The Yandere Male Lead Gets Rejected? Back Off, I'll Take Him

It's good to read, I just like this fast-paced story about love at first sight, the male protagonist is paranoid but has a love brain, he actively pursues his wife, there are no misunderstandings, and he solves any trouble immediately and it ends in about 10 chapters! I really like the sweetness of 100% pure sugar! The most important thing is that the length of the original heroine is handled very well, not too much, especially in the third story, the length of the original heroine is just right! It only appears three times in total. Except for the first story background introduction, the other two descriptions are very little but just right!

I read the first dimension and wanted to comment. I don't like it very much. In fact, there are many such articles and the market is quite broad. However, if the author wants to compete in the same market and score higher or be more popular than other people's articles, then he needs better writing to support it, as well as plot and characters. The first dimension is quite short, only ten pictures, and the characters and plot are not attractive enough. If so, I am willing to choose other meal replacements. This is not a criticism, but a subjective evaluation. I personally think my comment is quite objective. Still need to make more progress and study! I've been reading a lot of these recently, and the ones written by others are more attractive and addictive. I think the problem with this book is that the characters are not novel enough, the details of their expressions are not enough, and the male protagonist's character is very ordinary. Although it is quite common to be crazy, it just attracts people to read. This book is a bit dry and boring. The female protagonist is very normal and beautiful. There is nothing particularly outstanding about the character.

It's not bad. What I like most is that each small world is short and concise, and can be finished in a dozen chapters. The original female protagonist has a strong sense of presence and is not too dark. There is even a small world female protagonist who is friends with the original female protagonist. The story is pure and sweet but not greasy. It is immersive and fast. The female protagonist's personality is gentle and tolerant. The male protagonist is really crazy.

I struggled over and over between four and five stars, and finally thought about it and settled on five stars. After all, it's not easy for the author to write so much. I came here for 1V1, but I found that the author's 1V1 seemed different from what I thought. In the end, I felt numb when I saw so many people. The pace is fast, and each world is completed in about ten chapters, which is very suitable for impatient people like me. Some worlds are indeed beautiful, but some worlds are really difficult to comment on. They are too unfriendly to my outlook on life and make it uncomfortable to watch. But I finished it with difficulty. The rest of it has nothing to do with the title of the book, and it is an immersive time travel. Let's see if you like it.

After watching five worlds, the heroine is relatively comfortable with it, and the male and female protagonists fall in love at first sight. The original heroine has both good and bad qualities, but she doesn't particularly steal the show. She is punished fairly quickly for bad things. There are no inexplicable difficulties and setbacks from cannon fodder that would cause myocardial infarction. Of course, in contrast to this, the story direction does not have particularly big ups and downs. The average IQ of the characters is online. For example, in the second world, the heroine was kidnapped by bandits. I was about to complain that bandits kidnapped people on the street in Beijing. It turned out that I was prepared to go fishing on purpose. The brothers of the male protagonist in the fifth world know how to read and do things they shouldn't do. They consciously create opportunities and help cover up. At first, I thought Chunzhu would be holding me back, but nothing happened at all. There are no huge flaws, and some minor issues can be forgiven because it is a pure sweet story. It's not a delicacy, it's just rice that can be eaten. Subsequent small world levels fluctuated slightly

Love at First Sight, the original heroine has a low presence in the plot, she is not entirely bad, it is super good-looking, short, fast-paced, the male protagonist is clean, the world of the heroine in it is beautiful, and the world of the heroine is super interesting [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]

In fact, the front is quite nice, those outside. When I saw the second part, I felt quite strange. The female protagonist was completely immersed. I personally don't like immersion very much, and the male protagonist was not very paranoid, but the main body of the article was still very interesting. I just skipped and read the rest. Alas, personal preferences are different, I still prefer non-immersive and non-amnesia... Sisters who like immersive can watch it

I commented on the first story after reading it. It's very interesting, especially the number of chapters and pages. This is called quick time travel. It's concise and clear. It describes the preferences of the heroine and the paranoia of the hero. The original heroine wants and regrets her face. Regardless of whether the following stories will still be like this, just based on the first story and the number of chapters, I love it.

Sangjiu, the beautiful and gentle heroine in the prosperous age, and the yandere and paranoid hero, they got together quickly, without resistance, it was love at first sight, one world, 10 chapters are quite short Basically, the male protagonist fell in love at first sight and then got together very quickly.

New heroine quickly travels + strategy for male protagonist + male is more proactive + yandere and paranoid + not evil original heroine + stunning beauty + sweet pet + 1v1 + double cleanliness + love at first sight + short plane + fast pace Mulberry wine: absorbs love