High Martial: I Can Control My Own Shadow

It's pretty good. There aren't too many unnecessary digressions, and the character development is quite reasonable. Actually, if there were a few more introductions and descriptions of the abilities of the people around them, their character development would be more complete. Focusing too much on the protagonist while neglecting the others would make it a bit monotonous.

A good novel is one that doesn't contain too much unnecessary dialogue.

The pacing is quite fast, which I really like. Keep up the good work, author!

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The writing should have a strong rhythm, less internal monologue, and avoid rambling and incoherent just for the sake of writing.

Well written, keep up the good work!

This is a lighthearted, enjoyable read; it really suits my taste.

It's alright, better than what I wrote.

It suits my taste

Very creative and worth staying up all night for.