing is the best. His entire itinerary is arranged very well. I think this book can become a masterpiece for you. And given your ability, I think you can become a great writer if you write two more books.

The details are still not that appropriate. The author has an attitude, please see the content for details The narration rhythm is okay, and after all, it is a movie viewing genre, so the requirements are not that high. I don't really support the author's point of view. After all, the world view of the Fate Universe is like this. The strong will degrade the weak. I can only say that I understand and respect it. Compared with other similar articles, there is no big advantage, but there is no big disadvantage either. It can be seen that the author seems to be Chef Bai, which appropriately increases the proportion of Bai E, but after all, he is the protagonist and has little impact. You can turn over two pages to read the narrative in the early stage. It's hard to describe. I personally think it's not the most suitable. The mid-term is okay, but the early stage is too detailed and the mid-term is lacking. The plot change in 3.7 Is controversial. The author changed the direction. I don't support it. But still, I understand and respect it. The direction has not changed to the extent that I can't stand it. I can only say that it is not the best in my heart. In addition, please change the author's profile, and delete it first if you want to make a big deal for the future. It seems that some people have already given bad reviews because of this. I don't really understand such people, but they do exist.

Okay, okay, it's very well written [Like]

The playback order is relatively good, the details are appropriate, and the parts I want to watch are perfectly written. However, in the later period, I felt that the focus of the audience was a bit strange in some plots. It was very uncomfortable to ask questions in many places, and some plots that should be touching were really emotionless [face covering]

I feel the writing is very good (if you want to read pure and refreshing writing, don't read it)

There are advantages, but I feel that the descriptions of some pvs and animations are a bit too little, and the descriptions of dialogues between powerful figures from all sides are a bit too much. A pv is analyzed frame by frame, and one person saying two sentences in one sentence is too affecting the perception, and it is intermittently uncomfortable. I skipped watching it, and I feel that it still needs to be strengthened. The writing is good, and the above is just my personal opinion.

Dear author, hurry up and update. I will always support you. Yours is so beautiful. Hurry up, hurry up, hurry up! Don't give up, don't stop updating.

It's hard to write about the happy land of the past in just one sentence. But Ompharos wrote it very well. Four stars for encouragement.