A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality: My Talent Is at the Great Luo Level

This book is indeed rare. It is the best among all the people in Yishui who are trying to survive, and my girlfriend and friends are still dead before I am reborn in the apocalypse. I can confirm that it was written by the author himself, not by AI, and I am changing it myself. There was no touching of the nose, no wry smiles, and no scratching of the head. I can give it three stars just for these, not to mention that the story is pretty good, so I must give it full stars.

Be energetic and don't lose your points! ! ! The writing is very good, the rhythm of the writing is smooth, and the conflicts in the face are not too abrupt. You can make money by writing well. The main task now is to update quickly! ! ! Don't take a break. When you are at your best writing age, you should write eight chapters a day!

I thought it was just an ordinary fairy tale, but I didn't expect that the author wrote something of his own. Although I never read online novels carefully, I can still make some comments. This book has a reasonable and clear story logic chain, and even cleverly uses vague descriptions to eliminate unreasonable parts. What surprised me most is that although the author is cryptic in writing, he can have a clear sense of "the words have not been fully stated but the meaning has been reached". This, supplemented by the modified setting of time and space, is enough to make the foreshadowing fall in silence and bloom in the vastness. Talking about character creation, some people always say that there is always a woman next to the protagonist in each world, which is a poisonous point. However, considering the plot, story background setting and protagonist setting, this may be "involving the calculation of the boss", and the author in each world can have enough writing power to create a powerful and wonderful story. Even in the later stages, the author's narrative ability and the story structure can be improved. Although every story cannot be perfect and profound, it can still be said to be excellent and good. All in all, if you do not adopt the same reading and evaluation standards as for appreciating literary works, this book can be regarded as an excellent online novel about cultivating immortals with personal characteristics.

The writing is not bad, but I feel it is not as good as the previous one written by Tianxian Yongchang. At present, I see that every world I enter has to accept a woman. Although it is not included in the harem, I feel that the proportion of women is a bit high.

The book is good. The author has a way of tricking you into using mortals to cultivate immortality first, and then killing you. In the book, cultivation is covered in the guise of cultivating immortals, but the cultivation system has nothing to do with cultivating immortals. Let's talk about the cultivation system first. In the early stage, you understand the skills, and heaven gives you cultivation to help you rebel against your innate nature. After the Mahayana, a virtual immortal comes out. This cultivation system can obtain mana from the rules, which has nothing to do with immortality novels.

This book is also good-looking. Don't go to the palace, just write well. You have the possibility of becoming a god, but the first two books of those great gods did not do well. If you keep entering the palace, you will enter a vicious cycle and lose the trust of readers. For example, in the snow, why do such beautiful books become famous only in the later stages? It is because the steward often enters the palace, so many books are devoted to raising books at the beginning.

The more I look at it, the more familiar it becomes. It smells like a fairy universe. When I look at the work, it's really

It's almost finished, let's leave a review This is an invincible novel. The main plot is that the protagonist relies on his own awakened talent to take off, becomes stronger when encountering strength, and becomes invincible along the way (not that he is at full level at the beginning, but invincible at every stage of practice); it is very good to read as a pastime. In general, out of 10 points, it can be scored as 7.8. Considering that it is not to the liking of some people, 7.5 Is a more reasonable score. The current 6.9 Is a bit low. I think the reason for the low score is that on the one hand, it is difficult for readers to break away from the constraints of classic prehistoric novels and to accept other settings that are different from the novels they have read; on the other hand, most people cannot stand the protagonist being wronged. After all, everyone comes to read the novel, even if it is a clone, even if it is a simulation, even if the person who is wronged is not the protagonist himself. (To be continued)

I am a fan of "Tianxian Yongchang". It is a great book in every sense. The rhythm of this book is not stable yet, but I still hope that the author can keep writing...

It is recommended to write more books than Old Eunuch. Tianxian Yongchang wrote it very well. It is recommended to invest in online writing software like Qidian. There are too many comments here looking for trouble.