An S-Rank Alpha on a Desolate Planet: I Picked Up the Imperial Marshal

The content is quite good and quite attractive. If it is improved in the future, it will probably get a rating of 8.5 Or above, but my personal feeling is (the Al feeling in it is very heavy, especially Chapter 6.9.10, Etc... Most of the endings feel heavier, and the description inside can be less, but the communication content can be More, it must be simple and clear) Don't ask me how I know, I have written a little bit before, and a lot of the content Al generated has that feeling, and I didn't continue to write it later. The sisters are very powerful and super awesome. This is just a small personal opinion. Don't blame me if you don't like it [Like][Like][Like]

It's very interesting. It's different from the ordinary Zerg sweet pet stories, and it's closer to the process of two powerful and independent individuals who were originally cold and independent learning to love, achieve, and grow from each other. The author's writing style is good, and the details of the two strong characters are well described, so that you can see the real strong person in front of you, instead of just saying that he is strong and then disappearing. Although the protagonist's emotional development is fast, it is also progressive and not abrupt, rather than falling in love with him inexplicably as soon as he meets her. All in all, it is a very good new book, at least the 30 chapters that have been updated so far are very good.

The characters in the story are all very good, very warm, but some paragraphs are very strange, with a slight inhuman feeling, so I summarize, describe, and summarize again. It is strange and has a sense of emotionless narrative, but some paragraphs are very warm,...,,,, The discomfort of division

The writing is very good, and it feels like writing a novel right after writing a red-headed document. It looks really serious. It's different from what I've seen before, very fresh

The experience in some places is not very good. How to describe it? I feel that the teacher's description is too straightforward, just to highlight this theme, which makes me feel that the transition is particularly blunt in some places, just like the protagonist's character is as cold and hard-hearted, but I have to say that most of them have redeeming qualities, teacher, come on

In fact, I personally don't really like childbirth stories. Generally, I won't read some of them directly, because I feel that after having a child, most of the focus is on the child and it has little to do with the two protagonists, so I don't really like reading about raising babies. But this is the first one that I can watch even after having children. Although the two protagonists are relatively cold and don't talk about love, the atmosphere of getting along is really good. There is no greasy way to express love. The relationship between the two is more like a feeling of soul compatibility and sympathy. There is a natural tacit understanding in it, which will really make people cry. I highly recommend reading it, the writing is very good, although later I felt like I was writing a diary [laughing and crying]

I've watched part of it, and it's pretty good so far. The plot doesn't drag on, and the protagonist has a mouth. I particularly don't like this reformed book review method. I skipped the book review after just reading a little, so this is the first time I give a rating after the reform of book review. I hope the author will play a more stable role. Come on

Nice. Very warm. They can stand side by side and support each other on the battlefield, and they can be steadfast and trust each other in marriage. Having a baby is not the end of the story, but an unexpected gift during the journey. The alternation of battlefield and family makes people feel that this is what home should be.

1. The author's writing style is reliable and mature (feeling a little sonorous and powerful?) 2. The plot is not procrastinating, the pace is appropriate, and the author has strong control 3. The character has a good personality, consistent with his identity, and not OOC 4.…To be added

I like the characters of the two protagonists very much, they are determined, capable and talkative! The plot advances gradually, and the emotional line develops at a reasonable pace. It doesn't feel too slow, and it's sweet but not greasy. [I'm full] The husband and wife have a tacit understanding and support each other. They rely on each other. This duo is delicious😋 I almost forgot, my favorite skin color is bad hehe [licking the screen] bronze x cold white skin